'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
Agn a senti ending
Means why yaar
Pehle hi life me kam gham nahi hai that u evn give stories a sad ending
I jus dnt understand it why
Anyways it was senti part
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Posted: 15 years ago
vi nice update
plz yaar dont seperate mayur😭
thanks for the pm
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi neela well now i started to read the update ........

well this is my thinking when some body was feeling extrem pain which can't handle by god then he always send there rain to heal the pain becaus rain always have relation with love and pain .......i think so .....so whenever rain come i always think there is somebody whose heart broke today ..........

and now update...... nupur's condition just remind me something....we alwys ask god questions and thought he will gave us answer ya this is right he gave us the answer in different manner.......

pyar ka first word p it's meaning is only pain...nothing else lakin vo pain hamera liye na hoker uske liye jisse hum pyar kartein ahi ...ab nupur is liye pershaan hai maynk ke pain ke liye she was feeling sad for maynk...........yaar why can't her father tell her befors so she can't let her heart to feel for anybody ..at least she can't suffer like that jab uska mukkader pehle hi likh diya tha uske papa na phir kyo usse nahi batya taki vo apne dil ko dadken nahi deti ...kabhi nahi sochti kissi or ke barre aaj ek beti apni aap ko kitna akela feel ker rahi hai and only nupur's father is responsible for this...........

maynk his every word tell his true love but i know when nupur's papa will be with his wife's promise i can't understand when he love his wife so much that after her death he want to fullfill her promise than why he can't understand maynk and nupur's love

i know in this fight nupur's father will win .....being a daughter i understand her dilemma.......every daughter will do this.............

and abotu amynk i know in your next update we will know hwat happen with maynk .it is very taugh for maynk to leave nupur............but god know whose love will win.....

ab aapne itna emotional update diya hai to kuch sun lijiye....


apni dairy mein kuch likha tha jyada acha nahi hai per write ker rahey hai .kya pata acha lage.......

"haale dil bayaan na ker payenge.....
teri ruswai ka gumm na sah payenge......
ho gayi agar ruswa hum se
to is duniya mein na jee payinge
na mer payenge........."


"pyar karne ki sazaa sirf tanhai hai
her ashiq ne yahi sazaa payi hai
tanha zindgi guzri bus ab maut hi milan ki perchai ahi"

vasse to in ka aap ki update se koi matlab nahi hai but write ker diya hai

nice update

update soon

i hope humne aap ko bore nahi kiya hai with my views
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Posted: 15 years ago
Neela 😭



U wrote so bfully as per usual but this style of urs has me in a food of tears... itna pareshaan kyun kar rahi ho humein? 😆
I read the reply to my last post... only just started? Really? And i thot it was nearly ending... with a happy end of course. But then i saw the end to this part... kya Neela tum bhi... CVs se inspiration le rahi ho kya? 😆 Twist pe twist diye jaa rahi ho... but i must say ur doing a fantastic job coz i wanna read the next part as soon as i finish reading one part.
Aur tumhe likhne mein aanson aa rahi hai? What else do u have in store for us? 😲
U know i hope this Raj is the one to say no to the marriage coz he loves someone else, maybe Suhaani.. 😆 Or maybe khadoos papa realises that Raj is not the guy for his daughter and Mayank is her only raj, dil ka aur maan ka bhi. I hope something good happens but before we get to that let me comment on this part first..
I loved the fact that Mayank came to see her... as soon as i read Nupur was on terrace i was waiting for Mayank's entry into the scene and finally he arrived... and man he really did put his blood, sweat and tears into getting their... and then mr khadoos came and ruined the scene. I saw some hope when Mayank gave his speech, i thot how can anyone say no to that but i was wrong, so wrong... mr khadoos went down the emotional blackmailing root. 🤢 And obviously being the adaarsh beti that she is she chose to give into the blackmail leaving a heartbroken Mayank. 😭 I feel so bad for him but i know that even he probably wouldn't have agreed with Nupur coming to him like that coz she wouldn't have been happy but still. 😭
Ok now that last part... Neelaaaaaaa.. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Ek baat batao.. Mayank ne jaan bujkar gira ya it was an accident.. i thot it was a bit of both for some reason u know... and now i am seeing the significance of that Raja wala story..
Neela i beg of u plz plz plz... Mayank cannot and will not die, Mr Khadoos will sort out his head and realise what is right, Dadi will support Nupur who will support Mayank and Bi will stay as she is.. plzzz?
Save Mayank and Mayur's love plz. Ok i will stop now but plzz.. I am requesting with a hug. 😆🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey neeela
awesum yr
sad and well described feeligs
but shocking promo
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy neela
Can understand nupurs condition very well
Feeling so sad for both
Ohhh no please mayu ko kuch mat karna
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Neela I hate u kitna sad update tha I literally cried but as usual fAntastic update
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Posted: 15 years ago
its amazing dear..........
u did a great job
dont let mayank die i cant bear dis plzzzzzzzzzz
plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Faria...kemon acho tumi? mone to hocche tomar obostha beshi bhalo na. In fact tumi aka na...tomar moto onekei Nupur er mrittu niye bicholito onek...amio kintu tomader dole. Amar obostha ashole aro beshi kharap...amar o ekta Nupur chilo...ei Nupur er shathe ami takeo hariye felechi 😕 2 Nupur er chole jawa mene neya shohoj na...

Anyways...amar FF niye matha ghamiyo na eto beshi. Tomra shobai bhul predict korcho. Nupur er mrittu tomader etto insecure koreche je charidike tomra shudhu mrittu dekhcho. Relax ...calm down. karo mrittu ghotanor moto shahosh ei muhurte amaro nai. tobe hain...unfortunately the track is going to be down for the next few chapters. So be strong and lets hope for a happy ending 😊 Take care honey...r mon kharap korona. Hold onto the sweet memories that are immortal.

-Neela




Nila
tomar reply pore ekhon ami kisuta better feel korsi
shotti kore bolsi nups mara jawate ami etotai shocked hoyesi j ekhan theke normal life a ashte kisuta time lagbe
May b u think i m great emotional fool- right??????
ekta fictional char er jonno eirokom korar kono mane hoy. shobai shunle hoyto hashbe.
kintu ki kora ami ashole erokom e
sad type kono kisui amar shojjo hoy na

ami jani koidin por ami abar thik hoye jabo , mjht mayur k hoyo onektai bhule jabo- kintu j koshto ta ami ekhon pacchi sheta to r ignore kora jabe na taina!!!!!!


tomar update poreu amar obsotha ta r o kharap hoyesilo.
kintu jokhon tumi bolle etar ekta happy ending hobe , tokhob theke kisuta bhalo lagse.


taratari update koro
ami odhir agrohe opekkha korsi
bhalo theko

r doa koro jate kore mjhr er ei shock theke nikje taratari recover korte pai

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG just superb update
very nicely written could feel the nupurs n mayanks pain
hey but please dont seperate mayur ya
already in mjht we have faced it
but not here
continue soon 😊

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