Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Wow.

Wow..

This story intrigues me..

i love it..

Please please do continue soon..

i am dying to read about Vivaan..

love,
akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
amazing part dear thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Heyyyy sonam
Great update...
No vivan in this update????
Is there any significance of this book
To this story???
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
as i'll be leaving for Mumbai on 29th ... and i have 3 parts in hard copy .. i am posting them ... i'll come back on 7th June so after that will come the next parts ... this story in all has 30 parts ... and the part i m posting now is the 10th part .... thanks all of you for loving t so much .... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Turmoil

As Nisha was moving out, the peon told her that it was her turn to talk on the phone to her dear ones. She bloomed with joy and rushed to the booth to call her parents who knew she was about to call and were waiting for it eagerly. She immediately picked the phone and dialled the number. Her father picket it ...
Nisha - Hello papa!
Papa - Nisha bete, kaisi ho?
Nisha - Main theek hun, aap kaise ho? Mamma kaisi hai?
Papa - Hum dono bilkul theek hai ... tum khush to ho naa ..
Nisha - Haan papa mujhe yahaan koi problem nahi hai ...

She talked to them for 15 minutes and then the phone got disconnected. Nisha was feeling low when she remembered that she had to meet Adam in the graveyard ... As she reached there, she saw a cute preparation for a picnic ..
Adam - Like it?
Nisha - What's this?
Adam - A picnic for two ..
Nisha - Picnic?
Adam - Hmm ... sometimes becoming children s fun, don't you think?
Nisha (smiling) - Hmm ...
Both sat down on the sheet ... Adam pulled out the special cheese sandwiches, orange juice and cakes ...
Nisha (surprised) - Where did you get this all from?
Adam - Let it be a secret for the time being, right now just enjoy it ...
Nisha made a face but continued as she really needed to have fun ...
Adam (nervously) - Nisha, i don't know if I have a right to do this but there is something I wish to give you, please don't say no, it's specially for you ...
Nisha - What?
Adam (looking towards her) - Ah ... there is something on your lips ...
Nisha (wiping) - Here?
Adam - Nope, let me do it ...
Before she could say no, he was really close to her ... she could feel his warm breath on her face but somehow it didn't feel good and was irritating her .. he slowly touched her lips and removed the drop of orange juice from her lips .. his touch made it really uncomfortable and she couldn't stay like that ... she got up and stood a bit far from him ...
Adam - What happened?
Nisha - Nothing ..
He held her wrist softly ....
Adam - Let me give you, your gift ...
Nisha (tensed) - What?
Adam put his handin his pocket and pulled out a small wooden box ..
Nisha - What is it?
He opened it, it was a gold chain with a red rose pendant which shined ...
Nisha - Ahm ... Adam I can't ...
Adam - Please, for my sake ...
Nisha - Adam ...
Adam - Please ...
Nisha - Okay, Adam ...
Before she could say anything, Sara came there ...
Sara - Adam, you are here and I was searching you everywhere ...
Adam (irritated) - Why?
Sara - Come na, bye Nisha ....
And pulled him with her ....
Nisha - I hate her! She will never let me live peacefully!

Saying this she moved towards her room with the gift from Adam but she didn't feel like wearing it ...she kept it on her table and moved to read her novel ... she was too engrossed in the book in no time ... she slowly shut her eyes and started thinking about Vivaan and their moments together, there was something that told her that they were meant to be together but as well that something was stopping them from being together ... with a turmoil in her mind she went to sleep just to see him back in her dream ....

He slowly held her wrist and pulled her towards him and slowly lifted her in his arms and walked towards the light ...
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
oh girl i love u for updating so fast!!!

man this was awesome but short. no worries, u said part 11 and 12 coming soon!!

hehehe impatient now!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Part 8 9 n 10
Thank God in talliness Nisha didnt blabbered much
Vivaan helped her but he was quite rude to her yaar
Missed Vivaan in 9th n 10th update
U really write lil abt him
Liked the way Grace is helping Nisha
Hop they dnt fall in trouble
Grace can ask Sam for help yaar
Didnt lik Adam at all Jus hate him he is really trying to be more close to Nisha yaar
Why jus cant Nisha stop him
Hop Nisha's Dreams do cum true
Plz next tim more update of Vivaan n Nisha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Awesome..

you dunno hw much i love you for posting this so soon..

and we have two more parts? hurrah!!!
i love you i love you..*excited*

please please bring vivaan back.. i love the angry young man!!

update soon..(am i askin too much?)

Love,
akansha
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Fire


Next morning, Nisha met Sam and Grace in the breakfast hall ....
Nisha - Good morning ...
Sam&Grace - Good morning, looking quite happy ....
Nisha - Hmm ... cuz yesterday i talked to my parents, it felt so good but after 15 minutes it got disconnected .. i don't know how?
Sam - Because you are allowed to talk only for 15 minutes, every month ....
Nisha - That's so cruel ....
Grace - Can't help it ...
Sam (changing topic) - So, on which topic are you guys making your portfolio?
Grace - Global Situation After 100 Years ...
Nisha - Interesting, i am doing my study on Human Emotions ...
Sam - Hmm ... innovative ...
Grace - What about you?
Sam - Football and Life ..
Nisha - Uh ... okay ....
Grace - What?
Sam - No,no ... it's like hw life is like a football match ...
Nisha - Ohh ... then it's quite creative as well philosophical ....
Grace - Hmm ... I can't believe you can come up with such topics ... impressed I am ...
Sam - Thank you (and bowed)
Both the girls started laughing ...
Nisha - Grace, need to talk ...
Grace - Okay, Sam meet you later ...
Sam - Sure, go ahead ...
Nisha - Sorry Sam ...
Sam (interrupting) - It's okay sweetie ...

Grace and Nisha reach the library ....
Grace - What happened?
Nisha - Yesterday, Adam gave me a necklace as a gift but it looks expensive and I don't feel good with him ... he comes too close, sometimes but otherwise he is fun ... but Sara she ruins everything ... she came there and took him away ..
Grace - So, what's the problem? Adam, gift or Sara?
Nisha - I don't know ...
Grace - Okay, but right now the biggest problem is why the hell it's so smoky here ....
Nisha - Something's burning ...
Grace - Shit!! Everyone's gone ... come on Nisha, quick!!!

Both the girls are trapped in the fire as everyone had left by then. Nisha pushes Grace out somehow but is stuck herself ... Grace runs to bring help to save Nisha .... Nisha couldn't see anything ... it was too smoky, the whole library was on fire ... when she collided with a shelf and was getting unconscious and was falling when Vivaan out of blue held her and lifted her in his arms and started moving out of the fire but was unsuccessful ... he decided to jump out of the window ... he hung Nisha on his shoulder and jumped out ... thankfully they fell on the straws and grass and didn't get hurt but Nisha was still unconscious. Grace, Sam, Adam and others rushed towards them. Nisha was immediately taken to to the hospital. Her head was bleeding. Grace couldn't control her tears. Adam and Grace were holding her hands and whispering to her that she'll be alright ... Vivaan had covered her wound with his handkerchief so there is no more blodd loss while Sam was helping others with the fire. Thankfully apart from Nisha no one was injured.

In the hospital, Grace and Adam were taking careof Nisha while Vivaan went to fetch the medicined. Mrs. Danielle was doing the formalities while police were investigating of how the fire broke ...
Mrs. Danielle - Sir, how did the fire actually broke?
Inspector - Ma'am, it was a huge short circuit ... Thankfully, the girl got saved ...

Clare and Sara brought juice for everyone ... slowly Nisha opened her eyes to Grace, Adam, Sam, Clare and Sara ....
Grace - How are you? I am so sorry .. it's all because of me ...
Nisha - No, you are my friend, please don't say this ...
Adam - How are you now darling?
Nisha - I am fine ...
Sam - God, you scared us!
Mrs. Danielle - All of you, move out now ... let her est ...
Clare - Yes ma'am. Come on guys ...

Slowly everyone moved out .... Vivaan tried to enter bt Mrs. Danielle didn't allow him ... Nisha could see him on the door and felt nice to see him there ... He with his eyes assured her that everything's alright .... Mrs. Danielle came inside with a bunch of white roses ...
Mrs. Danielle - These are by your friend ...

Nisha understood who was it and felt that maybe Grace was right about Vivaan's feelings for her but then saw Vivaan hugging Sara outside the door and she shattered inside ... yet again ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
U knw wat ill paka kill this Sara n Adam yaar
Dono kawaab me haddi hai
Update was good but clarify frm where did Vivaan came
Library was toh empty na
Thanx for updating s jaldi jaldi

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