Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Heyyyy sonam
Great update yaar
Loved mayur
Do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Woho..

You kept your promise...

i am so happy..

i loved nisha.. and vivaan.... the guy amazes me completely... i so so so so so loved this update...

i am so so waiting for the next update..I love your story

Please do update soon..

Loads of love,
akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
it was a wonderful part
simply loved it
n thanks a ton for pm
Luv Marium
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
awwwwwwww
the beginning was so real cute
loved it so much
thanks for the pm
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
omg
the chapter on feelings was so cute
loved reading it
awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
omg
the chapter drenched was so rocking
just lovely
i hated Vivaan so much for his harsh words
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
a song
just perfect
their dance was sooooooo awesome
really lovely
loved the part
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
chapter
'the words'
just awesome
i loved it
the conversation between Vivaan n Nisha was so sweet
thanks for all the pms
n sorry for the late comments
thanks again
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Friends


Sam and Grace moved to the breakfast hall whereas Nisha moved towards the graveyard thinking about the previous night when she saw Clare moving towards her ...
Clare - Hey Nisha, how are you doing?
Nisha - I am fine ....
Clare - Good, by the way, I heard you were the best dressed last night, congrats sweetie!
And gave her a warm hug, Nisha felt good and returned the warmth ...
Nisha - Why weren't you there yesterday?
Clare (scared) - Ahm .... it's just .... I was working on my things .....
Nisha sensed that Clare did not wish to talk about it, so she didn't push the topic further ...
Nisha - Clare, did you see Vivaan?
Clare (naughtily) - Him? No ... i didn't, why? Okay, i am in a hurry ... all the best with your man, i mean your partner ... (and winked at her)
Nisha (nervously) - Ahm ... thanks ....

As Nisha started moving forward. she thought about what Clare meant .... she sat on the bench, drowned in herr thoughts when someone shut her eyes from behind .....
Nisha - Grace!
Grace - How did you recognize me?
Nisha - Just like that ....
Grace (smiling) - So, did you find him?
Nisha - No .....
Grace - Nisha, you mind me asking a question?
Nisha - Of course not .... you are my best friend ...
Grace - Thanks, ahm .... do you kinda like Vivaan .....
Nisha shot up her eyes to Grace's eyes, she knew there was no point in lying .... so she simply nodded ....
Nisha - I don't know why? But I feel a pull towards him ... like he is some kind of a magnet .... I can't help it .... it's never happened before, he is like conquering my heart, my thoughts, my mind ... my heartbeats increase; my heart starts pumping fast when he is near .... I can feel his presence without even looking at him .... his touch melts me .... I simply lose myself when he is near or when he looks into my eyes .... I can just go on and on talking about him ...
Grace - I realize that .... you know, you don't just simply like him .. you are madly, crazily, truly, totally, head over heels kind fallen in love with him ....
Nisha - I know .... but it's of no use .. he totally hates me ... I know it, I feel it but I don't mind, I still love him ....
Grace - But why do you think he hates you ...
Nisha - Because of his actions ...
Grace - Right!! the way he helped you to find your room or the day after when he held you when you were falling or when he saved you in the library or when yesterday he danced with you so passionately or when he safely escorted you to your room ... yes his actions, right?
Nisha - Ahm ... Grace, please don't give me any hopes ... I know he hates me, he told me to stay away ....
Grace - Oh ....
Nisha - And, he told me to stop following him when actually I never followed him ... I swear, never ...
Grace - Hmph! Okay, then stalk him ...
Nisha - Grace! He already hates me ... now you want me to actually stalk him! I thought you are my friend!
Grace - Fool! you don't know anything .... see if he thinks you stalk him then you have the permission to actually go on board and stalk him ....
Nisha - Really! Don't you think it's wrong?
Grace - Come on! You love him ... he is spoiling your nights, I think it's fair enough ....
Nisha - Hmmm ... (convinced) okay, so what shall I do?
Grace - Hmm .. let's first go and see his file which has 'everything' about him...
Nisha - But that's the part of the administration ....
Grace - How do you think, I know everything about you?
Nisha (smiling) - Oh ....
Both the girls laugh and hug each other ....
Sara came out of the blue ....
Sara -Hey ...
Nisha & Grace (startled) - Hey, when did you come?
Sara - When you girls were sharing a friendly hug .. by the way, did you see Vivaan somewhere?
Grace - Ahm .. in the library ...
Sara - Thanks, carry on .. you girls are so cute ....
Sara went away .....
Grace - By the way, you think Sara and Vivaan?
Nisha - I saw them holding hands and Vivaan said he can only share things with her and she said she is the best girl for him and he agreed ...
Grace - I don't think there is much to this but let's first concentrate on our task 1...
Nisha -Okay ....
Sam entered ...
Sam - Hey, where you girls proceeding?
Nisha - Ahm ....
Grace - Some girls work, why?
Sam - No, I was just getting bored .. but you carry on ... I will join Vivaan in gym .. see you later ...
Nisha - I thought he was in library ...
Grace - I was just trying to send Sara away ... come on let's go ...

Both reached the administration room ...
Nisha - Grace, the camers!
Grace - They are deactivated and I am allowed to enter this place, relax ....
Both opened the drawers and searched his file but it only had the basic information and nothing of their interest ... Both reached the library ...
Grace - Nisha, listen you know if you give too mch attention to these guys, they dislike you so now you have to show it to him that if he is a stud than you too are a diva ...
Nisha - But i am not ...
Grace - Yes you are, trust yourself now come on ... you are the star and you won'y lose or cry ...
Nisha - You knwo Grace, it's an old tick of ignoring and stuff and I don't believe it ...
Grace - Then?
Nisha - I don't know ....

Adam came near Nisha ....
Adam - Nisha, meet me in the graveyard at 6:00 pm please ...
Nisha - But why?
Adam - Please trust your friend ...
He made a puppy face and Nisha as well as Grace melted ... Adam left ...
Grace - I don't think there is any harm in meeting him, he is kinda cute ...
Nisha - Hmm ... you are right ...
Clare (intervening) - Nisha, why don't you just go and have fun with your friends instead ..
Nisha - He is my friend as well, please excuse me, i need to issue a book ...

Nisha went and issued the book Unbearable Lightness Of Being by Milan Kundera ....
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hey wow!!
gr8 i wasn't expecting a update from u today!
this was fab!
i guess adam is upto something!!

move it fast
can't hold on long now!
awww.. u shudn't leave in suspenses :(

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