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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#571

Atlast sum rays of hop that ppl are accepting Mayu

Mayu was really in the guilt n he was sorry for wat all he did

Thank God ppl noticed it

Liked the way Dia said she will help him n wat Nups father did was out of the world

I thought he will shout at him hit him but thk he saw the truth care n love for Nupur n his son

Evn i had tears wen u described Mayu's hapiness wen he holded his son

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

OMG !!!...So many reserves . Guys ..plz edit kar dena . !!

reserve tho mein last ki thi ..Par edit mein pehle ki.. So first mein hi hooon. 😆

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#573

awesome update

wonderful

last part of the update was just too good

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mayur-ani

@mayur-ani

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#574

edited! 😊

forgt to mention there....best of luck! 😃

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#575

beautiful update dear

frst time ever in ths story i felt positive for mayank...but i dnt know still dnt want him to b forgivn....

gr8 update beautiful emotions

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#576

tht was sooooooooooo amazing part

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#577

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!

i had tears in my eyes reading it.......

brilliant writing

glad u updt early!!

cont soon

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#578

ruchi mindblowing update 🤗 no words 2 discripe ur update hun had tears in my eyes ur wrote fantasticly loved it 2 core
thanks a ton love u 🤗

Edited by samiralovemayur - 15 years ago

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#579

hey !! ruchi 🤗

first of all THANX aTON 4 d update

AND it was a AWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEESOME PRT luvd it

it was realyyyy touching prt

mayank n d baby prt was simply gr8888

hats off to ur writing

hope this week gets over soooooooon so u can update anywayz

best of luck 4 ur stduies

thanx 4 d pm

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#580

Oh gosh Ruchi, you always make me read this with a heavy heart and here we go again hehe. I love you for writing so well, that it takes me to another world and connect to the characters sooooo wonderfully. Mayank at last got to hold his son in his arms, I don't know what lies ahead and this time I don't want to predict but let you guide me through and ahead in this story.

God bless you always and all the best for your studies!