||Just One Breath Away-AN FF~VM pg 122||

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zain_aliya

@zain_aliya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#671

hey khushboo... it was awsome....u narrate it so beautifully dat it seems m watching it on tv....

continue soon n thanks 4 d pm...

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#672

great part! and thanks for the pm.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#673

awesoem part kush loved the 1st fight as the couple cont soon

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shalini

@wow123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#674

Khush u updated dear.Nice one.I want some write their courtship period n u r doing that.Thanks dear.

I loved it chup-2 k pyar 😆.

But u didn't pm me.Wait for next.

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dm_hpcrazy

@dm_hpcrazy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#675

Awesome!!!
This was cute!
😆 basketball bit was soo funny!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#676

@Mitzi....awww, that's so sweet of you to not want this to end...🤗 I know I can go on and on and on 😳, but I really don't want to drag this on...😕 I hope you understand that sweetie. I've got something else coming up for you all once I finish this 😉 and I really don't have time to handle both together. As you can see, the updates are late already and school just started. Sorry dear, but this one will end where I planned it. Maybe just a lil epilogue 😉

@cutiepie_1987...thankyou so much for the lovely words! Appreciate it. Glad you liked the part.

@angullgrl91...thankyou! Please do tell me your name...🤔

@Jyothi...yes, after a month of spamming you finally got your wish...an update! 😛 LOL...thanks for the comment!

@Shale...thanks! Glad you like the after-proposal stuff...I aways felt it was sort of missed out 😕 😳 And of course, the chup chup ke pyaar lolz! Oh I think I somehow skipped your username while sending out the PMs dear, sorry

@dmg_hpcrazy...thanks! Glad you thought it was funny!

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ratika89

@ratika89

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#677

that was Cool, and this was really funny..

"Are you so mad that you're going to dump me for that basketball?" she asked him innocently, biting back a laugh.

it reminded me of KKHH scene where SRk was playing basketball and suddenly salmaan came and told him that If Anjali won't marry him, he will marry to that Basketball...😆

anyway that was really cool update...very nicely tackled with Shenaz situation..it was very tight scene, I must say.....being a film maker...this has to be ur strongest quality to tackle scene with rt timing and not enlongate it ..
and it seemed perfect...👍🏼⭐️

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Sarah

@DMG_LOVER203

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Posted: 15 years ago

#678

Hey Kush...🤗

Superb update i loved totally loved it plz update soon 😉

*Jhapiz*

Sarah

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#679

Hey Khush great update🤗
Abhi finally told Shanaz and Vishal about him n Niki.. Great..Shanaz still has feelings for Abhi.. Awww.. But I am happy she is not one of those who start making dangerous plans seeing their love, love somebody else.. Love her.. She is pretty nice.. Awww Atul getting late.. I almost thought rectals were waiting for him😆 BUT Abhi suprised me.. Rather everyone.. Hmmm Niki's magic haan.. ☺️ the gang had almost caught Niki.. The way the interns were discussing Abhi n his happiness n Lol Abhi hearing it.. Lolz... Riddhima is having a tough time explainin the others.. Poor gal.. Awww I loved the court scene.. Niki tellin Abhi that he is givin more importance to the ball..😆 AN sharing a great moment..☺️ loved it..
Thanks for such a nice part.. Will be waiting for the next..
P.S : Im extremely sorry for my late comments..