'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15) - Page 3

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏Awesome👏

Originally posted by: spvd

hello dear....................wish u a happy valentine's day dear.......Hey Deepa...😃😃...same to u...😃..........and really its a sin not to write any ff on RA or Rajeev..........Ahh...then I hav got 1 sin less at least...😉.........loved the story dear............very different........I'm glad u liked it n found it 'different'...😃😃........esp the hoxy husband.....................ha ha ha.........nice mix......Well....I wont take the credit...I had read it long bak in a fic I guess...😉 May be it was in the DON fic featuring Rajeev....😉😉..........and the name viraan singhania was also different........Ahh...I'd like to take the credit this tym....😆😆....sach kahu to maine fic likhne se pehle ye naam socha tha....phir laga naam soch liya hai ab fic bhi sochna chahiye...😆............i imagined the gal to be as aamna............feel more comfortable thining about the pair......I knw dat dear....Rajeev-Aamna hav been a hit pair always....almost ruled the tellywood once..😉..........hes too lovely and sweet and the gal is very lucky to have a husband like him..........Yeah...it was sweet fantasy for me...😆.........nice try dear..............Thank u Deepa...😃

Originally posted by: guglu088

Sumi....Hi Guglu...😃

What an awesome gift on Valentine's Day...!!! I'm glad u liked it dear...😛😛

Yaar, you made my day. It so beautiful. The way u took the story to the flashback mode was awesome.Thnx for appreciating dear....am happy u liked it so much...😃😃 Her distrust... her fear... her falling for him... his coming to her house with marriage proposal were so awesome. Thnx for liking it sooo much...hehe...I really hav got nothing much to say...😆

And then the accident. And her loss of memory. Tragic... but he stood by her side. Hmm...thats how she cud knw wat an awesum decision she had taken...😆Her brain was certainly over reactive but it was only because she had fallen in love with him all over again😉 Yeah....jab Dil kisi pe aa jata hai....tab pura pressure dimag pe ata hai...so I guess it had started oevr working...😆😆 and didn't want to lose him. Who wants to lose such a lovely companion?😳😳The scene in the bedroom...her tears...his pain...his dozzing off... the opening of the door and his description at that point of time were simply awesome. And then her confession and his laughter.Hehe I just tried to add sum fun to that scene....but guess...it had turned emotional as well...😳😳

And of course the last part was Valentine Special.Yeah....just added it for the sake of Valentines...😆

Wonderful job Sumi...

Thanks a lot for this One shot. U r more than welcum dear....thnx for all the appreciation....😃

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: tina_1234

BEAUTIFUL ⭐️

Originally posted by: golu_1677

this is beautiful. loved it.

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely !!

It was too sweet !!

I wish all guys cud b soo nice....Hehehe !

Originally posted by: pinky901

beautiful story dear

please do keep writing like this more often

its such a pleasent gift on 'v'day.

great work dear🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Sumiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......!!!!!!!!!! This was a wonderful valentine gift....!!!!Thnx Dii.....I'm glad u liked it...😃 Aur tu kahe na kahe, mai toh yehi sochungi ke yeh tune mere liye likha....!!!!! 😛 I....the biggest stupid in the world......must announce Dii...it was surely for u....😆😆....me such a useless girl....kitna bak bak kiya....lekin clearly mention nahi kiya....sorry!!😕

The one shot was awesome....!!!! It stared of soooo beautifully...the thought process was described so nicely...the wat you kept the girl thinking and her husband talking to her was so well framed.....!!!!I am glad u liked the flashbak intrusion....and thought I cud frame it all well.....thank u sooooo much Dii....😛

I dont know what else to say......I loved each and every thing about the story...I dont think anything more shud be said....😆😆....I mean....thats the most imp thing na...😆😆..the way they met, they way they remembered each other,the guy landing up at the girl's place asking for her hand...!!!! And then the unfortunate accident...!!!! But the way the guy took care of his fiance and didnt let her know that he was her fiance was just tooooo sweett........!!!!!!! Yeah....guess dreams n fantasies r always veryyyyy sweet!!😉😉....I'm glad Dii....that u liked it all...😛

And then when the girl comes to know that the guy she has fallen for again is her fiance...those parts were tooo nice..!!!! Hehe....that was quite a funny portion I guess...but i'm happy u loved them....😃

Thanks once again for this beautiful story....!!!! It was my utmost pleasure Dii....😃

Originally posted by: pinkorblack

great valentine gift....thanks.... lovd it completely...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hi Hello Nisha....😃

Thanks for this perfect Valentine's Day gift. I'm glad u liked my small effort....😃The Story is very beautiful...full of love....well yeah....i included nothing but love in it....only one emotion was there...😉😉

The way you have linked the present and past in the story is brilliant. A love story of two people who shared extrordinary love....wat a line said by you!! Extra-ordinary love for sure....😃😃...and I'm glad u liked the linking of past n present....😛😛

Their meeting, her hesitation, his love for her, his marriage proposal was all just perfect.

But then the unfortunate accident, her lose of memory, and her distrust in anyone else but him, his unconditional love, and silent support for her. Her fear of losing him while falling in love with him only to find out that he was always her's. Firstly I'm thankful u liked all these....and secondly...I loved the way u put it dear....that he was always hers....😃😃....lovely saying!!😉

Their new life with out regrets and only joy.Yup....when love is in the air....there has to be joy along wid it...😉

Loved the story. Superb.