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Posted: 15 years ago
ruchi..u r gonna update today????? thats amazing....
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Posted: 15 years ago
THANXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX A TON DEAR 🥳
luv u 4 this 🤗🤗
N PLEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ make it longggggggg plezzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yipeeeeeeee! *jumping in joy*
A long update pleaajheeeeeee!
M sorry greedy heart ka sawaal hai! Lol!

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. *rubs hands in excitement*

Waiting!😊

P.s. I'll come back once u update. Hau some work! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update Ruchi

Happy that Mayank changed and Shilpa aunty and Samrat accepted him...

Waiting for your update now...

Love,
Shreyu
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Ruchi
just finished reading the 10th part
the story is nice
nups suffered so much
luved sam and dia who always were wth thier frnd
mayank like this no comment for it sorry but soon realized his mistake gud
hope everything goes well and nups realizes tht mayank realized his fault actually his crime
luved when everything got well btn sayank and their mom
waiting for ur next update
thxs for the pm 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it...
but where was mayank for these 6months???
brilliantly written
thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago

nupur pregnant😲totally unexpected

great work dear

the story is getting more n more interesting

now i cant wait

cont super soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
Update se pehle he res kar diya


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii...
Wel , yeah i am going back 2mrw .
But before going this update for u ol . Love u ..
@Nivi Dii , Kanky - wel , i know ..it might sound predictable that nupur got pregnant but ..i had no other option . The way i was left was, maaynk helping to revive Nupur back..but i didnt wish that .Nupur is a strong character and u'll witness it .
Love u ol .
Sonam Di..plz take care of urself .😊
N love you ol ..muaaah
PART- 11

I was stil not calm , i could feel my heartbeats getting abnormal ...but somehow i need to get a grip , for no one else but my child .

I was still trying to concentrate on a random magazine ..but stil couldnt . It hass been six months but not evn for a moment i could forget the pain i went through ...couldnt get over the touch on my body ...couldnt compose myself on that fact that i was raped by my husband !!..Husband ..it sounds so weird na...the one who protects u from world ..promises to face al the troubles before they touch you ..takes every step with you and most importantly love you.. But , maybe i was born so unlucky that i couldnt feel any of these things evn for a fraction of a second . Unknowingly , a lone tear escaped from my eyes but i quickly wiped it off . I have to be strong , maybe not for anyone but for my baby .

Suddenly i heard my Dad's voice and got from the bed , but it was so sudden that i suddenly felt pain .
''Ahhh'' i screamed and Dad , mom and Dia entered the room ol tensed
''Nupur...Nupur are u ok ?'' Dad asked concerned
I shook my head and mom came patted on my back , just to calm me down .
After sometime , i felt normal ...there was no more pain
''Beta..vl o to doctor tomorrow '' Dad said .
''But papa..appointment is on monday''
''Hardly matters ..we'll go tomorrow . I want my sweet lil baby to be fine '' He said and i smiled . Maybe , i am wrong , i am lucky enough to have such wonderful parents and friends .
They could have easily asked me to abort my child ...after knowing about the thing i went throu but instead they helped me . They love my child more than me .. And i love them . Tears filled up in my eyes ...not of sorry but being glad of having best parents in the world .
I looked at Dia ..she had guilt , i knew her ..she was blaming herself.. Mom-Dad left after sometime and Dia sat next to me
''I am sorry ..'' Dia said with tears in her eyes
''Dia..please ..dont lame yourself . Mayank came...it was not your fault . Please ..'' I said and she smiled . I felt like a pampered baby again . Samrat was mostly in Delhi than in Mumbai and Shilpa mom came to meet me every weekend . Everyone was attached to my kid ..and i was alive coz of him .
I was talking to Dia ..when her cell buzzed . She ws uncomfortable ..i could sense it . She excused herself
Mayank's POV
I was not at ease .. ol things felt into place ...Samrat never emntioning anything about Nupur , Nupur left with her parents ..and Now everyone trying to make me separate away from her .. I cant !..i cant stay away from her nor from my baby . The thought of my baby ..made me smile ..I was gonna become Dad !!..someone wil be there to call me ''dad'' ..
I thought of talking to Nupur..but that seemed not so good ..So i called Dia
''Why the hel did u cal me Mayank ?'' she directly asked
''I need to talk to you ''
''But i cant . ''
''Dia..you have to talk to me .. ''
She took sometime
''Fine..'' Finally she agreed .
I was waiting for Dia in CCD when she arrived . I knew that she was least pleased to see me ..but evn i am helpless
''what happened ?''
''how is nupur ?..is she fine ?..''
''hmm..she is fine ! Living ..living for her child '' she said and i was glad . Maybe i couldnt give her happiness but my child wil
''Dia.,..i know u hate me ..but i am sorry for what i did '' I said helplessly
''I can understand Mayank ...but i cant forget the pain Nupur suffered '' she said ..and i can understand her . She was closest to Nupur and i cant expect her to forgive me .
''I can understand u ..but i want to confess my deeds ..please ..help me meet Nupur ! I want her back in my life ...i want to give her ol the happiness she deserves '' I almost pleaded
''Mayank..i am sorry ..i cant help you . I know , u stayed behind bars for 6months ..everything u did was to reduce ur guilt . But i cant make her go throu everything again . Her baby is her life ..she might have been dead by now , but its only coz of her baby that she is letting her heart beat . And further , i dont think Aunty-Uncle wil allow you to meet her '' my eyes widened at their mention ''yes..they know about everything . Shilpa aunty only informed then , the day u went behind bars ..''
''They wont forgive me '' i mumbled to myself
'' maybe u are right mayank . They were shattered to watch Nupur's condition ..how can we evn expect them to forgive you ... but u should be greatful to them . They love ur kid a lot '' she said with a smile admist tears
I nodded
''But please..can u just help me meet Nupur once ..please ' i was almost begging in front of her
''I'll try but not before she delivers her baby ..''
''But..''
''Sorry mayank but today also ..she was in pain . I dont want her to take any stress''
''what ?..is she fine ?.i mean ..'' Dia smiled
''yeah..she is fine , dont worry '' I was relaxed
''Thanx Dia ''
''its okk..i think , i should leave now '' Dia was about to get up
''Hmm..dia ?''
''yeah..''
''Boy or a girl ?''
''Boy '' she said and went out ., while i had tears in my eyes .
I decided to go back to Mumbai . I cant disturb Nupur..not atleast in this critical situation ..but before going back..i wanted to see Nupur..
Early morning ..i went to Nupur's place . But before i could think how to reach til nupur..i saw her . She was sitting outside in garden ..looking beautiful as ever, wearing loose pink attire but one could easily make out her bulge . She slowly carressed her son ...I so wanted to be with her ..sit with her ...Kiss my child ..feel his kick..feel the happiness bubble which Nupur feels ...i wanted to be complete ..but my life was far away from me .
Three months passed but each second seemed difficult to spend . Samrat and Mom constantly visited Nupur..while i just imagine the bulge growing and her face beaming with joy .
But i couldnt control myself and went to Delhi , when Dia informed that Nupur has started with pains . I was sitting at far corner but Nupur's Dad saw me . He wanted to confront me but the situation stopped him ..and suddenly i was on the toop of the world . I heard my child cry ..i heard him . I wanted to jump with joy..hugg my family ..but couldnt . Samrat reached upto me and hugged me
''Congratulations '' he said
I could say nothing but cry . I fell on my knees ..i broke down . I wanted them so badly in my life ..so badly .
But my eyes fell on the baby in front of me ..I looked up in shock . It was Nupur's Dad holding my baby ..and nodded his head in assurance .
I took him in my trembling hands ..I was nervous,afraid ..i was The Happiest person on this Earth !!..
Heyy guys !!..thats ol for this week .
Hope u enjoyed it :D
Love ya
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ruchi you are really sweetheart yaar

Jane se pahle update kar di aur wo bhi with positive Hope ,Her dad showed his kid
I really feel bad for mayank he is not able to feel those priceless moments,
happy atleast Samrat and Mom accepted him
Diya was too good here she gave a better idea to meet her after her delivery
I hope Nupur will try to understand he is regreting for his deed
I just want MAYUR to be together Ruchi
Update when possible Dear
Ps - Nivi -- only 6 months behind the bar ,not a good logic ,main samajh gayi tumhare code ka kya hal hota hoga 😆😆😆😆
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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