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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#581

OMG! Ruchi, this was a beautiful update. 🤗

I don't know why but my eyes are all teary now. I so loved this change in Mayank. When you wrote that he was crying, I had tears too and especially the scene that followed, when he held his son in his arms for the first time, it was so touching.

Beautifully written. Like always you have expressed the emotions beautifully. Loved the update. <3<3

Amazingly written. <3

I really am gonna miss you loads around here Ruchi, and your updates too. But, have a great year ahead in college. All the best.

Continue whenever you like, and have time. =]

Loads of love

Daania

Edited by -Daania- - 15 years ago

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#582

Awww I love this ff too much!

this is beautifully written

amazing job!

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supercool3

@supercool3

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#583

soo Mayank was behind the bars gor 6 months... i'm glad that he realized his mistake...

and what else... I'm happy that Dia and Nupur's parents are very understanding... also along with Samrat... they all know that Mayank has realized his fault..

Nupur, well it'll take her time... and i totally get her for that

and awwwwwwww Mayur have a baby toooooo!

can't wait for the next part

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t-mayur-sajan-j

@t-mayur-sajan-j

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#584

Hey ruchi
an amazing ff
just read all the parts
quite unexpected
hmm didn't like mayank in the beginning but know understand nd wish for mayur to get together soon
plz update soon

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#585

yaar what a update
omg ruchi yaar you stole my heart lovely update
maynk behind bars and then change and his feeling for his child and care for nupur
everything changed yaar
lovely update
and i want to know why nupur's father bring the baby infront of maynk
yaar one question how they know it's baby or girl
i thought this is crime to test baby's gender before birth

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#586

hey Ruchi!It was a wonderful part ! i like the change in emotions Mayank has ad the care he has for the baby !!It was just a very cute part and he is so regretting what he did !!pls update soon !!

-Natasha

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#587

ruchi i wasnt expecting an updatesoo jaldi ndi am gladu updated ...................it was fantabulous ................i had tears in my eyes reading it ....................mayank has really changed alot ........ nd as i guessed he has stayed in prision for 6 months .............nd mayur have a baby the way u described nupur caressing her bulge nd mayank seeing also this..... it was sooooo beautifully written ................nd wen nupur's dad gives da baby to him ....... it brought tearsin my eyes .....................nupur ll take lot of time to forgive mayank ........ nd i am in no hurry for it ........... the story is moving at such a good pace ................... the way you have written nupur's pov ...... gsoh i feel miserable forthis girl .................. cant wait to read da next part ............ i know the wait ll be longer as u l be ble to update only next week ..................... and i ll wait for it .........this isoneof the best FF's i have ever read nd i love it lots ...........

will miss u ruchi take care ...............

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#588

heyy Ruchiii

what an amazing part...u describe Mayank n Nupur feelings beautifully.....i loved it..i hope nups will forgive mayu....waiting for next part...plzzzzzz do continue soon