Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

fablous part dear

thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Awesome..

I love the mysterious and knight in shining Armour kind of Vivaan..

Update soon!!!

Akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Heyyy sonam
Amazing part yaar
Like always vivan saved nisha
Though I wanna know. Wat is this with sara n. Adam
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Virgin Intimacy


After two weeks of pain and repair, Nisha finally returned to the Oracle University. Grace hugged her tight after nearly losing her to the fire ... both the girls together attended their classes and then Grace took her to an empty classroom to make her revise the stuff she missed out on .... After studying, both started talking ...
Grace - So, Vivaan saved you and gave you roses ..
Nisha - Again! But Grace, I really think he doesn't like me they way i like him ...
Grace - But why?
Nisha - Cuz, I saw him hugging Sara in the hospital ...

Grace didn't want to comment on it ... After that both left for lunch, when Sam entered ...
Sam - Hi Nish, welcome back!!
Nisha - Thanks, Sam ....
Grace and Sam got busy in talking when Nisha's heartbeat fastened and she knew that Vivaan was near ... he slowly walked near her without being noticed by Grace and Sam ... he whispered in her ear, standing next to her ....
Vivaan - Agar mujh par zara bhi vishwaas hai, to mere saath chalo, please ....

Nisha's eyes widened as she heard his words, she simply nodded and followed him outside in silence ... They entered the forest, Nisha didn't know what was going to happen ... He stopped near the lake, she was looking down and didn't notice him and bumped in his back ...
Nisha -Oh .. sorry!
Vivaan (smiling) - Kitni baar bologi, sorry-thank you ...
Nisha turned red!
Vivaan - Baithogi ya main bithaaun?
She didn't say anything and quietly sat next to him ... both kept staring the lake and didn't say anything ...
Vivaan - Nisha, ek bataao ..
Nisha - Kya?
Vivaan - Har baar, sab kuch, tumhaare hi saath kyun hota hai?
Nisha - Matlab?
Vivaan - Tum koi magnet ho kya jo problems ko attract karti hai, hmm?
Nisha - Main kya kahun?
Vivaan laughed at her expression .....
Vivaan - Har baar mujhe tumhe bachana padta hai ...
Nisha - Sorry aur thanks ...
Vivaan (giving a thinking expression) - 6th ya 7th time ....
Nisha (confused) - Kya hua?
Vivaan - Kitni baar sorry aur thanks kahogi ... kabhi to kuch different kaho ...
Nisha (enjoying) - Jaise ...
Vivaan - Jaise, bollywood films mein hota hai na ... "agar tum nahi hote to mera kya hota"

Both started laughing after that ..... Nisha couldn't believe what was happening .... was he really laughing and talking to her .... she couldn't feel anymore happier .... this was the best day of her life, when suddenly he became serious ....
Vivaan - Uhm .. tumhe bhook to nahi lagi?
Nisha - Ah ... nahi, kyun?
Vivaan - Nahi, wo tum Grace aur Sam ke saath lunch ke liye ja rahi thi na isliye ...
Nisha - Nahi ...
Vivaan - Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi ....
Nisha - Kya?
Vivaan - Ye Uday kaun hai?
Nisha looked at him startled and couldn't believe how he knew him ... he sensed her shock and continued ...
Vivaan - Wo, jab main tumhe bacha raha tha, jab hum khidki se koode tab tumne uska naam liya tha ...
Nisha looked down and remembered the dejavu which she experienced ...her eyes became wet ... she slowly told him everything about Uday and her friends ... tears were now rolling down her eyes ... she felt light while telling him everything ... he could sense her crying, he slowly shifted near her and touched her shoulder ... she, flowing with the moment, kept her head on his shoulder .. he let her be in his arm as he knew she needed support ... he slowly held her face in his hands and wiped her tears ... her eyes were shut ... after a few minutes she felt his hands were no more touching her ...

She opened her eyes, he was swimming in the lake ... Nisha couldn't believe her eyes ... he was shining and shimmering in the water as sun rays fell on him ... she felt alchemy and her dream sort of coming true with him in front of her smiling .... she knew that magical smile was just for her .... he slowly came out and before she would say anything, started moving out of the forest ... she was taken aback by his action and din't know what to do ... she too started walking out ...

By the time, both reached out, it was dark ...
Vivaan - Mujhe acha lagega agar tum is baare mein kisi se kuch nahi kahogi ... aur iske baad humaare beech kuch nahi badlega tu ab bhi mujh se door rahogi ...

Nisha nodded as he showed his 'anger'. She slowly walked towards the graveyard where she saw Grace and Sam ... she remembered that she was supposed to be with them for lunch ...
Nisha - Hi ...
Grace - Hm .. where were you?
Sam - Yup, we were so worried ...
Nisha (bit her lip) - I .. I was with someone ..
Sam - Who?
Nisha - Let's go for dinner, I am hungry ...
Grace (panicking) - Oh yes and you need to have your medicines ... come let's go ...

Sam sensed something unusual but decided to ignore it. The three of them had their dinner while laughing on Sam's jokes ... Nisha tried to find Vivaan but couldn't and noticed that even Sara was missing ... she heaved a sigh and continued with her dinner ......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Wow.. wow..

the mysterious and unpredictable Vivaan is enchanting.!!!

i loved him!!!!

ah!! he swimmed in the lake.. and then just walked away.. it was so mayank-ish!!

i loved the part..

update soon..(pretty please even if i am being ridiculous and greedy)

take care and love,
akansha

p.s. will wait for 7th june then!1(just read your pm)
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Heyyyy sonam
Mysterious update yaar
What kinda person is vivan
One moment he is happy n other angry???
But loved the update...
Continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
all the parts were awesme..it was really a treat to read..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
awesome update thanks 4 d treat daer n thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice updts
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay guys ... to clear it out .... it's nothing like Twilight please don't compare them ..... please wait to see what it is and please don't make assumptions .... it's nothing borrowed or inspired ... it's all MY concept ...... thanks ...
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago

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