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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: -sam-
res 😎
usi post pe edit kar dena... 😆

I want to hate mayank hmm...this is what i wanted
I felt terribly bad for Nupur, 😭 i felt the same , when i typed
But I guess after seeing Nupur numb, mayank will change....
You will change him, hain na? wait n watch :) :)

I love Dia and samrat!

I hope mayank sudhar jaaye.... He have toooo

Just make him feel too guilty.....
Actually Nupur shouldnt forgive him easily...

Thank you ji, meri baat maane ke liye... Anytym twineee :) :)

Love yaa.. Love yaa tooo
Dnt worry you'll get excellent marks!😃 Hope so

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

excellent update

very well written

plzzz do continue soon

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

loving this ff
very nicely written
felt bad for nupur
eager to know
what would nupur do now

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
This Mayank is a nutcase! 😆 And I love Samrat . . I love repeating this! 🤣

Awesomely written, gal. Continue soon!

-Kanky

Lol...u are the only person in jovial mood after reading the update ...

Thank God !!

Glad u liked it😉

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

mayank is so bad....he snatched away her family...

when u pmes me abt this...i knew that maybe this was gonna happen....

mayank raped her....her soul is so dead

i so dislike this mayank!

but then...maybe he can change

and if u can, then donot bring samrat or ma or anyone for nupur....

i want mayank to realise his mistake and change!

but i loved the update!

Mayank is such a jerk! 😆😆😆

Love,
Mahak

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

ruchs to be very honest 4 a change i loved this part...as i have said its completely an offbeat story..and another reason 4 loving it is.... i used to love the show kutumb and there also same thing happened with the lead couple but later they fell in love with each other...and became together at the end..this incident wil bring a drastic change in both lead characters...i strongly feel so...now i m waiting 4 mayank's character transformation to a positive one...plz dont get scared..i m really looking forward to this story

Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 15 years ago

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

Hey Ruchi,

I am so sowie for making you wait a little. Oh gosh the whole story would take such a turn I had never ever imagined man. You wrote it wonderfully and indeed so powerfully that I could sense it happening and it feels sooooo bad. Just because you have such a command on words that it all felt so real. Commendable effort. Am so looking forward to read ahead. Cruel Mayank, lets see if he is guilty about it at all or still not man,

Excellent job done Ruchi!!!!!!