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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

very nice update...

please continue soon...

brilliant flasback...very touching...:)

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

aki love u 4 da update...its absolutely heartwrenching to see my mayur like this..a cruel game of fate which resulted them in being victims of it...nupur has always been unreasonable n a bit careless regarding her pregnancy considering the fact that what did the child mean to mayank...but nevertheless mayank has also made a mistake by not being there beside his wife,when she needed him the most..atleast he should'hv thought 4 once,that if being a father he is shattered by the demise of his unborn child...whatever nupur may hv gone through being the mother of that child...

Aki plzzz continue the next part soon..pretty plzz yaar..

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#683

it was so painful update, when she needed him the most he was not there

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tukun2009

@tukun2009

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#684

awesum update👏but i feel in the e ntire story i was nupur fault.pls cont soon

Edited by tukun2009 - 14 years ago

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#685

*sigh...akki...u always left me speechless with ur writing u knw...the description of "pain" in ur words were so much real...i can actually feel it...& u said u had no idea how to move this story ahead...i feel the helplessness that Mayank must hv felt & i understand how hard it must be for Nupur ...coz she had to bear the pain of two loss.one is her baby & another is Mayank's love for her...though i believe Mayank never stopped loving her.it was just a easy way to cope up with these severe pain to put the blame on someone.& he did the same...he is not at fault either..

now i wanna c this story to move on in present times...lets c how u do it akki..waiting for ur update...love u always!🤗

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#686

It was really so heart wrenching update

thanks for Pm

cont soon

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#687

Brilliant update Akki,

I like the way you balance it with some light and romantic moments of past with their heart-wrenching present.

Feeling bad for my mayur being madly love with each other fate has brought them on verge of hating and accusing. Still I wish Mayank would have been with her when she needed him the most if the death of unborn child shattered him as father then being mother she is in most miserable state.

Akki please continue soon.

Edited by Prada_176 - 14 years ago

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

that was so incredibly sad...i know they suffered a tremendous loss but i cant believe mayank would give her such a big punishment for that...please do update sooner...i had forgotten about this ff cuz it has been so long...naina

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#689

finally you updated😃

coming to update

It was another awesome update by you

I can't blame any of them because it is the game played by Destiny

Can't wait to see how their relationship will be back on the track

Do continue soon😊

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#690

awww Ankasha wat sad part😭😭 sachi mein I feel like crying now sope Nupz pleaded Mayu to let her go, n he didn't want to but he couldn't say no to her, and den she fell n lost their baby😭 n Mayu wasn't there with her how could he do dat??? but I understand hiz feelingzz too na !!😒
plezz plezz plezz do continue ASAP
I kan't wait to read the next part 🤗 -Linu

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