Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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Hello Everyone!!!! Firstly, I'd like to thank u all from the bottom of my heart for the love and appreciation u gave to my first OS (Picture Perfect Moment). I cud never imagine that u'll all will like it this much and ur sweet comments were extremely encouraging, and were truly my confidence booster. I promised some of u that i'll try and write more scenes, but for that we'll have to wait for the show's, basically SaJan's story to move on. I read some MOST wonderful and beautiful FFs, written by the MOST amazing writers, Naveen, Diya, Aahana and Meens, and fell in love wid each one of them. And these FFs motivated and inspired the okayish type of writer in me to try my hand at a concept that i had in my mind for a long time now. So, i thought to bring it to surface and share it wid all u beautiful ppl, in the form of my first FF (obviously on SaJan). I'm giving u the character sketch of my story and if u ppl like it and find it interesting, plzzz let me know. I'll then proceed wid the first chapter.

Just like my OS, this is my first attempt in writing a FF. I've and will try to keep it simple, interesting, and like I always say SaJanish. I hope that u all enjoy reading it.
One last thing guys, there will be different shades in this story, from friendhip, to love, trust, fights (mayb), differences, romance, but being an emotional person myslef, it will be more of an emotional affair, emotional bonding, primalrily of two ppl. And this, u can figure out from the title itself, "tanhayian" and the main theme of it is, despite being surrounded by peope everywhere, Samrat and Gunjan lived a lonely, kind of a deserted life, until...

Tanhayian

Character Sketch:

Samrat Shergill: He did his graduation from one of the leading and most prestigious institutes of Mumbai, Excel College. A smart, young, dashing person, college's heart throb, a sincere friend, an all-rounder throughout his academic life, top grader of his class, basketball champ, and every teacher's favorite student . After graduation from Excel, went to London and did his Maters in Business Administration from a top ranked university. Currently, he's the MD of his own, Management Consultant firm (a partnership business with one of his university friend). By now, u must b thinking," what a perfect life he has".. The answer is NO. He has everything, still nothing. He had a horrible childhood. His parents separated when he was 7 years old, and this created harshness, and bitterness in his life. He stopped believing in relationships and that's why he didn't join his dad's business after completing studies. His father is a successful businessman, so money has never been the problem for him. Infact, ppl consider him to be born wid a silver spoon. Since their divorce, Samrat has been living alone, first in a hostel near Excel and then after his father shifted his business to the US, Samrat moved in his family house and later went to London. His mother lives in Canada and is a successful designer.

Gunjan Bhushan: A perfect combination of beauty and brain. She too is an Ex-Excel student. She entered the college in the term, right after the one in which Samrat left. She did Masters in Business Administration from Excel. Gold medalist of her college, holds the maximum number of records, a brilliant writer and debater, is the most sweet, innocent, helpful, caring, disciplined, intelligent, sensible, strong-willed, dedicated, hardworking, emotional, practical, ambitious, shy and introvert girl, who is contented wid watever she has and is happy in her own sweet shell. Right after her degree completion, due to her extra-ordinary academic achievements, and her charismatic personality, she was offered a job in her own college (Excel) and now she works there as the Program Manager of the Managemetn Sciences Dept, Student's Counselor as well as a Lecturer. Previously as a student, and now as a teacher and counselor, she's loved by everyone in college. According to the Dean, Gunjan's hard work and dedication is the reason of Excel's success. She belongs to a middle class family. Her mother died when she was just 10 years old and her father works in a construction company in Dubai. She lives wid her daughter and her bui (who basically takes care of Gunjan's daughter.)

Pinky: She's Gunjan's daughter. Will soon turn one, is the most cute and adorable baby and is the darling of her mother and maasi Nupur.

Nupur Sharma: She is Gunjan's best friend since childhood. Infact, she's the only friend Gunjan has, and is more like a sister to her, is her confidant, guide, and her biggest support. Nupur is an intelligent, smart and a happy go lucky kind of a girl, with a strong luck line. No, not only luck line, but also a strong love life. She and Gunjan have always been together, studied together, but selected different career paths. Nupur works in a bank and is married to her college mate Mayank.

Mayank Sharma: He also joined Excel College in the same year and term as Gunjan and Nupur. A bright, intelligent, ambitious, smart and hardworking chap, who had and has only two loves in his life. First books, and now Nupur. He's like a brother to Gunjan and is always there to help her. He and Nupur work in the same bank, and both live a happy married life.

Other characters will appear and will be elaborated later as the story unfolds.
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This is the basic layout of my characters. I'm looking fwd to ur response, comments, feedback, and suggestions on it. Plzzz let me know how u found it. Waiting for ur replies.
Loads of love and hugs!!!
Ayesha
Chapter Index:
Introduction & Chapter 1 - Pg. 6
Chapter 2 - Pg. 13
Chapter 3 - Pg. 18
Chapter 4 - Pg. 26
Chapter 5 - Pg. 33
Chapter 6 - Pg. 40
Chapter 7 - Pg. 45
Chapter 8 - Pg. 55
Chapter 9 - Pg. 70
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yippee First one 2 reply 🥳🥳🥳😆😆

OMG Ayesha 😲😲😲 wow Diya, Navz & now u as well my fav writers all writing SaJan FF's gosh hon a dream come true now mads is d only one i am waiting for to join d club

great CS hon but whoa Gunjan has a daughter😲😲 wow so is she like a widow or divorcee here hmm well Sam is a loner here too poor guy will await further Updates


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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome concept dear...
luved d CS...
glad u r starting a ff... jst luved ur sajan OS completely... 😳
n gunjan is hving a daughter..??? 😲 😲 dat means maybe she is a widow or divorcee...
really luking forward to ur ff... 😳
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon..
n add me to ur pm list..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mindblowing Ayesha,
I have always been a fan of your, naveen, meens, Yashika, aahana, Sushups, Sana, Gina and aashi's anaylasis, most of them also have amazing SS's and FF's.
When i read your OS Picture perfect,l it was sooooo januable and just plain Sajanish.
Would love to read more of it,
Please continue and if you can do add me to the PM list
Best of luck
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woww nice concept . i am so glad that the story is different from mjht . do continue soon . curious to know abt gunjan's past & how fate brings together sajan
Edited by ght_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ashu !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations for starting a FF !!! OMG !! This is such a beautiful surprise !! After reading your OS I was dying to tell you to write ur own FF, but you know I hardly get time to come online these days !!! I loved the character sketch and am sure this FF will be 100 times more amazing then ur FF !!! I don't even have to tell u to ad me to your PM list, it goes without saying that I better get a PM when you update !!! Love u lots sweetie !!! All the best !!! *hugs*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok..I really didnt wanna start reading it now..u kno why, because I'd thought I wud get lost in their world and then I wudnt cum back into the real world soo soon .. LOL! but then I had to..or our friendship .. coz I felt terrible after sending u that mail..its ur first FF and u need our encouragement..so here I am .. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I sooo loved ur character sketch ..and OMG gunji had a dotty .. aww choo cute 🤗🤗 !!! m sooo glad u hav included a baby in ur FF ashu..its gonna make me fall in love wit it even more .. ☺️☺️☺️

m damn damn sure ur FF's gonna rock .. BIGTIME !!! ☺️🤗🤗🤗

only thing is I really cant comment on it regularly..as u kno my guest appearances here..LOL! but u do keep updating and sending PMs to me whenever u do okie? will read on it and LIKE it .. 😳😳 and then comments toh I wil write later on..okie?

congratss on ur first FF !! 😳🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ayesha!! OMGG!! congrats on ur FF!!! i loveddd the CS!!! and i'm sooo looking forward for ur FF!!! i'm sure it'll be awesomeeee!!!
gunjan has a daughter!! OMG...is she married then...or is she a single mother?? and i can't wait to see how sajan meet!!! :D
continue soon...i can hardly wait!!!
and please add me to ur PM list!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
amazing cs.
looks really promising
plz add me to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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An FF?!?! 😲 OMG I loved your OS though I didn't comment! But I will read yours as well!

So that means I have to read:
Naveen Baji
Diya
Meens di
Ayesha baji

😆 😆 But Baji I will read it! Do add me to the PM list! :)

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