Dedication for me?... Thank u dear.. 🤗
I read it again. That day you asked me to read it at a busiest time.But now that I read it again, I can give you more clear and honest comments.
I liked how you brought back the flashback of the horrible incident... Mayank was breaking the things in their home.. a home that was already broken... and the mishap that drove them apart... it was heart wrenching.
Loss of a child... a pain that can never heal in time... it can bring a couple closer than before.. or it can create distances between them... no matter what, the pain of losing a baby never goes away... the only way out of that hurt is to help each other to deal with that pain. But here Mayank choose a different road... he didn't accept the loss of the baby as destiny's choice... but instead put the blame on themselves.. on her. Instead of being there by Nupur's side, he abandoned her.. and only felt his own pain. He felt helpless and blinded by his own loss, he could not imagine what Nupur might be going through.
Alas!... if they could have just talked to each other... and would have let their pain find its way out..
You are brilliant at describing pain.. your words penetrate the pain and bring tears to the readers. Last part was heart wrenching.
I'll really looking forward to see how they will find their way back into the fallen relation. It would take more than passion to understand each other and bring them together again.
Well written update. Although, I felt that it was hurried a little.
Can't wait for next updates.
love ya 🤗
Di
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