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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#531

Ruchiji finally u updated it
Oh GOD ye ladki kabhi nehi sudhregi
again a sad part but it was really touching
i can easily imagine the mayurs condition.
mayankks guiltiness , nups pain- everything u portrayed beautifully.
mayank was 6 month away frm his family and nupur
hmm

i think he hd committed his crime and may be he was punished by court for 6 month
i mean i want to say- he was in jail for last 6 month(sorry re isse jaida meri demag main aur kuch nehi aya...)

so now maynk is back and he wants to meet with nupur. and thats why he goes to morena
nups is pregnant and nups mom-dad knows the truth.
thanx GOD they support her.

Nupurs reaction is so natural ruchi. i felt really sad for both of them

i hope nups use maf kar de.

awesome update jaana

beautifully written
loved it so much

waiting 4 nest part

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#532

OMG!

What an unexpected twist

really excited for the rest!

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#533

am cutty with u dear..u reserved in someother place and updated in another place.....i thought of commenting 1st..but i lost it... loved the update dear...so nupur is pregnant....i was expecting this....till now i dont know what to say about mayank...i hate him.......

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#534

Ruchi , 🤗 Nice update..

and comments ...🤔 Im not sure should I say it or not?Last time I put you in trouble..😕 Pehle promise karo ki tum mujhse gussa nahin honge.. You know - mein aur mer logic and mere POVs...maaf kar dena...

Was Mayank behind bars for these 6 months? Looks like he himself made that decision?

Unlike others ,I was not shocked - I was 99% sure that Nupur will be pregnant.. I agree with Kanky here - Indian stories are predictable.

I mean - you know, just one time..and here is the kid.. Take latest example rajneeti film 😆 I am happy with MJHT CVs in that matter - they didn't follow the typical story atleast in Sajan's case.

And the story is definitely moving to Mayur reunion..Now I dont have any problem with that - but if it had to happen ,I would have preferred not because of the baby.. becuase everytime indian woman forgives her husband due to her kids - when kids are there in picture, the whole decision is biased.

Ok,thats what my take on the content...

But Ruchi Darling - I love the way you control your story everytime.. Its a pleasure to read through your update. Each and every line make us feel what shock, pain ,happiness, numbness that character is going through... Promise me Ruchi, even after you become doctor, you won't stop writing(Not just prescriptions, i mean stories 😆)... We can't afford to lose such an amazing writer.

Aur haan.. Just make sure onething - When Nupur forgives Mayank at the end , it should be purely due to love .. I won't like to see even 1% of that decision being impacted by the kid and kid's future... Hope you can understand whatever I am trying to say🤗

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#535

One more note Ruchi..Sorry- kaan pakadke sorry..I am your worst reader right??

Just read it as some critic POV and ignore kar lena..

Already you were in bad mood yday due to Mayank , then you updated late night and you are leaving to hostel too..... And to make worse - Me and my so-called-honest comments... I am the worst sister..Sorry

Maaf kar dena...

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 15 years ago

#536

Okay, what do I call this? Predictably unpredictable? 😆 😉

Beautiful update, Ruchi! 😳 I am really liking this evolved Mayank now. Nupur's thought over her pregnancy is really moving. You've penned it down beautifully.

Also, I wanted to tell ya that the character of Mayank drawn in your fiction is by far, the most different one I've witnessed. He's going to be an extremist for sure. He's done extremely bad stuff, it's time for the good ones now, if I am not mistaken. 😆

Do continue soon. 😃

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago