MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 70

I was in tears Akki...you described the pain sooo well...it was like as if i was seeing her going through all that...it was totally heart-wrenching...how do you manage to write this perfectly every single time, girl??? MashAllah...

omg!! its so sad!!😔
felt bad for both!!😔
beautifully written!!

oh tht was so depressingly wonderful!!...

i had wondered what happen to this one (along with the other ones)

this truly was some great writing. the emotions. just screamed out. the agony.

these two have been sad for far far too long. happy karo please!!:)

update sooon

It hurts to see Mayank and Nupur going though pain and a whirlwind of emotions as they became the victims of the cruel games of fate..Although Nupur is not at fault,I cant help pity Mayank more coz the love he had for his baby touched me..I could actually feel their pain inside me and the full credit for it goes to u Akki😛
Update soon dear😳

wow akki...

hope they become one from heart once again :)

omg it was heart wrenching update

This ws the most emotional part i've ever read so far...There wr constant tears throughout the reading process...

The pain of losing one's child is the most unbearable pain and the way u showed this is unimaginable...I cud completely feel the pain and it directly touched my heart...

I cant blame nupur for this...She ws the mother and she felt the utmost pain of losing her child...Mayank cant deny this..He should've been there to console her, to give her the support and strength no matter what...They cud share the pain together but alas...If only they cud understand each other for once...Hope this time they'll show some maturity...

Brilliant work akansha...Hats off to u and ur talent...This ff became my ultimate obsession...Plz cont soon this time...

Beautiful update aki.