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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

wowow tht was nice it was Same but in Mayur vision

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-Sindhu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Hey Fatima!

That was awesome! I was spellbound by it. The emotions and feelings were beautifully described.

And the words she spoke were heart touching.

Sorry for the late reply. I was busy with my admission process at my University. Sorry!

- Sindhu

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
amazin OS fatima !!

i am completely blowed off...too good :) :)

love

-ruchi-

thnx ruchi,

for liking it and feeling d depth of it :)

-fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: rusha4003
That was beautifully written Fatima ....

first off thanx a lot for reading it and giving in ur comments !

Nupur's dilemma and final acceptance of Kiara was soo well brought out .!!

glad you felt that i cud do justice to nupur's char in the first os ....bcz many people do not accept such a past ...but I opted out for it and for me it is not mere fiction !

Keep it up my dear !!!!

WOW ... the second one is absolutely heart-warming ..... loved Nupur's descriptions of her feelings ... the way she doesn't want to name Mayank .... and finally your last words ... it JUST LOVE .... not unrequited or fulfilled....

awwe...Im touched by this :)

yep it was her way of re-confessing ...thou mayank might feel shez hurt or hez letting him hurt her....it's none she just loves him and thus those feelings.. ya those words indeed are true but I don't know how many of us out here believe in such love and not be hurt and pained beyond repair and cry over jz for the reason tht someone spl doesn't reciprocate ...hence the ending ...I dunno what u feel ...wud have been nice if u wud have giving ur opinion :)

Amazing write Up !!!!!! 👏👏

thnx a lot dear :)

-fatima

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-Sindhu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

That was indeed very beautiful. And yes, I did get the admission!😊

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

heyyy.......!!!!
ur both OS r truly amazinggg......
beautifully written...
loved ittttt.....

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Do not Tell

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Fatima, it is so poignant! I loved the last paragraph very much. Love need never be expressed...it just is something to be experienced. Beautiful. The whole one shot was so well put together and well thought out. Thank you dear, loved it!(this is just for Part I)

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

sorry lov 4 d late comment itw as lovely OS loved it thnx 4 dpm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

I love this, Euphony - Absolutely brilliant and stunning job! I could feel every single word resonate in me.

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Bridgette

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: bDgT
Fatima, it is so poignant! I loved the last paragraph very much. Love need never be expressed...it just is something to be experienced. Beautiful. The whole one shot was so well put together and well thought out. Thank you dear, loved it!(this is just for Part I)

hey bridge,

thnx a lot for ur comment dear ! It really means a lot....especially for the first one coz the concept is very common I guess....so I was more apprehensive about it ....

Well ur welcome but I guess I should thank you for reading and liking it dear :)

-fatima