Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10) - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANX A Lot 4 adding my name dear.............am dying to read ur next update............
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Ur stry is jus fab
Loving it
It was really bad for her to see her best frnds die in frnt of her
Vivaan always helps her but before she culd say anythg he jus walks out
Liked Grace n Nisha's frndshp
Adam is flirty
Liked Sara n Clame
Sam didnt met Nisha yet
Loved the updates
Add me to ur pm list
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Drenched


He slowly came near her .... lightly held her hand in his .... she looked like a delicate creature in front of him .... his shirt was ripped and was bleeding .... her eyes were filled with tears .... he was badly hurt .... she couldn't see him in pain .... he couldn't see the tears in her eyes ... his wounds did not matter all that mattered was that she was safe ... he slowly bent near her trembling lips .... she closed her eyes to capture the moment in her mind .... her face bend towards the earth .... he delicately kept his fingers beneath her chin and made her look in his passionate eyes .... and slowly he bend to kiss her and make her his forever ......

Nisha woke up with a jerk .... she was sweating ..... she couldn't understand what was that dream all about .....
Nisha - Ye kaisa sapna tha ...... aaj se pehle, maine aisa sapna kabhi nahi dekha ..... oh god ... maine ye notice kyun nahi kiya .... wo accident wala sapna nahi aaya ...... par ye .... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha tha jaise wo ...... jaise wo Vivaan tha ..... Nisha, control ... ye Vivaan ke baare mein sochna band kar .... wo to tujhse theek tarah se baat bhi nahi karta ....

She got up to wash her face ..... the droplets of water on her eyes ..... sparkled and made her look luminous ..... she freshened up and came out dressed in a white knee-length dress with transparent three-fourth sleeves and took a white stole to cover her from the cold ...... her smooth and silky hair open .....

As she moved out ..... she saw a guy approaching her ... she felt scared and nervous ... he came and stood at a safe distance from her ....
Guy - Hey ...
Nisha (confused) - Hi .....
Guy - Samuel as in Sam .... and you (brought his hand forward)
Nisha slowly shook hand with him and introduced herself ....
Sam - So, are you coming?
Nisha - Uhh ... where?
Sam (shocked) - You don't know?!!?
Nisha (scared) - Ahm .... no ...
Sam - The FOOTBALL MATCH!!
Nisha - Sorry, i am new so i didn't know about it ....
Sam (cooling himself) - oh ... sorry ... but anyways, come with me .... you know even i am the part of the team .... come you would enjoy the game ....
Nisha (bemused) - Uhm .... okey .....

Sam and Nisha started walking towards the ground ..... Nisha felt that Sam was not like the other guys she had an encounter with ... he always kept a safe distance from her ... neither he came too near her nor he ignored her .... she felt nice in his company .... he was making her giggle with his one-liners ...
Sam - Okay, Nish ... listen to this one ....
Sam gave her the nick name Nish within just a few minutes of talking to her ....
Sam - A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing ....
Nisha started giggling ...... both finally reached the ground where the match was going to take place ...
Sam - Nish, go and sit there .... you will get a perfect view of the match ... and just see how i rock this match ....
Nisha - Of course you will .... Sam thanks ...
Sam - For what?
Nisha - For making me so comfortable ....
Sam - My pleasure ....

Nisha sat there where Sam instructed her to sit ..... soon she was joined by Grace .....
Nisha - Hi Grace!
Grace - Hi Nisha! i am so sorry i didn't come to your room ... i was busy with Mr. Daniel ... we had to arrange many things for the match ....
Nisha - It's okay .... i came here with Sam ....
Grace - Oh! good then ...

As the match started ..... Nisha could see only one guy amongst all the violent creatures and was drawn to her dream ......

He kicked the ball with full force .... and thus the match began .....he moved swiftly on the ground as if he was flying .... Nisha was mesmerised and couldn't take her eyes off him ....

Vivaan - Sam! Pass it on!!!
Sam did as what the captain asked ..... till the mid time ... the Oracle team was ahead with 4 goals .... as the match began again .... Sam and Vivaan's combination was clearly heavy on the other team .... last 50 seconds were left .... when Vivaan kicked the ball and an opposite team member pushed him ..... it was a goal, the Oracle team won and Vivaan fell on the ground .....
Nisha - Vivaan!!!
Vivaan was taken to the medical room ....... he was hurt but not too badly ..... as he came out ... Nisha was standing on a corner as she was hesitant to join the crowd waiting for him ....

After the match it was the class time ..... Nisha was sitting alone when Vivaan came and sat with her .... Nisha felt an urge to ask him how he was .....
Nisha - Vivaan .... ab ... tum kaise ho?
Vivaan (coldly) - Theek hun ....
Nisha - Sure .....
Vivaan (irritated) - Look, Ms. Nisha ... maine tumhaari help ki, tumne thanks bola ... baat khatam ... please mere maamlon mein interfere karna band karo .... jab se aayi ho, pareshaan kar diya ... kahin bhi chain se rehne nahi deti ... kabhi library, kabhi lobby, kabhi ground aur kabhi classroom mein ... tumhe ek baar samajh mein nahi aati ki mujhe tumse baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai ... tumhe main ye sab munh par nahi kehna chaahta tha ... par tumne mujhe majboor kar diya ... ab please kya mujhe thodi si shaanti milegi ....

Nisha had a lump in her throat ....
Nisha (shivering) - I ..... I a..m s..orry .....
Vivaan ignored her and continued focusing on the lecture .... Nisha's eyes were brimming with tears, just they didn't come out ... she tried to gather herself and control her feelings ......

As the lecture got over, Vivaan moved out with his group of friends .... Adam came near her ....
Adam - Hey beautiful ...
Nisha - Hi .....
Adam - Come let's go for lunch, i am hungry ....
Without asking her, he pulled her with him .....

He took her to the dining hall and both sat alone on a corner table .... Nisha was really very sad ....
Vivaan - Nisha, what happened? Are you alright?
Nisha nodded ... she was not in a s state of saying anything .... Vivaan's words pierced her heart yet she was feeling a pull towards him as if he was a magnet and she the iron nail .....
Adam kept his hand on her shoulder .... and gently pressed it ....
Adam - Nisha, i know you are missing your parents but please don't be so sad ... i hate to see you so sad ..... i am sorry...
Nisha - Why you are saying sorry?
Adam - Well, i thought someone has hurt you so i thought of saying from him/her so that you cheer up ... now come on flash your 1000 watt smile ... c'mon ....
Nisha smiled ...
Adam - That's like a good girl ....
He slowly kept his hand on hers ...
Adam - Nisha, look i can't see you sad, if anything or anyone is disturbing you just tell me ... i'll rip it ...
Nisha - Adam i am fine ... and thanks for your concern, it's very sweet of you ....
He was gazing at her, she felt uncomfortable and lowered her eyes and slowly pulled her hand .... Adam was still staring at her, when ...
Clare - Hey guys ....
Sara - Hey beautiful people ....
Adam - Hi girls, what are you doing here ....
Clare - Just joined you for lunch, you guys were alone na ....
Adam cribbed but didn't show anything ... Nisha felt relieved when Sara and Clare joined them .... she felt as if she was burning under his gaze ..... Grace joined them too ....
Nisha - Hi Grace ....
Grace - Hi Nisha, you know i am so upset with you...
Nisha - Me? Why?
Grace - Beacause i was waiting for you and you came here with him ...
Nisha - I am so sorry ....
Grace (smiling) - Relax, i was just kidding ..... come on ... don't take my jokes seriously ....
Everyone started giggling and enjoyed their lunch ......


Precap - Fresher's Ball, Adam advancing towards Nisha ... Vivaan guides Nisha through his eyes ... Grace promises to help Nisha ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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brilliant update dear!
cont. soon
thnx 4 the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice update
Vivaan was too rude
Liked the way Sam was friendly wit her
Didint liked Adam's chipkuness😆
Grace is really sweet
Update soon n l😊il big
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A Song


It was Friday night, after completing her work, Nisha started thinking about the next evening .... it was the Fresher's Ball .... Grace had arranged an evening gown and all the necessary things for Nisha ..... every night before going to sleep, Nisha would thank god for giving her a friend like Grace .....

Slowly, she fell asleep .... and yet again saw Vivaan in her dream, but this time it was different ....

He slowly pulled her near ... his hands locked around her waist perfectly as if they were meant to be there .... her hands on his chest .... she was shying and looking down as he intently gazed into her eyes ... both of them had a beautiful smile on their face ....

Next day with the sunshine falling over her eyes, she noticed she had tears in her eyes ..... maybe she cried all night due to her dream which of course would never come true .......


She went to freshen up and wore a single strip white crushed crape dress of knee-length ..... her hair open and falling over her shoulders ......

She went out to breathe a fresh new day, today they had an off as people including Grace were preparing for the ball ..... Nisha took with her a book she loved .... The Last Song Of Dusk, this was a gift from Benji on her 16th birthday .... she always loved this book as it could make her cry as she could feel the emotions of Anuradha and Vardhmaan their love, their loss .... everything .... she sat on the bench near the graveyard ... as it was peaceful though it was a graveyard and the forest opened there but she started loving this area and spent her lonely time there .....

As she was reading, she felt her heartbeats increasing and she now knew that Vivaan was somewhere near .... suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder ... she turned to look behind, but to her regret it wasn't Vivaan but Adam was there ....
Adam (huskily) - Nisha ....
Nisha (uncomfortably) - Hmm ...
Adam (concerned) - Why are you sitting alone?
Before she could answer he sat there beside her ......
Nisha - I was just reading my favorite novel ....
Adam - Which is it?
He took the book from her hand slowly, rubbing his fingers with hers .... she folded her fingers ....
Adam (little jealous) - Who is Benji?
Nisha (couldn't understand his tone) - He is my friend ....
Adam slowly kept his hand on her fist .....
Adam - Nisha, i know you miss your friends .... but i promise i'll always be there with you, for you. Don't be sad ... i can't tolerate it when you are sad .... (pressing her hand) please smile for me ....

Nisha smiled at his friendliness ... he was so soft-spoken and so sweet with her ..... her thoughts automatically wandered to Vivaan, who neither was her friend nor he was sweet or soft-spoken ... at least with her ..... but still she loved him and with this ... she quickly removed her hand from beneath Adam's ..... they talked for a while .... Adam would either touch her hand or her cheek while talking to her .... she thought that some people have this habit ...... her eyes suddenly went to a figure standing a little far from them ..... it was Vivaan with a guy ....

She couldn't remove her eyes from him, he with his eyes, ordered her to move from there and go away from Adam .....
Nisha (thinking) - It's my hallucination or Vivaan just told me to stay away from Adam ... but why would he do this ....

But she obeyed him ...
Nisha - Adam, i need to complete my notes, so see you later .....
Adam - Okay, in the evening ...
Nisha - Yup ....
He slowly bend and gave a her a soft hug .... Nisha didn't like it and when she flicked her eyes to Vivaan, surprisingly he wasn't there anymore ......
Nisha (thinking) - It was a hallucination ......... huh .... he won't give a damn with whom she stays or talks .....

Nisha went inside his room ..... and started reading her book again but couldn't concentrate as Vivaan's image kept coming in front of her .....

It was 6:00 PM ... she wanted to have some water, but unfortunately her jug was empty ...
Nisha - Uhh ... hamesha, hamesha hi main unlucky hoti hun .... kyun bhagwaan? Maine kaunsa paap kar diya?

She cursed her luck and started moving towards the water tank kept for everyone to fill their jugs when she heard and saw what she never wished to .....
Sara and Vivaan were holding each other's hand .....
Sara - Trust me Vivaan .....
Vivaan - I trust you ... that is why i share everything with you ....
Sara (laughing) - You will never get a better listener than me or i should say a better girl than me .. huh?
Vivaan smiled and nodded ...
Sara - Okay, i need to go and please Vivaan ...
Vivaan (smiling) - I will but you know ..... i can only tell this to you ......
Sara - I know ...
She gave him a peck on his cheek and left .....

Nisha felt like a dagger just pierced her heart ..... she felt a lump in her throat ..... she ran back to her room .......
Nisha - Vivaan ... aur Sara ...... aur main kya kya soch rahi thi ......

She cried her heart till 7:00 PM and then got up to get ready ... she couldn't ditch Grace so what if she would feel out of place ..... she went and freshened; had a shower to cool her mind and then got ready ....... she alone walked to the party hall, Grace had told her that she would meet her there .... it was 8:30 PM ....

As she reached the hall, all eyes flicked towards her .... everyone was staring at her in awe ..... she wore a ruffled black silk ball gown (bare shoulders) that hugged her body to her waist before billowing out in wide black tiers ... black lace-up wristlets encased her hands, leaving her white fingers bare and a black flood of hair that fell in thick waves to her waist .... she wore a shy smile on her face with no make-up just a transparent lip-gloss .....

She slowly walked inside with her eyes on the ground, she had no courage to look people staring at her .... Grace walked up to her in a white fish-cut gown ...
Grace - Hey Nisha! You look beautiful ...
Nisha - Thanks ... same with you ....
Grace - So, do you like the party?
Grace's eyes were set on her face .... Nisha was sure she could read her expressions ....
Nisha - Beautiful, just like you .... ahm ... but why is everyone staring at me?
Grace smiled at her innocence ... Grace knew that Nisha had no idea of how beautiful she is .... Grace kept her hand on Nisha's shoulder ....
Grace - Because, someone is looking like the epitome beauty and trust me it's not a hyperbole ...
Nisha blushed ... her cheeks turning pink and making her look even more beautiful ... Adam entered the scene in a white three-piece suit with a black tie ...
Adam (gazing at Nisha) - Grace, it's so beautiful .... truly looks magical .....
Nisha knew what or about whom Adam was talking ... he was a friend but today his behavior was getting her goosebumps .....
Clare - Adam, come na .....
Clare pulled Adam with her while Grace and Nisha stood there talking when Sam entered the scene ... in a white two-piece suit with a white shirt a black tie ....he looked really handsome ...
Grace - Someone's looking like a gentleman today ....
Sam - Someone's looking sexy today ....
Grace rolled her eyes ....
Sam - Nisha, you look like a princess today .... totally out of the world ....
Nisha - Thanks Sam, you too look handsome ... excuse me i'll just go and have water .....

She went to have water when she noticed who was standing near her .... it was none other than Vivaan... he was wearing a black pant, white shirt and a black tie with waist-jacket which embraced his muscular body .....
Vivaan - Hi ....
Nisha (scared) - Hi ....
Vivaan - Don't worry, bahut elegant lag rahi ho .....
Nisha couldn't believe her ears and shot her eyes on him ... he took the glass and air toasted to her and went away ......
Nisha (thinking) - Isne such mein aisa kaha?

The party was on ... and everybody was enjoying it except Nisha who felt lonely amongst the crowd ... Grace was the host of the party ......
Grace - Okay guys ... now something special is coming .... the best looking man and the best looking girl are going to be selected and then they will be dancing to a beautiful romantic number ... so everyone ready!?
Everyone screamed yes!!! the hall went black ... and suddenly two spot lights started moving in the hall .... and finally stopped on ..... Vivaan and Nisha ....
Nisha was hell scared while Vivaan was really casual about it .... everyone applauded for them ... Vivaan slowly walked towards Nisha who was feeling very shy and nervous ... Vivaan forwarded his hand towards her ....
Vivaan - May I?
She smiled and slowly gave her hand in his ... she felt as if time just stopped and everything was a painting which would never change ...
He held her hand delicately and took her with him to the dance floor .... everyone applauded as they stepped on the dance floor .... even though Nisha knew that Vivaan could never be hers but still she wanted to live this moment when they dance together maybe for the first and the last time .....

The music begins ... they both stood a bit far from each other ... Nisha was feeling nervous ... she held her wrist with her hand and was looking down ... when suddenly in a fraction of a second Vivaan pulled her near him by holding her wrist and softly kept his hand on her waist ...
It's the things that you do So physical he whispered to her to look into his eyes ... she slowly lifted her eye lashes and looked straight into his deep eyes ... It's the things that you say So flammable he twirled her away and then again in a circular motion pulled her near .... she couldn't stop her heart from skipping beats ... You know I can't resist, boy it's such a shame she remembered Sara ... as he wrapped his hands around her while her back touched his chest and both swayed to the music That you belong to another he twisted her while she bent behind .... his hand around her waist and the other hand clasped with hers while her on his shoulder ... I don't wanna hurt nobody he pulled her up in a jerk and both stared in each other's eyes But my heart just can't hold back he swirled her and again pulled her near ... Its' the way you make me feel he held her from her waist and pulled her close The way that you make feel he was now swirling her as she held his finger ... Spinning my world around she moved away while he was holding her hand ... her heartbeats increased ... he pulled her ... she was totally depended on him as their shoulders touched while they stood in a slanting manner with his hand on her waist and hers around his shoulder, she kept looking at him Tell me, how can i walk away and he brought her in his arms .. her hands around his neck and his around her waist ... I don't care what they say ... she simply looked in his eyes with love in hers I'm loving you anyway he pulled her back and and held her hand in his, her hand on his shoulder and his on her waist as both rocked to the music It's the way you make me feel (music) both clasped their hands and bend behind and then as she moved her left foot towards him, he would move behind his left one .... and their hands moved in the same manner .... both stretched their right arms and moved in a semi-circle without removing their eyes from each other's face and again moved anti-clockwise holding the same motion ... (music ends) he folded her arms behind her head, she bent behind ... their faces so close ... she could feel his warm breath on her I'm gonna make you mine It's not impossible both stood near each other, their opposite hands clasped ...as he started bending towards her side so she could bend diagonally Got to let you know a strand of hair came on her face, he blew it away I am irresistible he swirled her again and would alternately pull her near Baby, can't you see, you're the one for me he bend her again and touched her neck with his lips But you belong to another he twisted and lifted her in his arms, her back touching his chest, her feet in the air as her head rested on his shoulder and both moved in a circle I don't wanna hurt nobody he put her down, she started moving ahead but he pulled her back and wrapped his hands around her But my heart just can't hold back she looked towards him when he held her waist and lifted her in the air ... she closed her eyes snapping this moment in her mind It's the way you make me feel The way that you make me feel Spinning my world around, Tell me how can I walk away, I don't care what they say, I'm loving you anyway, It's the way you make me feel he twisted her in the air, his one hand holding her from her stomach while other holding her stretched leg ... her hand on his face as both swirled to the music Make me feel, make me feel Ooh make me feel, make me feel he slowly put her down, making her face him ... his hands pulled her closer from her waist, their foreheads touched each other, her hands around his neck ... both stared in each other's eyes ... as the music slowed down .... both just swayed in each other's arms When I look into your eyes, Every time you smile at me she slowly looked down, unable to meet his eyes Oh, I go weak inside, Baby i just can't hide, My lo.....ve he twirled her as the music rose and again pulled her near in a circular motion and again twirled her to the opposite direction It's the way you make me feel The way that you make me feel and swirled her as she held his finger and he held her other hand Spinning my world around he pulled her near in a jerk and intently looked in her eyes Tell me how can i walk away, I don't care what they say, I'm loving you anywayAnyway and slowly she bent in his arm and he still kept looking in her eyes as they stood for the final pose It's the way ... you make me ... feel

Everyone applauded as the lights came back .... and the hall was once again glowing .... Nisha was flushed and was looking down when Vivaan clasped her hand and bowed ...

Later in the party, Nisha couldn't remove her eyes from him and coincidently wherever she stood, he was somewhere near by .... Grace walked towards her ....
Grace - You danced lovely, Nisha ...
Nisha (softly) - Thanks ....
Grace - You love him, don't you?
Nisha (shocked; stammered) - Uhm ... how ... do you .... know?
Grace - It's in your eyes .....
Nisha - Oh my god ....
Grace - Don't worry, i will help you in winning his love ... already i can see that he cares for you ...
Nisha - No, Grace .... he likes Sara and she also reciprocates the same feeling .... it's just one-sided love ...
Grace - I don't think so that Sara likes him .... look ...
She pointed somewhere, Nisha followed it and saw Sara closely dancing with Ronald also a team member of football ... Nisha was shocked ......

Alright guys .... next update after 25th as I am going out of town
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update dear.....but ur next update is after 25th..thats so long..anyways i will be waiting here 4 ur update........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update...
Will be waiting for your next update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Update was really good
Evn i thk Vivaan cares for her but jus behaves lil saduly😆😆
Their dance was fab
Sam n Grace talk nicely to each other
Adam is getting to coozy wit Nisha
Hop Nisha jus shouts him back once for touching her
Wats did Sara ka chakkar yaar
Will be waiting for update wit lots more Vivaan n Nisha😉
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heyyyy sonal
😍awww loved vivan n nisha's dance
i was just imagining them dancing so perfectly so gracefully
m in love with ur ff seriously
do continue soon
n thanx for pm

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