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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#541

Ok, this was predictable... But I'm happy that Nupsie is coming back to normal...

Awesome update...

PM soon next time!!

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#542

ruchi i felt dat something like this was going to happen in this update .........so it seems dat mayank has stayed behind da bars for 6 months.........well dat punishment is very less in cpmariosion to crime he committed but still i wanted to see him repenting nd finally it has happened nd now dat nupur is pregnant ............nd the way u described her pov ..........i was in tears i feel miserable for her ............................now lets see how you are going to unite mayur ....................so ur college has started so we ll have till da weekend for another update .........chalo chalega ll wait...........cant wait to read da next part ..........

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anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#543

i knew this was going to happen.
but mayank was away for 6 months. didn't think abt that.
loved it.
continue soon.

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#544

amazing part but plz make every thing normal btw maynk and nupur cant see maynk like this

thx for the pm

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

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Posted: 15 years ago

#545

jus superb part...........hpe nups forgives mayu soon.......

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#546

ruchi
vey well written
hope all gets well soon between mayur

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-sam-

@-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#547

I am late..
sorry
Well, you gave an amazing twist!
Keep it up!
Nicely written, Nupur's POV was exactly the way I thought,
Where was mayank? Not in jail! He was somewhere else, haina?
Update soon....

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#548

lovley twist ruchi
yaar plz update soon

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mayur-ani

@mayur-ani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#549

hey ruchi? Can we expect an update before you go to the hostel? Please? Pretty please?????

Next week is too long:-(

Please can you????

Anyway, best of luck for your hostel!

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: mayur-ani
hey ruchi? Can we expect an update before you go to the hostel? Please? Pretty please?????

Next week is too long:-(

Please can you????

Anyway, best of luck for your hostel!

yeah surely ...today itself😃

thnx :)