'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 10

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Originally posted by: kulsumd

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noted and thanx 😊

Wah wah Neela Ji...

Main aakhir apne form mein aa hi gayi...

Aaj ki shayari to kya baat thi! Aur us Qayenaat ki taqdeer mein Mayank aur Nupur dono ki nazar padi!

Mayank ne Nupur ko taufa de diya... Aur Nupur aur Mayank to ek doosre pe fida ho hi chuke hain...

Mayank aur Nupur ke raaste bhar ki guftagu humein bohot pasand aayi...

Aakhir kal Maynk Nupur se milna chahte hai cafeteria mein...

Hum intezaar kar rahe hain agle part ka...

Humara bohot saara pyaar...

-Mina

waah waah waah!!!!!!!!
Aapne to humari umeedo se kaafi badkar likha hain...
Hamare paas alfaaz hi nahi hain, ki hum kaise aapki taarif kare.....
Mayur ke ishk ki shurwat ho chuki hain.... Aapne to kamaal hi kar diya.
Hum unki agli mulaakat ka intezaar karenge.......

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Mein toh woh kavita padke mar gayi Neela.. kya likha haun yaar.. Sahi.. bahut sahi tha.. and I so loved Mayank's gesture.. such a priceless and treasured possession he gifted to Nupur... Such a beuatiful heart he has got... and then he walks her home too... Gr8...

Ittefaq se aap se takra gaye

yeh bhi pata na chala hame

Yeh sab raahein hame hamari

Manzil ki aur le jaa rahe hain

khabar nahin aage yeh raahein

Humein kiss mode par le jayegi

Par itni khwaish hain har muqaam

par hamari kismat aapse mil jaaye.

Amazing update!!!!!!!

wow!!! Divya..yeh tum kya kar rahi ho yaar...iss tarha ki comment karoge to log hamare FF ko chhodker tumhare comments parhne lagenge 😭 kyun meri dukaan bandh karne per tuli hui hoooo 😭 😭

LOL...waqai yaar...kya kammal likkha hai. hum bohat inspired hue. and I will say it again...the comments and feedback that I am getting...they seem to be far more interesting than the FF itself. ab to comments ke liye hi sahi..likhna parega. Thanks sweetheart...and as usual saath nibhaate rehna aise hi. yeh raaste to manzil se bhi zyada haseen lagne lage hai ab 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: sam-18

waah waah waah!!!!!!!!
Aapne to humari umeedo se kaafi badkar likha hain...
Hamare paas alfaaz hi nahi hain, ki hum kaise aapki taarif kare.....
Mayur ke ishk ki shurwat ho chuki hain.... Aapne to kamaal hi kar diya.
Hum unki agli mulaakat ka intezaar karenge.......

Samidha...abhi tak nick nahi change kiya?? 😊 But thanks for your awesome gruesome comments 😉 I am glad you liked it..taarif kaise karoge??? ermmm kar to diya 😊

Take care aur scraps me mulaqat to hoti rahegi na??

-Neela

Heyyyy neela
It was such a lovely update
I just love ur Urdu
Loved the whole shayari
Mayank gifted his biggest possesion to nupur...amazing
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

Originally posted by: neelresh

noted and thanx 😊

ua most welcome di.
Waise mein ek aur baar kehti hun aaj ki update wakai mein bahut rocking thi. 👏

lovely updt
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: neelresh

wow!!! Divya..yeh tum kya kar rahi ho yaar...iss tarha ki comment karoge to log hamare FF ko chhodker tumhare comments parhne lagenge 😭 kyun meri dukaan bandh karne per tuli hui hoooo 😭 😭

LOL...waqai yaar...kya kammal likkha hai. hum bohat inspired hue. and I will say it again...the comments and feedback that I am getting...they seem to be far more interesting than the FF itself. ab to comments ke liye hi sahi..likhna parega. Thanks sweetheart...and as usual saath nibhaate rehna aise hi. yeh raaste to manzil se bhi zyada haseen lagne lage hai ab 😊

-Neela