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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#681

@Rati...thanks so much for the lovely words! 🤗 Yeah, come to think of it, that scene does kinda remind me of the KKHH scene lolz! 😆 Honestly, I thought this update was faltu, as usual...😕 But I'm so glad you liked it! 😃 Thanks for reassuring me that I didn't drag it 😃

@Sarah...thankyou! I'm happy you liked it.

@Kalindi...thankyou! I didn't want Shehnaz to be the vamp, so she's just nice. 😃 Abhi surprised you, didn't he? 😉 😳 I don't know why, I just brought in the ball all of a sudden 😆 It felt so stupid while writing it, and I thought you guys were gonna be showering me with tomatoes, ande and shoes 😲 😆 😆 😆 But I'm so glad you liked it! And it's no problem yaar, I look forward to reading the comments and anyway, I'm updating late too

😉

@Sheena and Rhea...🤗 how's Sheena? And I'm so happy you both liked the part! 😃 Oh, and the proposal scene will be posted before or on Saturday. I don't have time to write before that, sorry.

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#682

yipppppppppppppeeee *seeeetttti*

U updated!!!

Lovely part....everyone trying to figure out Abhi's happy state was funny!!!

n Ridz covering for Niks...loved it!!!

Awwwwwwww the Bb replacing Nikki....loved it ....m sorry for the late comment sweetie!!

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#683

khushiiiiiiiiiiiiii *hugz*

had told u that wil commnt latr!

bt couldnt resist commenting on such a b'ful scene!😳

ohh itz fantastic part dear!

N their first fight n then patch up as a coupl izz soooooo cute!

jus lov lov lov it!

really hav to thank sheenuuu 4convincing u 2 write an update1

sweetoo whn they wer nt coupl i mean hadnt confessd even at that time they kissd n huggd n did lotz mor stuff they alwaz do!ahem ahem r u getting wat m trying to sey ? *blush blush blush*☺️☺️

so nw az they r officially coupl can i expect smthing more? i mean sm more hot hot scenz ? ☺️☺️☺️☺️ I knw m soooo greedy m so sorryy 4 that! bt cnt help it!😳

bt I think i need it! And m sure evry 1wantz the same!! M I wrong?😳

plzz plzz plzzz or kuch jabardast momnts de do na lik that rain scene of urz!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

(purrrfect scen accrding to me👏👏)☺️☺️☺️☺️

Hope u will provide sm more delicious food 2 besharam hungry lyk me😳😆

lov ths part a lot!

thank u so mch sweetoo n sheena also😳

lov ya dear!

m waitin 4 ur next part!

tc!

abhimaan jhappizz!

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#684

OMG Khush!!! 😲 Absolutely loved this update !! Well worth the wait! *Hugz*

Vishal and Shehnaz teasing Abhi was😆😆 poor Abhi he even blushed! 😳

Abhimanyu Modi reprimanding Atul on his lateness was awesome!
I missed this Abhi - the sadu! 😆 awww and the smile he gave to Niki at the end of it! Just too cute!

Loved Abhi and Niki's argument and then the make up part in the basketball court! - my fav!!😳 and Niki being jealous of the basketball! 😉😆😆 wanting all of his attention! ⭐️ I just loved it soooo much Khushi!! Thank you sooo sooo much sweety!

buhot saare *Hugz*🤗

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#685

@Honuuuuuuu....🤗 Seeti! 😲 😆 😆 😆 Wow that was unexpected from you...😛 Thanks a lot for commenting inspite of being as busy as you are sweetie! 🤗 Yeah, I guess you never thought Nikki would be jealous of a BBall, huh? 😉 😆

@Cherry....*hugs back* Thanks! And yeah, it's all coz of Sheenu coz otherwise the update would have been late (albeit longer 😉 😆). Oh, you're hungry for more? *thoosos ladoos in your mouth* Ab issi se khush raho! 😛 Main ban nahi hona chahti 😉 😆 😆 😆 Will try to write more hot scenes without dragging it dear! 😃 I'm so happy to know you felt so about the rain scene! 😳

@Aishaaaaaa...🤗 Kahan thi tum? 😃 Awww I'm glad you thought it was worth the wait! 😳 You missed this Abhi 😆 Yeah, we're so used to him acting like this! 😳 😆 Yeah I was laughing while writing the BB court scene..,it seemed so silly 😆 But it was quite AN-like if I may say so 😉 😆 Thanks for the comment!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: mayuri.vet
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Thanks...I see you're a new reader! 😃

Is there anything you'd like to say? 😳

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#687

I thought I'd be able to update today, but unfortunately I've just not had time to sit down and write...I'll try to update tomorrow, Mitzi. I know you guys are waiting for the next part but I'm really, really busy.

I'll hardly have time to come online (as you can surely see in my signature line) and let alone write. But the updates will keep coming, even if they're late and short.

Sorry about this, but I've got 4 months of maths to catch up with...I'm drowning! Bachao!

Sorry everyone...I'm trying!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#688

Yes, Jyothi...I'm trying...I still haven't managed to write yet. Life is hectic, and I'm pressed for time... 😕

I'll try my very best to update ASAP...till then, please wait...

I'm so sorry about this...

And for all those who've pretty much given up on me 😆 and also for those who're still holding on to the thin rays of hope that one day, I WILL update 😉, here's the link to an Abhi Nikki Writing Challenge we're holding.

If you want to read some good scenes, please do go through the thread...it's simply awesome! 😃 And I've posted a small scene too...unfinished, though 😳 😆

Cheers,

Khushboo.

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago