BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 57

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Aw man! 😭 I pity Mayank and I really like this changed self of him. 😳 So, finally Nupur has delivered her baby. Now, the predictable thing has become even more predictable . . their son's gonna be cupid here, well sorta. 😆

Awesome update!! 👍🏼 Update whenever you've enough time, no forcing, no hurry. I am gonna miss you and your write-ups. Take care of yourself and keep in touch. 😃

-Kanky

Aru, Nivi Di, sam kuch bolo ruchi ko?????

this girl alwz made me cry..............

u have no right to do it ruchi- u r very bad

what can i say abt ur update- it was just superb

awesome- blossom

mayanks concern abt nups , nups pain, maynks pain everything u wrote beautifully.

i loved the scene when mayu came to nups house and saw nupur who caressed their son so lovingly. He also wanted to feel him but poor mayu-----------------sigh

so finally mayur become a parents of baby

i can easily imagin how much maynk was happy.
i can c her teary eyes which is full of happiness

i was shocked when nups dad hand over the baby to maynk.
i never expectd it.


now i just hope nups will forgive maynk.

ruchi jana fantastic update
mind blowing
jo bhi kahu wo kam par jayega.
hats off to u janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

love u loads
thanx 4 ur update
take care

Res

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Sigh! This was a beautiful update! Very very beautiful!

Ive especially loved the way you have handled this situation. Mayank cant be forgiven for the deed. No he really cant be. But he can be happy for the child. Yes, he surely can!

I am really glad that you didnt show mayank taking care of nupur. A woman is really strong. Escpecially a mother. She can fight anybody for her child, be it her rapist or her husband!

Time changes people. And though this was very expected as -Kanky- and Nirvithi said, but expected things are expected because they happen in reality. Things become cliche because they happen in our lives. Each day. If you look at it, our life is cliche.

Though i cant forgive Mayank for his deed, nor can Nupur, and justice cant be brought to this woman who has gone through so much. But thats life. What cannot be cured must be endured.

I dont know where you'll take mayank and nupur's story to, or maybe you show her with samrat,or maybe with mayank. Totally your call but i have to admit that mayank's repentence surely makes me melt. Its sad though that his repentence cant undo his deed.

Hey i went on blabberring. All i wanted to say was, i wanted to cry with joy when mayank wanted to hold the child. I loved it that he wants to ask for forgiveness. And its all so beautifully written that i have no demands from this story. I'll follow just the way you take this story!

Girl, you rock. You emote really well.

I still wonder about mayank's feelings for nupur. He married her to take revenge? For lust? M quite wondering if there's something there.

But anyway, thanks a ton for updating this tonight! Thank you!

Continue soon! 😉

U knw wht, i loved the update. I dnt knw but my eyes are filed wid tears. Wonderfully written. Wil w8 4 ur update. Take care. Love yaa.

No Sami - i am last...mein tum sab ki wait kar rahi thi..Specially Fari ki - warna usse attack aa jaati... ek hi din mein teen bar 😆

awwww Ruchii I just have no wrdzz for this part sis

what an update ruchi..it was juz mindblwoing......so mayur have a baby now...how sweet...................

nice updt
thanks for the pm