Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73)

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sonal

@sweetsonal156

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
sajan met, wow
loved it\cont soooooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm

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Nazimah

@naz17555

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

ohh wow ayeshhh! this is a brilliant start! im sooo intrigueddd! love your writing! its amazing! gosh you guys are sooo talented! i enjoyedf reading the descriptions! normally i get soo bored in text books but i enjoy reading it in your and others ff's!

Jaldi with the next one! i cannot wait! lolzz wanna know what happens next!

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Avinash

@lucario

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

It was a good update....u portraiyed sams life very well....about sajan meet...it was good....the uneasiness of sam of taking any decision was the part i liked in this update....u written that very nicely....hope to see next part soon.

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

tht was sooooooooo niceeeeeeee part love it plzz add me to your pm list

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Sheetal

@serialfreak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

u r a fantastic writer,i could imagine all the scenes happening in my mind. it was amazing. loved how samrat and gunjan feel an attraction towards each other during their first meeting. Can't wait to read more.
Thank u so much for the PM
Sheetal

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Marukh Zia

@MoNaYaRoX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Great Update!!
that was a sweet meeting =)
so their both teachers??
pllzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!

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ayesha_80

@ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: meens1981
ayesha sweetheart firstly loads of hugs for a brilliant start🤗
wow thank god finally u unleashed a passion which the world needed to see and bask in its warmth....fantastic work....

not just becoz its ur first chap but more out of complusion i am going to quote a few lines that just left me zapped

He laughed but never smiled he had compromised wid life, but never lived life.

whoa that was like OOW ayesha

he didn't know that it wasn't the heart, it was destiny that had stopped him from going back

this correlation to his decision was aptly placed to give an insight to the readers of the author's view👍🏼

The description about sam's trip down d memory lane literally had me filled with goosebumps, without my realization i was reliving my coll ....my classroom,.... memorable moments in my coll canteen....god ayesha d beauty of ur words u took me on a nostalgic trip ......i had to pull myself back n continue😆

The description about gunjan was so beautiful ayesha.....truly it can be only a writers gift that can describe beauty in its most inherent form😍

on the whole loved the entire chap n u have done a splendid work ayesha.......this is gonna be one memorable FF for the SAJAN fans👏

Thank u soooo much Meens for ur sweet reply. Honestly, u always make me fall short of words to express my thanks to u. I don't think that i deserve this much appreciation. But nevertheless, i'm extremely glad that u liked my effort. It seems as if my hard work paid off.

I know Meens college days r the best days of our lives and it feels great to revisit them . I'm glad that my words took u back there..

Ahhh! Gunjan's description was the most difficult one, as i didn't want to mess with her beauty, simplicity, innocence. And i'm on cloud 9 after knowing that u found it beautiful..

Thanks again Meens for sooo much encouragement..U rock sweety!!! Loads of love!!! 🤗

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ayesha_80

@ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: aahana86
awesome beginning Ayesha hon🤗 👏👏👏👏

Loved how simply U put down Sam's Life in so short yet explained it completely ⭐️

Hmm So now Sam & gunjan will be Faculty members at Excel wow .. what a turn around loved this idea 😃

do cont soon hon & Gr8 Going 👍🏼

Awww thank u soooo much Aahana for reading and liking the first chapter. I know its just an average one, but i'm soooo glad to know that u liked it, especially the idea of SG being faculty members at the same coll from where they both studied.

Thanks again sweetheart for ur valuable comments.

Loads of love!!!🤗

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ayesha_80

@ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan
wpw yaar amzing add me to the pm llist

Thanks Pragya..

Will surely add u to my PM list.😊

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ayesha_80

@ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ---ishita---

awesome part ayesha...

truly amazing

loved it

continue asap

and thanx for the pm