Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20
wowwwwwww...
awesomeeeeee start dear..
it ws amazingggggg... 👏 👏
luved it..
pllzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm

Thanks a ton dear for reading and liking it..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sayankgunur

WOW!
oky i'll start from the beginning, as soon as i got your PM, i shoved all my books aside and got ready to read your Ff, witha teethy smile 😃.

It was Amazing. The way described Samrat's memories and the appearance of 'the girl' (okay, Gunjan 😆), It felt as if they are right their infront of us, every peice of detail was described so soothingly and it created a magical atmosphere.

But their was one bad thing, it ended and i was dragged out of the world of your FF, for atleast five minutes i was just thinking about it.

It was spellbounding Aysha, continue soon, and will be waiting desperately for your PM 😊

Okay, i'll also start from the beginning.. Thank u sooo sooo much for such a lovely reply. Awww, u're sooo sweet.. *hugs*

I'm sooo glad that u liked this chapter and cud visualize things happening. Don't worry dear, i'll continue soon Insha Allah.

Thanx again dear. Ur comments have really encouraged me. 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

Wow loved the update dear . it was worth the wait . pls continue soon don't keep us waiting like the last time

Awww, thankx a lot for liking it dear.

And i'm sorry for making u wait for this chapter. I'll try my best to update jaldi jaldi now..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: kavya.b
heck!!! i wanna reply to it in detail.... will do it soon

in short, i jus loved it... sajan as faculty in a uni is out of my reach

Thanx Kavya 🤗

I'm extremely glad that u liked it.. And yes, SaJan as faculty..interesting na (i hope i can reach there)???

Looking fwd to ur detailed reply..

Loads of love to u!!!

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: DiyaS
Just posting a quick reply ... loved it!!!

Waiting for the next part! I'll reply in detail when I'm back 😃

Diya, this is a surprise.. I wasn't expecting that u'll read it so soon. 🤗

Thanx a lot for ur quick and sweet, but extra encouraging reply..

Now i'm waiting for the detailed one coz i'm dying to know how u found this whole idea, CS and the first chapter *fingers crossed*.

Loads of love!!!🤗

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: marisol45
it was simply beautiful.
nice part and very well written.
cant wait for the story to unfold
continue soon😊

Thanks a lot dear..

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sharma.nat
lovely update cont. soon

Thanks a lot dear..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
awesome aweome awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee oh god their first meet is so perfect by god mai toh bata hi nahi sakti how much i loved it to the core
awesome yaar plz continue son now

i cant wait to read more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon i beg u i want to read more

anyways thank u so much for the pm and again ur first part was mindblastig one

lots of love

sana

Thank u sooooooooo much Sana.. Awww!! I'm soooooo glad that u thought their first meeting to b perfect.

And hey, don't beg dear, i'll update the 2nd chapter soon.. I'm writing it for u all, and it feels great to know abt ur feedback and lovely comments. U rock dear!!!

Thanks again sweety.. ur comments have really encouraged me..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

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loved the updateee!!!

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ayeshaaa!!! 1st sorry for the late comments...was a bit busy and i just cudn't not write a bigg comment after reading ur chapter!!!
is this really ur 1st FF??? coz to me it seemed as if ur experienced in all this!! i mean the way u described samrat....
He had name, fame, money, friends, and everything, still he was lonely, he was "tanha". There was darkness all around him, the darkness of his heart. He laughed but never smiled.So, he had compromised wid life, but never lived life.
OMGGGG....this brought tears to my eyes...the way sams sooo lonely in his life...no one to share his feelings wid...awww...i felt like giving him a huge hug!! (well don't worry boy...ur soul mate it right around the corner...u'll be complete soon enuf😉😆)
and the way u wrote abt samrats past...his memories of college...of his life in india...his frnds...*sigh*...everything was written sooo beautifully!!! hats off to u ayesha!! fantastically written!!!
ahhh....sajan meet already!!! :D after reading ur reply to my comment i thot dey wud meet after a few chapters...soo i was extra happy wen i read the sajan scene!! :P...and OMGGG ayesha....d way u described gunjan....soooo soooo beautifully written!!!👏 sajan r already attracted towards each other....awwww....soooo cuteee!!! and the best bit of the scene was how he cud read her eyes....that is just sooo typical of sajan....to be able to communicate widout any words!! *sigh* awww....she thot he was just a student!!
they both simultaneously and unintentionally turned around, as if some inner urge has forced them to do so.
i dunno what to say now....this scene was sooo soooo sajanish...turning back to see each oder...normally its only gunjan bt in ur FF sam too!! i cud see this scene happening in front of my eyes!! and i can almost see gunjan helping sam in his 1st few days since all this is new to him...or am i imagining too much?? 😆 i soooo loveddd this update!!!! superb workk!!! thanks for the PM!! and plsss continue really soooon!!!

Edited by -Drishti- - 15 years ago