Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani
ayesha....

fantastic ..... beautifully described the sam's past and his "thanhayian......"

and the best was

He had name, fame, money, friends, and everything, still he was lonely, he was "tanha". There was darkness all around him, the darkness of his heart. He laughed but never smiled. Sometimes he felt like running away from all the mess, but then this mess was all he had. So, he had compromised wid life, but never lived life.

awesome .... absoultely wonderful ayesha .... you have described it in simple yet so much depth in each line which gets into the sam's past and his present...

they both simultaneously and unintentionally turned around, as if some inner urge has forced them to do so. Both were surprised to see each other turning around and looking at each other, still it felt good.

so sajanish... loved it to the core already waiting for your next update...

Awwww!!! Thank u soooo much Aarthi.. U're comments have really touched me. I'm extremely glad that u liked the first chapter, and have given me the biggest compliment of it being SaJanish..

Thanks again. Lots of love!!!

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: vital123
nice start ayesha

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: saduf
awesome start

Thanks a lot 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: sweetsonal156
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
sajan met, wow
loved it\cont soooooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm

Thank u soooo much dear for liking it. 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: naz17555
ohh wow ayeshhh! this is a brilliant start! im sooo intrigueddd! love your writing! its amazing! gosh you guys are sooo talented! i enjoyedf reading the descriptions! normally i get soo bored in text books but i enjoy reading it in your and others ff's!

Jaldi with the next one! i cannot wait! lolzz wanna know what happens next!

Hey Naz 🤗

Awwww thank u sooooo much for all ur appreciation. Its really encouraging (as always). I'm sooo glad that u liked it. I was extremely nervous abt writing this FF and I hope i can do justice wid it..

I'm wid u Naz. Text books r quite boring, but the FF's on SaJan that i've read here (by Diya, Naveen, Meens, Aahana) r all so interesting.

I'm trying my best to post the second chapter dis weekend, coz the next week is quite a busy one. So, want to update it before that. Will PM u when i update.

Thanks again sweety. Loads and loads of love!!!

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: lucario
It was a good update....u portraiyed sams life very well....about sajan meet...it was good....the uneasiness of sam of taking any decision was the part i liked in this update....u written that very nicely....hope to see next part soon.

Thanks a lot for reading and liking my FF.

Yup, it was an unbelievable and a shocking offer for Sam, so he had lots of confusions and apprehsions in taking a decision. The next chapter will further describe his issues reg. the same. I hope u like that also. Will soon post t.

Thank again 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was sooooooooo niceeeeeeee part love it plzz add me to your pm list

Thanks a lot for ur sweet reply. Will surely add u in my PM list. 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: serialfreak
u r a fantastic writer,i could imagine all the scenes happening in my mind. it was amazing. loved how samrat and gunjan feel an attraction towards each other during their first meeting. Can't wait to read more.
Thank u so much for the PM
Sheetal

Awww thank u sooooo much for ur appreciation. I'm really at a loss of words after reading it. Its great to know that u liked SG's first meeting and their feelings. I hope i don't disappoint u in the upcoming chapters also.

Thanks again 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: MoNaYaRoX
Great Update!!
that was a sweet meeting =)
so their both teachers??
pllzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!

Thank u sooo much for liking it.

Yup, Sam and Gunjan r both teachers. Interesting na??? I sincerely hope that it remains interesting and u like the next chapters also. Will surely update soon. 😊