'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15) - Page 4

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

Wow... gr8!!! awesome dear !!

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sumaiya Hello Dii....😛

This was just so beautiful..

U have done a brilliant job.👏 Thank u sooo much Dii....am glad u liked it this much...😃😃

Wat more a girl can ask for her..A valentine like Viraan is all that she need...😍 Yeah....nothing more can be wanted after that....😳😳

The was u described this story was mesimerizing..Ahh....I'm glad u liked the way of flashbaks...😆A girl gazing a guy is comman but when a wife does this it means she is blessfully happy with her husband..Truly said Dii....even I hav a similar thought to this...😆😆

Their first encounter was bit funnyHehe...I must tell u why...😆 but met once again n their life took another turn..They both fell in love got engaged but alas!! luck was not with them..Girl met with an accident n lost her memory ..Every1 was sad but but her fiancee was so happy coz she was atleat alive n with him..Yeah....life took many turns for both of them....but at last they were together...😃

The way their friendship developed was so cute..Girl again fell in love with him but she was too scared to accept her true feelings..Actually she thinks a lot n all the wrong things.. I'm glad u found the process 'cute' Dii....and yeah...she does think a lotttt😆😆

Finally all the misunderstandings were clear n dey got married..Its a dream come true..Completely....no dream can be more cherishing than this...😉😉

God has really been kind to dem.😛 Yeah....in fiction...its possible...😆😆

Viraan was right when he said that she doesn't have enough space in her mind n dats why everything got deleted so she can cherish the new ones.. Yeah....otherwise we knw na....how jammed her head already is....😆😆

This was just perfect..A simple story with dream like ending.👏 Well thats wat I had wanted....sumtyms we need to see beautiful dreams just to hav a beautiful moment thinking abt that....😳

"Love is a thing shared by two
Love is what you feel for me and you
Love is precious when its shared
Love is danger when its dared

Love wanders and searches for the one
Love plays and just do it for fun
Love lets you hear love songs to emote
Love lets you make sweet poems & a quote

Love makes the world go around
Love makes us happy if the one we love
is finally found
Love turns the world upside down
Love cheers us never with a frown

Love makes you cry
Love sacrifices and says goodbye
Love has its own reason and time
Love can make someone you love "mine"

Love makes a person kiss
Love makes a person miss
Love is experienced by all
Love conquers when you fall.

I loved the bigger fonts more....u knw the lines click more...😆😆 (just thought of choosing Dii😆)....but the last line in red....its more than awesum!!! When sum1 falls yet feels to be a winner....that person has to be in LOVE!!😉😉

Bye

Happy Valentine Day

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

wonderful oneshot FF

lovely

amazing

beautifully written

awsome

superb

too good Thank u sooooooooo much Madhu....for all these sweet adjectives.....😃😃

iss FF ko likh ke tu ek sin karne se bach gaayi Yeah.....must thank Dhara Dii....for that...😆

different story

Thanks for this wonderful Valentine gift U r most welcum dear....and I'm glad u found it 'different'....😉

& HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO U DEAR

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Woww Sumi..thanks a lot dear for this lovely story on this very lovely day...Hey Shona.....its my pleasure to hav posted sumthing on such a love filled day....😆
u didnt give female lead's name..but it didnt necessary either...!!!Yeah....actually it was kinda in first person na....so I didnt feel like changing the feel...😉😉....hope u got wat I meant...😆😆
it touched my heart...the way he made her fall for him all over again...just fantastic... she lost her memory ..but only in two months she again fell for him....Awe....it touched ur heart....now am touched to hear that....thnx for liking it so much dear.😃
loved the way u have included the flashbacks with present...Ahh...i must thank the very moment I thought of doing so....it was liked so much after all.😆
very very sweet story....🤗

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey Sumi Hey Sur....😃

Happy Valentines Day!!! Ahh...same to u...😆

kya badiya gift dia hai na tumne Valentines Day ka..! ultimate love story!Yeah...ultimate love story...I think I just included this one emotion hehe...😆...am glad u liked the 'gift'...😉

mujhe bahut pasand ayi! Awe....aur mujhe ye janke bahut khushi hui....😃

Rajeev is a real sweet heart...Haii...its so true!!!😃😃pata hai mai hamesha sochti thi k kya kabhi koi sach me kisi se itna pyaar kar sakta hai...its really only possible in fictions...in ur fics 2 be accurate Yeah....I always try to write this sweet fiction...😆😆...u c...reality itni achhi nahi ho sakti to socha sapno ko haseen bana deti hu...😆😆...and this tym...I was way too ahead I guess...😉😉

how sweet of him 2 stand by her, when she lost her memory...everything was beautiful...Yeah....such lovely thought is very very wonderful...to think of...😉

and the end was perfect....a fantastic gift for his wife...wat else can a girl ask for?Blv me...nothing more.....thats it!!😳😳

thanku Dhara di k apne Sumi ki atma ko jagaya jo isne ye mast fic likhi Hehe...I'll convey this mssg to her...😃

great one

keep it up

Sur

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

yaar mujhe pata tha ki tu achha likhti hai...aur baht achha likhti hai...par yeh pata nahi tha ki koi agar tujhe dhamkaye ya phir hool de...toh tu aise bhi awesome one shot likh sakti hai...!!! Awe....main ab saatve aasmaan me hu....😳😳Dhara ne bilkul sahi kiya hai...isiliye is shot ka 50% credit toh Dhara ko bhi jata hai...Yeah....I hav definitely thanked her for that....itne saare awesum words mujhe unhi ki wajah se sunne ko mil rahe hai...😃😃

tum ne toh heroine ko koi naam hi nahi diya hai...chalo main hi de deti hun...!!! mrs X...toh...!!! tumhe pata hai is shot ki khasiyat kya thi...??? tum ne X k sare feelings likhe...jo ki sayad har voh ladki apne mr perfect se mil ne k baad sochti hogi...haha...Mrs. X.....well mujhe pata hai maine naam nahi diya....kyunki sach poochho to maine kahin na kahin....thodi der k liye hi sahi...apne aap ko imagine kiya tha...😆😆...and yeah....isiliye ye shot ladki k POV se hai....u c....main ladka nahi hu jo uss POV se likh pati...😆😆...am glad u took it as a 'khasiyat' of the shot...😉

present me tum ne hi tum ne flashback scene ko kuch is tarah se present kiya ki aisa laga jaise voh ladki apne zindagi k tamam haseen lamhe ginn rahi ho...!!!Yeah...she was actually doing that....warna tum sabko kahaani kaise pata chalti??😆😆

dono ki pahli mulakaat...phir ek marraige me mulakat ...phir us ka propose karna aur miss x ka confusion...!!! mujhe is scene par Raj ka xpression yaad aaya...wowww...voh aise scenes kamal ka karta hai...!!!Yeah....so many happenigs...and life took huge turns...😆😆...and Raj!! Haii...ye to har expression me gazab hote hai....😳😳😳

phir confusion ki wajah aur accident...un ki puri love story tum ne ek shot me aise likh hai jaise kahin koi dukh nahi...jo hua tha us me un ka pyar badha...kuch kami nahi...kyoun ki dono sath rahe hamesha chahe kuch bhi ho gaya ho....Yeah....sumtyms such tragic turns let us knw the best things abt our lyf...and helps them to enhance....😃😃

aur last part....sab kuch just awesome tha yaar...Bahut mushkil se thoda romantic karne ki koshish kii thi yaar...😆😆

love u for d wonderful n beautiful shot...itz really amazing...Thnqqqqq soooooo much Priya....😃

Originally posted by: ~~~~

masterpiece 👏

NOTE:

Hello every1….firstly thnx for reading this shot….but I knw u must be thinking….wats this note in a One Shot??😆 Well….I just thought of letting u all knw sumthing very interesting!! I wanted to tell this even before….but then decided to w8 for the feedback….and now when I hav them….I read a few replies saying….the first meeting was different/ funny/unique….well…I'm definitely glad that….u all liked it…while imagining (hope that was clear enough)….BUT…..there is a thing….actually it's a true incident….umm…just the meeting portion….and do I need to say….who the girl was in reality?? 😆😆….Samajhdaar ko ishaara kaafi hai….I guess!!😉😉 Waise…I donno if that was funny enough for u….but for me…It was more than just funny to experience it….as my frnd was yelling 'Sum' 'Sum' (thats wat she calls me😆) in the middle of the road….😆😆

But…I'd like to clarify….I certainly don't remember the guy's face in reality….😆😆I included this incident coz just after it happened I had told my frnd that I wud write a story on this….so it was a long tym temptation on my part to write sumthing on this very incident….😛

And yeah….there must hav been a thought if this is actually possible in real life….then guys let me tell u….the ams is a big 'NO'…hehe…😆😆😆 its just a sweet fantasy…a lovely n cherished dream….which can never be true….but then that doesn't snatch away the right to dream….I think one must hav such sweet dreams….at least it will give one sweet beautiful n smiling moment as u think abt it…😳😳

Waise….fic wali ladki k saath meri ek aur similarity hai….n that is…we both r stupids!! THE SHOT WAS OF COURSE DEDICATED TO DHARA DII….And me stupid forgot to mention that….SORRY DII….but kya karu….meri dimag…aapko to pata hai na….its khaali from inside…

Anyways....agar aapne ye note padhi then thanks...and agar nahi padhi...then I must say....u r intelligent....😆😆

Luv,
Sumi.😛