Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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@-Ishita-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

awesome part ayesha...

truly amazing

loved it

continue asap

and thanx for the pm

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

wowwwwwww...
awesomeeeeee start dear..
it ws amazingggggg... 👏 👏
luved it..
pllzzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm

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ramramramram

@ramramramram

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

WOW!

oky i'll start from the beginning, as soon as i got your PM, i shoved all my books aside and got ready to read your Ff, witha teethy smile 😃.

It was Amazing. The way described Samrat's memories and the appearance of 'the girl' (okay, Gunjan 😆), It felt as if they are right their infront of us, every peice of detail was described so soothingly and it created a magical atmosphere.

But their was one bad thing, it ended and i was dragged out of the world of your FF, for atleast five minutes i was just thinking about it.

It was spellbounding Aysha, continue soon, and will be waiting desperately for your PM 😊

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sonu

@MagicLantern

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Wow loved the update dear . it was worth the wait . pls continue soon don't keep us waiting like the last time

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kavya

@kavya.b

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

heck!!! i wanna reply to it in detail.... will do it soon

in short, i jus loved it... sajan as faculty in a uni is out of my reach

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DiyaS

@DiyaS

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Just posting a quick reply ... loved it!!!

Waiting for the next part! I'll reply in detail when I'm back 😃

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maria

@marisol45

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

it was simply beautiful.
nice part and very well written.
cant wait for the story to unfold
continue soon😊

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

awesome aweome awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee oh god their first meet is so perfect by god mai toh bata hi nahi sakti how much i loved it to the core

awesome yaar plz continue son now

i cant wait to read more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon i beg u i want to read more

anyways thank u so much for the pm and again ur first part was mindblastig one

lots of love

sana

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ammykhan

@ammykhan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

awesome awesome

love it to the core

it was beautiful.

amazing continue soon

thx for the pm

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Aaru77

@Aaru77

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

ayesha....

fantastic ..... beautifully described the sam's past and his "thanhayian......"

and the best was

He had name, fame, money, friends, and everything, still he was lonely, he was "tanha". There was darkness all around him, the darkness of his heart. He laughed but never smiled. Sometimes he felt like running away from all the mess, but then this mess was all he had. So, he had compromised wid life, but never lived life.

awesome .... absoultely wonderful ayesha .... you have described it in simple yet so much depth in each line which gets into the sam's past and his present...

they both simultaneously and unintentionally turned around, as if some inner urge has forced them to do so. Both were surprised to see each other turning around and looking at each other, still it felt good.

so sajanish... loved it to the core already waiting for your next update...