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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#701

I really love this ff of urs akansha...Especially i always look forward to the part about the past...the way u portray mn...hugs and all😳...The part about their present was sad but again u have done full justice in portraying how both m and n must be feelinhg at that point of time...i feel alot bad for N.There is nothing more painful in this world than a sinking feeling of guilt...
do update soon
with love,
aastha

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#702

such an emotional & sad part akansha...it left me in tears...
finally the past is revealed . hmm well she did make a mistake but still if he could have just consoled her once then they wouldn't have been in this position...
anyways awesome update ..
continue soon ...

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#703

🥺
such an heartwrenchin update akki!!!
poor MN...i feel soo bad 4 dem!!😒

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 14 years ago

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#704

it was a wonderful update thanx for d pm

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#705

This was such an EMOTIONAL n HEART WRENCHING Update...🥺
FATE...played a Bad n Worse Game with them...
They BOTH Still LUV each Other...BUT...things Just Went Worse...
Nupur was not careless regarding there CHILD...BUT...it Happened...
She was the MOTHER...of there CHILD...i felt so BAD when Mayu left her alone...in the Hospital...Gosshhh...she was All alone to Bear that Pain...BUT yes on the Other HAND..Mayank too was Hurt...But blaming Nupur for all this...???
I hope everything will be Okay By the Time...i so wanna read Next...that wot is stored for them Nw...I really Hope ALL is GUD...😳
Amazing Update Akki...There Emotions...there pain...U wrote it Just Brilliantly...😳👏👏
Do Continue SOON..Plzzz😒😆
is bar late mat krna...😆
n ya Thanks 4 the PM..😳
Annu😃

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shivi02

@shivi02

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#706

Good attempt. Thanks for the pm akansha:)

ur writing style is very different from mine. Though i m no expert but stil i would like to point smthng which felt a drawback was there were much words used to describe d emotional upheveal. Felt it should b a little crisper. Hope u don't mind my saying.
I like d way u put forth thoughts arguing their feelings.:)

- shivani

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#707

v painful update

eagerly waiting for the next part

plz update soon this time...

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#708

superb update

beautifully portrayed n felt bad fr both...

cont soon

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#709

always beautiful.. so poignant..so heart wrenching...

do continue soon dear..

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#710

Very painful Akki...🥺...that made me feel bad from both their sides n their emotions are drifting them apart when all that can heal the both of them is each other

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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