MAYUR OS!.....New OS Pg 6 updated 26/7/10!! - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonam961986

it was so soothing ..... loved it .... the words, the silence ... everything was enchanting and such things don't need an end .... it's beautiful ... truly amazing .... i am falling short of words to describe what i am feeling inside ..... it was brilliant fatima ......

thnx a lot di,
just can't describe wht i'm feeling jz reading ur comment !!
i'm like...wow was it dat beautiful....
coz i was a bit worried whether I wud be able to portray such deep feelings beautifully .....
as feeling them is different and ....expressing it to someone else is different !!
i'm kinda speechless 😊
glad you like it !
-fatima
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Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Fatima.. you have expressed all the unsaid so beautifully.... it truly fits them... seeing from both their POV's... some people are meant to be with each other.. and Mayank-Nupur are one of them.

Beautifully written!!!!!!!

hey thnx divya,
yeah it was like just nupur's pov ...and mayank did all the listening as before !
yeah if ur meant to be and ur love's pure....no matter how far you r ...no matter you don't lead a lyf together....you r indeed together....and tht love is beyond d realm of evrythng...evn time !!
tht's true love.....when u love someone....and d reciprocation doesn't matter much !
glad u liked it....😊
-fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haey sis

Both the os was just Amazing..

I liked how u explaind the emotions of nupur in d 1st os.n im more than happy that nupur accepted mayank with Kiara.

I loved d second os how nupur didnt told mayank's name....d feeling of nupur you described just awwesome.
And the reconfession was just Simple n Beautiful.

Do write more n long one..itne se kaam nai chalega.😉

Love ya
Summi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: livelygal

I want to write a long comment...but one word suffices to explain what I feel.....


omg...i'm speechless ....
thnx a lot dear !
-fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsumd

haey sis

Both the os was just Amazing..

I liked how u explaind the emotions of nupur in d 1st os.n im more than happy that nupur accepted mayank with Kiara.

I loved d second os how nupur didnt tell mayank's name....d feeling of nupur you described just awwesome.
And the reconfession was just Simple n Beautiful.

Do write more n long one..itne se kaam nai chalega.😉

Love ya
Summi

hey summi,
thnx a lot baccha 😊 for this wonderful comment !
yeah i was a bit worried about nupur's emotions...like wud I be able to do justice...glad i cud do !
abt d second os....yeah she usually dsnt say his name...yep the confession was straight from d heart...😉 !!
hmm....long one...ahh sukar mano meine itna likha...lekin Inshallah i'll go for a long one too ....
I just cudn't drag this...beauty spoil ho jati haina ?
love you too....😳
tc
fatima
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thnx a lot !
-fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazin OS fatima !!
i am completely blowed off...too good :) :)
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was beautifully written Fatima ....
Nupur's dilemma and final acceptance of Kiara was soo well brought out .!!
Keep it up my dear !!!!
WOW ... the second one is absolutely heart-warming ..... loved Nupur's descriptions of her feelings ... the way she doesn't want to name Mayank .... and finally your last words ... it JUST LOVE .... not unrequited or fulfilled....
Amazing write Up !!!!!! 👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful os....loved it

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shabnoor-



<font color="#993366">hey summi,</font>

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<font color="#993366">thnx a lot baccha 😊for this wonderful comment !</font>


<font color="#993366">yeah i was a bit worried about nupur's emotions...like wud I be able to do justice...glad i cud do ! </font>


<font color="#993366">abt d second os....yeah she usually dsnt say his name...yep the confession was straight from d heart...😉!!</font>


<font color="#993366">hmm....long one...ahh sukar mano meine itna likha...lekin Inshallah i'll go for a long one too ....</font>

<font color="#993366">I just cudn't drag this...beauty spoil ho jati haina ? </font>


<font color="#993366">love you too....😳</font>


<em><font color="#993366">tc</font>

<font color="#993366">fatima</font>

Ur Most welcome dear...
Are shukr kyun maanu...mera haq hai kehne ka isiliye kehdiya...itne chote chote os toh gale me atak jaate hai...isiliye next time u must write long one..okey sweety. 😳

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