My first Maaneet FF-An Unusual Grihapravesh - Page 7

brilliant part! please do continue soon!

That was awesome but so small

I'm really sorry to hear people bashed you for your Twilight FF 😲... trust me if I read it, I would be jumping with joy because I become ECSTATIC whenever someone so much as mentions Twilight😳 😆 😉
Coming back to this FF... LOVE IT! 👏 👏 👏
I'm really enjoying all the parts till date and can't wait for more...
Although, I have one question: when will Maaneet start developing feelings for each other?
Thanks for the great update ⭐️ ; please add me to your P.M. list if possible and update asap 😃

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

<font color="#ff0033">I'm really sorry to hear people bashed you for your Twilight FF 😲... trust me if I read it, I would be jumping with joy because I become ECSTATIC whenever someone so much as mentions Twilight😳 😆 😉
Coming back to this FF... LOVE IT! 👏 👏 👏
I'm really enjoying all the parts till date and can't wait for more...
Although, I have one question: when will Maaneet start developing feelings for each other?
Thanks for the great update ⭐️ ; please add me to your P.M. list if possible and update asap 😃</font>

Thanks for the sweet words...don't worry, whether in the show or my FF, one day they will have to admit their feelings for each other...just thinking about next chapter while typing this...will definitely pm you. 😊

Chapter Nine

(Thanks for making this a hot topic-loved that red envelope sign-and for patiently waiting for Maaneet moments...the hand touching was a bit too little it seems... 😆 Really a lot of thanks. 😊 )

Dev Khurana felt that familiar twinge of annoyance as the cell phone rang.

At that moment, his wife Naintara had gone out to the balcony to talk to one of her high society friends. Dev hated accompanying her to the various parties she loved to attend.

I hope it's not that stupid Geet again... he thought, picking it up. He blew a sigh of relief. It was just his elder brother Maan.

Then he stopped. Why was Maan calling him? Had he come to know about how his latest company had folded up. His hands shaking, he answered the call. "Hello," he said, praying to God that Maan was still oblivious to his business dealings.

"Hello Dev, you got the invitation card?" Maan asked. He would have rather not have had to phone people and tell them about his marriage, but now his grandmother was complaining about laryngitis. Though Maan had no clue what blood cancer had to do with losing your voice. His grandmother had shook him off saying it was a side effect of the drugs.

It was amazing how Maan Singh Khurana never argued with what his Dadi said.

"What invitation card?" asked Dev relaxing. If it had been about Dev's sudden financial shortage, Maan would have straight away started firing questions.

"My wed, um wed-ding invitation card," said Maan hesitantly.

"Wedding?" asked Dev confused. Then the tubelight switched on. "Bro, you're getting married?"

Maan Singh Khurana felt like slapping him, but he was miles away in Canada. If Dadi wasn't so sick, he would have taken a flight there and then.

"No, I'm divorcing. Of course I'm getting married," said Maan, the bitterness in his voice clear.

"But what about that Sianna girl? Or was it Kianna?"

"It was Li-oh forget it. Anyway it's a month away and everybody who is somebody is coming."

"Who's the lucky girl?"

"Come to India and see for yourself,"Maan snapped.

"Oh poor you. Dadi likes, but you don't. I understand. She must be really boring right?"

"She's not boring," said Maan defensively. "She's okay...she's well, interesting."

"Really sanskaari and all."

"What's so wrong if she is sanskaari?" said Maan hotly. "She doesn't make a fool out of herself by wearing clothes that are half her size."

"Then one of those typical rhondu types?" asked Dev, enjoying the banter. It was a nice break from Naintara's obsessive ramblings.

"Which girl doesn't cry? I cry too sometimes."

"Bro, you cry?"

"Shut up. Look, she's not at all bad okay? She's pretty, intelligent, bubbly and-"

"Wait, wait bro. Do you like her or not?"

Maan stopped. And then he thought. And then finally he hit upon an answer.

"Look Dev, Daadi is calling me. I have to go."

And saying that, an embarassed Maan put the phone down.

Chapter Ten(Yeh, we hit the grand old zero)

While Maan was busy figuring out the mystery of whether Geet was the perfect fiance or not, Geet was on the phone, contemplating about whether to phone Hoshiarpur and tell her family about her second marriage or not. Then she stopped herself. She had broken all relations with them. She had even made sure there was no trace of them in the invitation card. But at least her father deserved to know. He must have lost all respect in the Handa family because he helped her to escape when Brij and his goons were after her. For all she knew Daarji could be subjecting him to torture that very moment. With every passing thought she felt guiltier about the situation she had left her parents in. And what about her younger sister Rano? What if she was still sitting at home, unmarried? She must have become the laughing stock in her college. "Is your sister the one who got pregnant and ran away from home?" Geet had played Chinese whispers when she was a child, and she knew it wasn't fun once you grew up.

And then, helpless as she was, the only thing she could do was to let the tears stream down her cheeks. Maan, who was passing by, still stuck in Geet Land, stopped when he saw her sitting there, crying. Then he remembered Dev's comment. "Must be the rhondu types." He shook his head. Why did he need to defend her? Dev was right. She really was the rhondu type.

And then he heard her utter a single word-"Papa".

And it brought back memories of his parents, the way they had taken care of him. Then one single drunk driver and they were gone, leaving him along with his Dadi and younger brother. And now Dadi was going too.

Wiping his suddenly moist eyes, he went and sat down next to Geet. And they both stared out the window, at the moon in the sky, a symbol of light even in complete darkness.

They looked at each other and a mutual understanding passed between them as they both acknowledged that they had the same emptiness in life.

Maan leant forward, and for one moment Geet felt he was going to kiss her.Instead he got up and stood by the window, obstructing the shining moon. And yet Geet felt that the room was not dark-because the sun was standing right in front of her.

She too went to the window and placed her hands comfortingly on his shoulder. She thought he would push them away but he let them rest there. They both stood for what seemed like hours. And suddenly Maan snapped back into reality.

Leaving Geet confused, he left the room for his own. She sat down on the bed, feeling utterly foolish. When would she learn to decipher this man?

She did not know that deep within her heart, mind and soul, she was the only person in the world who truly understood Maan Singh Khurana.

nice updates
lovely
waiting for their marriage already
hope dev's part finishes real soon and doesnt cause trouble or problems in their marriage
i hope maan stands by geet's side

please update soon

hey, but geet has not told anything about her pregnancy and all.....and she is ready for marriage, strange....
the parts were really good
loved them

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

hey, but geet has not told anything about her pregnancy and all.....and she is ready for marriage, strange....
the parts were really good
loved them

It's a fake marriage...Maan plans to separate from her as soon as Dadi is gone...but of course, this 'fake' is going to turn 'real'....warna meri ff ka point hi kya? 😆 I think a love story should not be about where they ended up, but what led them towards that point. 😊

okey, i get it.......but ofcourse dadi would be really upset after knowing the truth.....and she can feel sort of betrayed.....yet again its ur ff and u can make dadi aware of facts beforehand.....
update soon.