My first Maaneet FF-An Unusual Grihapravesh - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update!! Awww maan came to get geet back...that was really sweet of him...and I m really happy that maan still consider geet as his wife ...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon and can you plsssssss update a lil longer part next time 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note: Hey guys, I'm sorry if you are angry that the marriage was broken off. But actually, from the beginning only it was clear that it was a fake marriage so it would be broken off.

But remember guys, no one can reverse the holy rites. God still considers them married. And so should you! 😊

Also, I still need to fit in Lianna backstory as well as Maan and Geet falling in love..yes fifteen chapters are over, but i still need Geet to fall in love with Maan...and Maan is also just taking baby steps right now. (Pun definitely intended. 😃 )

P.S. Precap to next chapter: Dadi shares my views on the marriage. Nothing more or else you won't read only! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

this is some great ff you have got here

nice concept
plz continue soon
and can you please add me to your pm list
eagerly waiting for the next part
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
really gud
plz add me to ur pm list
plz continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsuM!!!!


update soon!!!


plz add me to ur PM list!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy!!
just caught up with the last 4 part!!
amazing updates!! wonder whats going to happen next??
pls cont.soon!!!!!! and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazinggg parts.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweet Sixteen

When Geet walked into the office, she expected the rumour mills to be turning at super-fast speed. She wasn't disappointed-whispers started flying across the room faster than the speed of light. Evidently Sasha had definitely kept her trap shut-in front of Maan at least.

Geet sat down at her usual table and concentrated on the files on her desk till they started looking blurred. Suddenly the phone rang and she jumped up.

She went into Maan's office with the file he had asked her and suddenly the entire Khurana family was in front of her and shouting abuses, and Maan's face was meta-morphing into that of a guy who looked like a cross between Dev and Daarji....

And then she woke up, covered in sweat.

She swallowed the lump in her throat for what seemed like the thousandth time and then went into the bathroom to freshen herself. When she came out, she saw an expensive sari laid on the bed with what seemed to be gold embroidery on the fringes and diamonds stuck on it. She looked up to see Dadimaa's emotionless face.

"You are my daughter-in-law now, so I expect you to dress like a married woman."

"But-" Geet started. "No buts. The mangalsutra and sindoor are lying in the drawer."

"Oh god am I in some saas-bahu serial?" she wondered to herself.

"What?" asked Dadi, narrowing her eyes.

Geet nodded her head like a docile bahu and felt a chill go through her, making goosebumps rise on her arm. She really was the Khurana bahu now.

As Maan was passing by to the staircase, he saw Geet in front of the mirror, putting on a pair of diamond earrings. She seemed to be having a difficulty in doing so because her hair kept coming in the middle.

As if in a trance, he walked into the room, stood behind Geet and slowly pushed the hair away, leaving her neck exposed. Feeling like she had been transported from a soap opera into a Mills and Boons novel she put on the earrings.

Then suddenly Dadimaa shouted 'Maan!!" and he jumped back. He raced out of the room before Geet could thank him.

In the Mercedes while going to office, Geet concentrated on some of the files he had handed her in order to avoid the strange look in his eye. As soon as they reached the main building of Khurana Constructions, he stepped out first, and then in a random burst of chivalry, he pulled her gently out of the car.

They walked into office together, and rather than spreading the rumours the employees were speechless. They had clearly been informed by Tasha's continuously open mouth that the marriage had been broken and Geet would be kicked out. So what was this?

Sasha fumed in fury. She thought she had caught two birds in her hand-the victory of Geet and Maan's broken marriage, and the victory of her promotion. She had already lost the first, and unknown to her, she was very close to losing the second.

Geet sat down at her usual table, and then the grinning face of Adi and Pinky appeared.

"Geet!!" the bubbly Pinky exclaimed. "Just because the shaadi is over, doesn't mean the celebrations have to stop."

"What do you mean?" asked Geet.

"We've decided we should have an after-marriage party. Then the honeymoon. And then when you'll come back, the baby shower."

"I don't understand," she said confused.

"Geet!" called out Maan. "Yes sir!" she said obediently. Adi scrunched up his nose. Who called her husband sir?

"I want the Khanna file," he said.

"Which Khanna?"

"You should know"

"Akdoo," Geet thought, "I'll teach him a lesson." And then the Geet express chugged out of Geet Land to that of Maan Singh Khurana.

"But there are so many Khannas in the world," she blabbered. "Rajesh Khanna, Vinod Khanna, Akshaye Khanna-"

"What?" asked Maan.

"Rahul Khanna-" and then she started to chuckle, which turned into a full-blown laughter outburst. And the frown on his face slowly relaxed till he began to relax too.

It looked like he had taken a psychedelic drug, to be honest.

"So you're back to your ways," he said, regaining his stern composure.

"Sir, be clear in what you say na then?" she said, giggling.

"Okay fine-I'm being clear-being my wife doesn't give you the right to do whatever you want."

Maan was on the verge of confessing his attraction for Geet. Had not he himself said it was a fake marriage?

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow nice part...at least they treat her like Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana.......muhahahaha....i love it whenever i say that......thanks for updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!! loved it!!
cant wait for next part!!
pls cont.soon!!

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