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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#521

hey ruchi !!🤗

finnalyyyyy u updated ....

this is d one ff i look 4 wenever i cum on IF REALYYY LUV THIS FF anywayz cuming to d update

and AGAING AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME update MINDBLOWINGGGGGG

hats off to u

nups expecting dint expect it 😲

mayank had changed good

like him this way

NOW im dying to wats going to happen next but u r going back SO PLEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ I HAVE A REQUST THAT PLEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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N thanx 4 d pm

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#522

this was sumthing unexpected....

gr8 update....

i hope mayank make up for wht he has done

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#523

Oh Ruchi, why do you have to write so beautifully and powerfully that it would make me cry hard for them both. Where was Mayank for these past six months Ruchi? A wonderfully wonderfully written chapter. Oh so you are leaving, all the best and have a great time, study hard and enjoy too.

God bless you always!

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#524

The last thing I had expected ruchi

nupur being pregnant

gr8 twist man

loved the whole update

plzzzzz make mayur close

now even mayank has changed

but still I don't like him

I don't know why

hope nupur forgives him

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#525

woowwww.....interestingg update...
loved itttt....
continue it soon...

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#526

just caught up with all parts of ur ff
itsss really really intersting
i luved itt a lot
cont soon
and frm now on pm me the updteeeee

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#527

woowowowow this partzz amaizng sis !!

sachi mein

I loved it frm starting to ending !!

Mayank comezz back n he thinking of Nupur

n then he asked his mom n she said that she left with her parentz

n then he goes to her house

n then he sees Dia open the door

n then he askes for Nupur

n she tellz him to go away !!!
n then he sees Nupur

n then Nupur slamzz the door in front of him !!
I just wish that Nupur could forgive him sis !!
btw really loved this part

itzz short

I wish next part is double no triple !!
do cont ASAP

really really love this part

-Lina-

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#528

ruchi awesome awesome update
wat twist

plzzzzzzz make mayur close

thanks 4 d pm

i'll miss ur updates good luck with ur study

thanks 4 d pm

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#529

i thought i will not comment but later thought Again Rotlu will start crying lol

Well i am not happy after update ruch darling u know why

but want to know where Mayank was for last 6 months

and Samrat and he came close

but is the truth known to Nupur's parents

i guess yes from 6 months she is stayg with them i feel so

aur uske bad ek aur bat ,please i want the next part before you leave to hostel

Luv,

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supercool3

@supercool3

Alumni

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#530

hmmmm... so i basically have the same questions as everyone else here😆 where was mayank for 6 months? how did sammy and mayu become so close? and does Nupur's parents know everything ? oh and one more.. how will Mayank and Nupur reunite? 😆 but i guess that's suspense 😆 this update was quite heartbreaking.. Mayank was excited to come back home and see Nupur again... but she wasn't at his house.. and when he went to meet her.. she wouldn't talk to him from Nupur's POV, i understand her position.. i mean, obviously you would never want to interact with someone like that all over again.. but what was really heart-touching was that she was carrying their baby.. and though she might hate the father at the moment, she doesn't hate her child Mayank... well all i can say is it's really easy to become the bad guy, but it would take a lot of effort to become the good guy once again.. Mayu realized his mistake.. but his journey to Nupur is not going to be easy at all.. can't wait til your next update

Edited by supercool3 - 15 years ago