'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

haye agar aap iskadar shayari pe shayari farmate jayenge to hume apke is ff se aitbar ho jayega


haan main ne aitabar ker lia hai

zameen se asmaan tak ka safer

asaan nahi hai

lakin main ne yah safer

ikhtiaar ker lia hai

khuud ko azaab -e- jaan main

giraftaar ker lia hai

haan'..!!

main ne apke ff pay atiabaar ker lia hai

sanjana

Originally posted by: annie07

Awesome update Neelu..........i love this ff

hey Neela :)

I m like this --> 😃 after reading this update :) :) :)

It was beautiful :) I love the language (urdu ie) ...its beautiful to hear people conversing in it and to shaayari is simply heavenly.. I absolutely loved the way the whole update flowed, one after the other, ever-connected and always in a beautiful pattern

Well done and keep it up :) :) :)

Originally posted by: myownarea

hey Neela :)

I m like this --> 😃 after reading this update :) :) :)

It was beautiful :) I love the language (urdu ie) ...its beautiful to hear people conversing in it and to shaayari is simply heavenly.. I absolutely loved the way the whole update flowed, one after the other, ever-connected and always in a beautiful pattern

Well done and keep it up :) :) :)

Originally posted by: neelresh

wow...Sanjana!!!! tum bhi 😲 kya khoob likkha hai! ek kaam karo yaar hamare iss FF k liye shaayeri tum hi likh diya karo...aur bhi accha chalega..I swear 😊 I am sooooo happy to see all these hidden talents...by GOD! saare ki saare chupe rustam nikle aur humain lagah ek hum hi hai 😆 Promise me har comment per aise hi kuch na kuch likhte rahoge. agar nahi likkha na to agli baar hum PM nahi karne wale tumhe 😛

Bless u my dear...and thanx for the wonnnnnnnderful comment 👏

-Neela


p.s. yeh aap k liye (edited)


lafzon me chupaye hue jazbaat parh liya aapne
kuch hasratein hai dil ke….kuch khwahishon ki dastaan
iss aitbaar se haqeeqat kar diya aapne
hum lakh churaye nazrein magar
har nazar ko mohabbat ker diya aapne
zindagi ne wafa na ki to kya hua
kuch pal k liye sahi….gham-e-shaam ko rukhsat ker diya aapne