MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

res😃

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firstly u updated...😃 made me real happy...as its my frst commnt here on this ff...n i read it last week only...i wud like to say..its, again, like all others..is unique in its way n AWESOME...this mayank-nupur...hung between love n hate fr each other...the hate which actually is just angst n a result of not comfrting each other or rather takin a meaningful step...

n this part cleared ll d air...wat i feared was the truth...it muct hav been real difficult for both of them agreed...but here only i guess they needed to b d support of each other which they were not...

i really wanna see how u bring their relationship back on track...

u, as always wer great...:D...dunno y u r nEVER satisfied with wat u write,..🤔

anyways i felt so bad for MN.. n tht makes it clear ur job , was well done Aku...🤗

tc..try n cont soon...🤗

love you...🤗 Godbless u<333

PS-this tym I unresd without a reminder..😎 🤣

tc❤️

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#672

oh my GOD...😲😲

my dream come true u actually updated...😍😍

i was waiting for it for so longgg ya...😃😃

thanks...🤗

thank u thank u sooo muchhh🤗🤗🤗

awww 😭😭😭 it was such a sad update...😭

dey lost der baby like dis n Mayank didnt console Nupur...😲😭

i know he was hurt bt he shud hv understand her feelings also...

after all she was d mother of his child...n d baby was living inside her...

jitns sad main Mayank ke liye hoon usse kahin jyada main Nupur ke liye hoon...

i hope ke sab thik ho jaye bilkul pehle jese...

awesome update yaar...

ps: plzzz dis time hoping u will continue soon...🤗🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#673

it was such a heart-wrenching update!!😭

beautifully portrayed Akansha!!😊

thnks for the pm..

and.. continue soon!!🤔😆

~jiya~

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

the pain nupur went through is excruciating, perhaps even more.and i feel sorry for her cuz the person she needed most wasnt there with her. mayank should have understood that if going on to the work was nupurs fault then he was equally guilty by allowing her and not being there with her while she took care of her works.

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#675

amazinggg update

i really think that was indeed nupur's fault.

she was careless she should had walked seeing the floor.

i can understand mayank's condition.

that was really bad happened to them.

do write soon.

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#676

😭😭 poor mayank and nupur

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#677

sighhh it was indeed a very heart wrenching update
felt bad for mayur- nups was too stubborn
she should listen to myank
but mayank he was not with nups when she needed most.
ahhh i want to see my happy mayur...

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

UNFORTUNATE.

This is all i can say. In times of pain the first thing a person seeks is someone to blame. He feels so helpless that there is nothing left except for the feeling of pain. Mayank also had a guilty nupur to blame, he couldn't think the rational way that the baby was not meant to be born, even if nupur had not gone to work, the accident would have happened. SIGH! , UNFORTUNATE. - but still he loves her!.

Excellent writing akki!
Needless to say i am waiting for the next update .. 🤗