'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy neela
Amazing update yaar
Nupur n mayanks letter were amazing
Feeling so sad for nupur
Don't know wat she will do now
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

|What is nups gona do???

Update..pls give thid FF a happy ending.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it
sorry for short comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsumd

haey neela di...

Khub bahut khub update...

Nupur ka khat bahut purmaani tha...

Ameena b aur mayank ki baat cheet senti thi..

Aur mayank ki tehreer nupur k liye tasalli bakhs thi..

Par tehreer nupur tak pahunch ne k bajaye nupr k papa k paas pahunch gayi.

Ab mayur ka ek dusre se rabita karne ka akhiri zariya b na raha.

Woh nupur k papa k is bartao k peeche itna bada raaz hai...haye rabba.

Ab mujhe nupr k papa ka royya yeh sab janne k baad theek hi lag raha hai.

Par un logoun ko nupur ko yeh raaz pehle hi batadena chaiyye tha.

Pata nahi ab nupur apna agla kadam kaise uthayegi...uski kaifiyat toh naqabile bardaash hai.

Jaldi se agli update kijiye ga ..agli update ka besabri se intizaar kar rahe hai.

*kulsum*



Hi Kulsum...kaisi ho? hmm aap ki urdu mashalla kaafi tarakki kar gayi hai 😊 kisi ki yaad dila di aap ne. hmm to Nupur ka kaifiyat ka andaaza horaha hai aapko? thats good and its very important that readers understand the situation to justify the progress of the of the story. Anyways thanks for the lovely comments...its good to see these again and even better to be back 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

omg this is the reason

raj

"mohbaat ki kismat mein sirf judaii hai

mile hi sahi magar phir bhi tanhai hai

kyo pedaa karta hai khuda is dil mein kissi or ki chahat

jab usne bichdne ki ye rasam banyi hai "

i eel sad but i know ab nupur apne mom ka promise complete karegi na




Aditiiii...🤗 welcome back hun! exams kaise rahe? tumhari aate hi shayed hum ghayeb hogaye ...isi liye lag raha hai arsa hogaya tumhari shaayerana comments dikhe hue. So good to see those wonderful lines. btw, tum hi batao ab Nupur ko kya karna chahiye? tum agar usski jagah hoti to kya karti? I would love to know that.

-Neela
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Aswathy ...thanks for reading and your comment

@sanjana ..yeh kya hogaya aapko? aap wohi ho na jinse humnain sher churane ka business deal sign kiya tha!!! yeh kya?? ek line ka comment...😲 uhu...nahi chalega...nahi chalega. hum hartal pe utar aayenge agar aisa hi chalta raha to 😉

@shruti...yaar abhi se rona shuru kar diya aur iss plzzz per brake lagaoooo 😆 abhi se yeh haal hai to agle kuch chapters ko to bardasht nahi kar paoge aap! get ready...next ones r going to be a bit...

@sariska...LOL hum bhi MJHT ke cvs tarha nikle 😆 twist per twist!! per TRP raise hua kya? abhi to maar khaane aasar dikh rahe hai 😕

@Samira ...so sweet and thanks for the comment

@sakura ...awww don't be sad yaar. but I will ask the same question to you as well...what would you do if you were in Nupur's shoes??

@jasmeet...tum bhi??? kahan se laaye happy ending ko??

@seher ..thanx yaar! Don't worry abt the short comment...udhaar raha...baad me kabhi lamba sa comment de dena.

Thank you all...such darlings !! and its so good to be back with you guys again ...love u all 🤗

-Neela

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: charming.angel

Finally aapne update kiya........hum kabse iska intezaar kar rahe the...

awwe yeh part padke toh hume rona aagaya......... 😭 bahot hi pyara aur saacha n full of emotions tha..aisa kyun hota hai jisse hum sacha pyar karte hai ....hume itne imtehan kyun dene padhte hai..??.. kyun?? aisa kyun hota hai.....najane mayank aur nupur ki zindagi mein aur kitne imtehaan aaeyge... yeh toh bus aap hi jante ho... lekin hum yeh nahi kahenge k aap yeh kahani ke happy ending hi karo....kyun life mein kabhi kabhi happy endings nahi hoti haina...lekin kabhi kabhi hoti bhi hai..!!..😊

nyways this part was damn emotional loved it to d core 👏
muahh !! 😳



kaisi hai aap Fatima? ermm aap ke sawalon ka jawab nahi hai hamare paas. kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai k yeh aazamayishen khud Khuda hi kerwate hai. dil ko azaad jo ker diya unhone aur jab bhi hum dil se faisla lete hai to unhe apni bandon per shubha hoti hai. tab woh unke imtihan lete hai. dono soorton me hi jeet unhi ki hai 😊 kher...accha lagah k hamare alfaaz abhi tak aap ki dil tak pohunch rahe hai warna itna accha comments dekhne ko nahi milte 😊 khush rehiye...hamesha

-Neela
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel


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Aditiiii...🤗 welcome back hun! exams kaise rahe? tumhari aate hi shayed hum ghayeb hogaye ...isi liye lag raha hai arsa hogaya tumhari shaayerana comments dikhe hue. So good to see those wonderful lines. btw, tum hi batao ab Nupur ko kya karna chahiye? tum agar usski jagah hoti to kya karti? I would love to know that.

-Neela</font>


abhi aap ko pm kiya hai padke jawab jarur dejiye hum intezaar ker rahey hai
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

Thats the world's biggest dilemma u put Nupur in

IS her love for Mayank and his love for her important

or is it her mom's last wish and her dad's determination to fulfil it more important..
ITs a tough one ..for some one is the obvious choice for others, the other is..
but then I think both are equally difficult decisions
looking fwd to ur next update



hmm..you're right. and I must say...it was deliberate. The decision Nupur takes now has to be justified and accepted by you readers and hence it is important that the complexity of the problem is fully understood. Then again...you being one of the critics of MJHT forum (and as I always appreciated the way you put your thoughts across) let me ask you the same question...what would you do? If you were Nupur?? At this stage the right thing to do and most probably the practical step would be to go with the parents but then again its about your whole life which you think you can live making such sacrifice but later on you regret...you suffer and this may cause you to be unhappy which will ultimately effect your parents. So really...what do you do?

By the way, on a more personal note...Happy Belated Birthday! Sorry I missed it but I saw the thread and looks like you had a bash 😉 I wish I was there with my hot seat questions...never mind ...next year...oh one more thing..thanx...birthday thread me hamara ziker kiya ...that comment made me present on that day and I am thrilled about it 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 15 years ago
Neela 🤗 Welcome back, hpe ur better. 😊
Kya update tha yaar.. those letters were bfully written. 👏 U could feel exactly how Mayur are feeling through those letters, its so intense, so powerful, u done an awesome job on those. And Ameena bi, what a sweetheart.. loved her convo and relationship with Nupur and even the way she likes Mayank and he also trusts her but poor woman got found out by khadoos Mr Bhushan who tore up Mayank's letter. 😒😭
Neela maat rulao na, we Mayurians are shedding enuf tears these days, meri baat mano aur Raj ko hatado. 😛 Ok seriously tho, what a twist u put in.. wasn't expecting it.. i thot he would try and zabardasti ger her married off but this is just shocking... the marriage is already fixed.. 😲 But it does reflect real life also, ppl do fix up rishtas from as early as a child's birth so well done to u for adding such a realistic twist to the story. 👍🏼
BUT i am not happy. 😆 I want Mayur and Mayur only, i dnt care if this Raj is like Nupur's DDLJ wala Raj, only Mayank is made for her and she for him. So here I am begging u, plz dnt give this one a sad ending like KAJ.. eventho u know how much i loved that story... but plz reunite them... continue soon. 😃

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