'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15) - Page 2

yaar mujhe pata tha ki tu achha likhti hai...aur baht achha likhti hai...par yeh pata nahi tha ki koi agar tujhe dhamkaye ya phir hool de...toh tu aise bhi awesome one shot likh sakti hai...!!! Dhara ne bilkul sahi kiya hai...isiliye is shot ka 50% credit toh Dhara ko bhi jata hai...

tum ne toh heroine ko koi naam hi nahi diya hai...chalo main hi de deti hun...!!! mrs X...toh...!!! tumhe pata hai is shot ki khasiyat kya thi...??? tum ne X k sare feelings likhe...jo ki sayad har voh ladki apne mr perfect se mil ne k baad sochti hogi...

present me tum ne hi tum ne flashback scene ko kuch is tarah se present kiya ki aisa laga jaise voh ladki apne zindagi k tamam haseen lamhe ginn rahi ho...!!!

dono ki pahli mulakaat...phir ek marraige me mulakat ...phir us ka propose karna aur miss x ka confusion...!!! mujhe is scene par Raj ka xpression yaad aaya...wowww...voh aise scenes kamal ka karta hai...!!!

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hieeeee SUMI !!!! 😃 Hey Mana....finally I'm replying....hehe.😆😆

Wonderful Shot dear !!! 👏 👏 👏 Thank u doc...😉

okay, ab iske pehle ki main details mein jaau, mujhe ek bahot zaroori kaam poora karna hai ! Ohk....😛

A BIGGGGGGGGGG THANKS to DHARA, the preach 😆 😆

Aisehi Sumi ko Paap punya ki baatein samjhati raho taaki woh aur bhi aise beautiful shots likhe! 😃 Well....I'll let her knw ur BIG THANKS!!!😆😆

Now coming to the shot.... It was AMAZINGggggggggggggg !!! 👏 👏 👏 Thank u dear....😃😃

The Flashback mode added an EXTRA effect to it !Oh...am glad to knw dat....and am happy I decided to add that flashbak mode...😆

I liked the way 'She' ( sorry...tumne isse koi naam hi nahi diya ! Tumhe Rajeev ke aage kabhi koi dikhta hai???😛 Valentines pe to hargiz nahi dikhta...😳😳) feels attached to him, the way she feels incomplete without him and also the way he understood her and cared for her...Well...if she is so attached he was bound to care n vice versa....😆

The funny bike incident,Ahh...I do hav sumthing to tell abt that...😆 then the marraige scene, his desperation to get her number and then the marraige proposal, they getting engaged, and then the fateful accident.......superbly described ! 👏 👏 Yeah....I described so many incidents along wid accident ryt??😆😆 Am glad u liked them dear....😃

Yaar you know what, I always wanted to tell you this....everytime, in every update of yours, you always manage to bring something 'eye catchy' in Raj's character and behaviour...( Well that's called DEVOTION of a fan 😛 Well then I must say....I try hard to do that......but sumtyms its unintentional....😳😳....however I try to be as devoted as possible...😳😳)... jaise ki yaha....after her accident everyone was crying over her amnesia, but he was smiling and joyous, just because she was conscious !! Aur main baaki sab ke baaremein bhool gayi aur ek yahi cheez nazar mein aayi aur yaad rahi ! 😃 Awe....u thought that was an eye catchy thing....😳😳....wat can I say?? I'm just happy!!😃😃

I loved the way, he formed new bond of camaraderie without letting her know that he was her fiancee.....

Why is he always soooooo goood????😍 Thats a really tough question....ans to which I hav been searching since donno how long....😍

Now coming to besssssttttt part ! She falling for him, her confusion over her marital status and then locking herself in room and Viraan dozing off outside her room, and then she telling him her confusion...GOOD !!! Hehe....that was quite a drama...😆😆....just thought of making it spicy....😆but the mosssttttt lovable part was when he started laughing after knowing the reason for her behaviour....! He must hav looked awesum na....😍....btw....I am glad u liked these all...😛😛

finally they are married now...Yup....I secured this first...😆

He managed to plan a surprise for her !

I was touched by his excitement on finally fulfilling his dream of celebrating a valentine with her !! Am glad to hav portrayed that sweet feeling of his....😃😃

Hmm'after all u don't seem to hav much space in mind'.it was necessary to delete the past ones!!

he he he ! 😆 Cute line !!!I'm glad u liked it dear....😃

Sumi !! hamari association ko ek aur member mil gayi !! 😉😆 I was never really out of it...😆😆

Anyways amazing work dear !! Continue writing such beautiful shots...I'll try Mana...😃

luv,

mana😊

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Sumi 😊 Hey Preet....😃
OMG, what a sweet valentines gift.....I just loved it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thanku so much for the OS.......its a brilliant start of the valentines for me. I'm glad u loved this small effort of mine....and I cud do sumthing for sum1 as sweet as u...😃😃

Now, coming towards the OS, I think there is no need to say but its just awesome ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Awe....I'm sooo glad to knw dat...😃
The way u have shown the past and the present happenings was just too gud. M feeling short of words to explain it but I can say that I was having a smile on my face reading the OS. 😃 😃 😃 Ahh....I'm glad u had a smile on ur face...coz thats wat I want....😉😉...and I am happy to hav maintained the past/present track well...😛

The way they met was to gud, she cant forget his face, no one can do that. I can bet on that.Yeah....u'll win this bet anyways...😆😳😳...and their meeting...I'm glad u liked it..😉😆😆 I loved the way they both fall for each other. The boy goes to her house with the marriage proposal, engagement was just brilliant. Hehe...I'm glad u liked the rushed up happenings...😃

But then that accident spoiled everything, but he was happy to see her fine. Her memory doesnt matter to him, its just her soul that matters to him. well....for me that shud be the most obvious thing...😉😛I loved the way he took care of her without telling her about their engagement, the way he loves her, everything was perfect. Ahh....thnx for liking it so much dear...😃I loved his reaction of saying pagli after knowing the girls confusion, their confession, his gift on valentines night, the bedroom scene. Awe....main chane k sabse uchee jhaar pe hu Preet...😆😆

In short, I must say, I just loved every bit of it....Its better nahin to OS se badha mera comment ho jata...m sure, so I just write it in short form. Awe....I love your replies dear....and no worries abt the length...😆😆

Please do write more OS....its my req...its just too perfect I'll try my best dear....to comply wid ur request...😃
Luv Preet 🤗 🤗 🤗