'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15) - Page 13

Originally posted by: rituka7

superb

great

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear twas cute and beautiful...Thanks Deepa dii...😳...like it might happen in real life too to someone...nice one...Thanks once again...and well...I guess it wud be for best only if it happens in real lyf to sumone...😉 so I'll wish for the best to that 'someone'😳...meanwhile thanks for reading and finding it realistic enough!!😛

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , mind bloiwng

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great story Thanks Nisha...😃

Rakshit and Kangana dono hi ek dusrese bahut alga hai phir bhi dost ban jate hai. They treasure their friendship but soon realise that their thoughts are very different. and so they fall apart.Hmm after all, its sumwat necessary to have an understanding btwn partners...and this is often misinterpreted by 'having same opinions'..😆😉 whereas it is actually abt 'respecting the others opinions'...😳

But fate had other plans for their parents want both of them to get married. At first both of them are hesitant to accept this relationship but later both of them realise that they love each other.Ab unki ghalti ko sudharne ke liye fate ko interfere karna hi padha...😆

Enjoyed reading their story Thanks dear...am glad u liked reading it. 😃

thanks All my pleasure dear. Thanks for commenting!! 😃

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

beautiful...Thank you...😃

Rakshit...kya complicated naam hai yaar...bilkul raj ki tarah...!!! ab raj bhi yeh admit kar chuka hai na...Haha...yea quite complicated...😆😆

khair point par aate hain...kangana aur rakshit dono hi ek dushre se alag hain phir bhi ek dushre ke achhe dost hain...!!! jab ki dil me toh kuch aur hi laga mujhe...!!!Kyun pol khol rahi ho dono ki...😆😆 hamesha pyar jab samjh na aaye na toh use dosti ka naam de dete hain...!!! yehi hota hai...par is se tym bhi toh milta hai khud ke zindagi me us inshan ke sahi jagah ko dhundhne ki...Yeah...frndship is often a gud shield against love. 😉😆 But yeah as u said, it does gud too like knwing that person better. 😃

yeh kya...dono khud ke liye lyf partner dundh rahe the...!!! par kyoun...samne andhera tha kya...jo kangna ko raj oops...rakshit dikhayi nahi de raha tha...Haha...yeah. Wahi hua hoga...😆😆😆 ya phir unka DIL hum sabki DIMAG ke pichhe gaye the...isliye sahi se soch nahi paa rahe the...😉😆

par ek waqt aaya jab dono ek dushre se alag hi ho gaye...!!! kabhi kabhi duriyan us inshan ko aur bhi kareeb le aata hai...jo anjane me humare liye khaash ban jata hai...Hmm...dooriyan bhi hai zaruri...😉😆

lekin kahte hain na..jis ke naseeb me jo likha hota hai vohi milta hai toh phir phir se mil gaye...Rakshit n kangana...!!! aur is baar toh dono parents shadi ka card print karne ke firaq me the...Bilkul...all set wid band baja baarat...😆

kitna confused rahte the dono yaar...!!! par chalo koi na...kam se kam dono ke feelings bahar toh aaye...par kaise...aur voh bhi kis waqt...Haha...pata hai mujhe...raat ke waqt...jab sab sote hai...tab unka dil wapas aye unke paas...😆😆

chalo rakhsit ne kadam aage badhaya...aur apni dil ki baat bata di...!!! dekh lo...raj kitna achha hai...kangana ke confession ke liye achha sa rashta nikal diya...pahle khud kah kar...Hmm...😳...always the gud guy.😆 Waise yehi better hai na...ladka keh deta hai then its easy for the girls...😉

song bilkul perfect tha...one of my fav...!!! par film sayad 'Dil toh pagal hai' ki hai na...!!! is movie ke story ne mere dimag me ghushne se mana kar diya tha...isiliye sare songs toh mujhe achhe lage the...par aage hum kuch nahi kahenge...Hehe...thats one of my fav movies...😆

Beautiful shot...sumi ...pata hai tumhe khashiyat is fic me yeh thi ke tum ne sab ke emotions kafi hadh tak natural likha hai...matlab jaise aam zindagi me hota hai...!!! yeh OS kafi apna sa laga...Aww...thank you!! Its gud to hear that. Am glad u cud sumwat relate to this...😃 and yeah...its easy to be natural than to be fictional...hai na?😉😆

batana bhul gayi...raj ki jo pic pahle tum ne post ki hai na...kafi cute lag raha hai us pic me...!!! isiliye is fic ko padhne me double maza aaya hai...!!! matlab..."tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai...tere aage chaand purana lagta hai...tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai..." ya phir..."tera chehra hai aaine jaisa...kyoun na dekhun main dekhne jaisa...tera chehra hai aaine jaisa..."

Haii...kya gaane hai!! Lovely...I really like ur song choices yaar...perfect hote hai...and guess such songs hav their own feel na?😉😆

Thanks for reading and commenting Priya. It was as usual...beautiful.😆

Originally posted by: ~~~~

hiii sweetuuu summuuu...I miss youuu...

i love rajeeevvv... ☺️ I tooo LOVE RAJEEV!! And I love you tooo...😳😳


one shot hmmm 🤣 bahot maza aya padhke.. exam k baad yeh chahiye hi tha.. 🤗 abb jakar acha feel ho raha hai sach main.. 😛 waise rakshit rudhir bann gaya tha bich main.. shayad tune baad me naam change kiya aur ek jagah saboot mitana bhul gayi.. 😈 🤣 Haha...all thruout writing the fic, I was mixing up Rakshit wid Rudhir...😆😆...and haaa haaa...hassle. But ye ONE SHOT hi tha...😆😆 and xam ke baad...aise cheezon se hi dimag kharab karte hai...samjhi?😆

pata h rakshit ko padhke ridit yaad aa gaya.. 😛 😆 Aww...tujhe kyun yaad aya?? Wo to mera hai...😆

yeh jo bhi tha bahot acha tha 😆😆 aise hi kuch bhi post karti raha kar.. 😃😆 haha...thik hai. Phir likh bhi dungi...ye Nandu ka idea tha...😆😉

waiting for next 'aise hi kuch bhi' 😆😆 i loveee rajeeevvv😆

I lovvve RAJEEV!! Huh...😆😆


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Originally posted by: oliveya

WOOOMGGG! ...sumaiya ...😛😛...

OMG!...😛...amazing ..story line...really nice concept ...OMG !how can do this sumaiya ...😆.ur are one of the best story writer ...⭐️...outstanding ...simply ...great..👍🏼.i have no words...for describe ...ur amazing ...work...beautiful story👏👏

Very touch..difff ...woooMG i loved...it i really enjoy...after read the whole story .. shots(for rajeev)meant to be ..ff ..first part is...very touch very touch ..and emotional and painful..it is very ...beautiful story Very emotional and heart felt but sad...🥱

luv..oliveya

Originally posted by: -purnima-

First things first thanx 4 this surprising OS 😃 ' it was a pleasant surprise'😳😳😳Thanks dear..😃 am glad the surprise surprised you..😆 & pass me on the name book 😉😉😉 u have' giving RK lovely names..😳😳😳 main toh naam pa hi flat ho jati hoon Arnav ayaan adil rudhir'now rakhshit'uparse u posted pics too' 😳 Hehe...achha hai...naam pe flat hoti ho...which means u dont scrutinize the story...😆😉...and well...do pics diye bas...😳 tumhari UDs me to fultoo treat hoti hai...😍

As 4 u stop laughing 😆 ' the OS is too good much than u urself expected'👏 & if u cant understand what u wrote '😛😛😛 read the readers comments samajh aa jayega' that "We are meant to love this OS" 😳😳😳😳 Aww...chalo U liked it...waise bhi its all abt U liking it...and NOT me liking it..😉😆 so thank you!!😃

Coming to OS its mindblowing 👏👏👏 loved to see Raj in college 😳😳 in FB scenes 'kabhi dhekhne ka mauka hi nahi mila ' neither onscreen nor in FFs in all ffs businessman hi banta hai'. 😆 Haha...yeah!! But main aksar usse college me imagine karti hu...and lets see...if I ever cum up wid a college fic which will be on Rajeev of course...😉😉

Rakshit Kangana relation progressed brilliantly from first meeting to last late night confession'Lolz...yeah late night confession!! USP tha kya ye fic ka??😆😆& bestest part rakshit is smarter than adil & rudhir itni jaldi he realised love & confessed too'😆Arre Adil & Rudhir bhi buddhu nahi hai...its just they r not in one shot...🤣 ab wo itne samajhdaar banenge to saare fics one shots ban jayenge na...😆😆

Rakshit kangna first meeting was good' also their fresher ball' did he danced on gori gori there '😉May be...😉 I am sure he will do better now...😍 waise utna karega to bhi chalega...(umm...wish to watch him dance Now)😳😆😆

& kangna not fair rakshit only looking nice'😕😕 I bet he wud be 2gud'😳😳😳 Hehe...hum smart log hai...we knw that already!!😉

Their separation was too long'& their meeting after break was unexpected'loved his reaction catching phone wish I cud see that..😆I hav had a fun tym imagining him doing that!! 😃😃 He looked tooo CUTE!! *sigh*

I didn't knew his mom had fooled him'so easily'.nice surprise by her 'bechare ka phone hi gir jata & rakshit's friend reminds me of my FFs arjun😉 'his friend knows ki Rakshit haan kehne mein time laga deta isiliye mom ne nahi bataya pehle'😆😆😆Hehe...yeah quite like Arjun...but of course...I really like the Raj-Arjun equation more...😳😳

Shagun seemed to be impressed with rakshit'agree with her not mind child marriage with him.😆😆😆.& dekhne mein jhakas hai'😳😳😳Umm...did u catch it that it was my innermost words...😆😆😆🤣

Rakshit is so innocent he doesn't know ladki se kya baat karu ? kangana finding him good in long hai 'hope they are not too long..😉😉😉Nope not too long...just as the pic suggests...teh Aamir type long hair..😉😳😳

Rakshit late nite confession was awesome not expecting it so soon '.quite unusual of our sharmeela raj'😳😳😳 it was 2gud 'I cud imagine him blabbering everything him in 1 go'he wud be looking cute'Blv me...HE WAS!!! 😍confession part was best part of OS "har baar main hi bolta rahu 😳 " & I am shaking my head in Yes go on keep on speaking'.😍 Can I also say him I love u '& he can only say same here I don't mind '😳😳😳Haha...sure!! Do that...and then w8 for him to reply wid 'same here'...😆😉

Itne lumbe comment ke baad u still have doubt '.😆 abt what u wrote'so overall wonderful OS 👏👏👏 sweet simple love story '.a cute 1 ' will wait 4 more' so start thinking abt next' 😛😛😛 Aww...thank you so much Puri. Sach me ye comment padhne ke baad I was like..."chalo it wasnt that bad...achha hi tha shayad"..😆😉...thanks dear...for such a lovely n encouraging comment!! 😃

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome shot

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hello sumi..😊😊

how are you???😊 Hi Shreya...am gud dear!! Hope u r f9 as well..😊

i come across ur oneshots very long but lost the links and now i found it again i 'm here to comment upon the shots 😃😃 Aww...sad that u had to search for it...its really hard to 'search; anything here...😆 but am glad u found it...and next tym onwards u can surely ask me...😳 (as now u knw its me😆)

well all the shots are very beautiful and a lil emotional👏👏 Thanks dear...and am sure the emotional one is the 2nd one specially...😆😆

do continue with these type of shots ...👍🏼👍🏼Sure dear...my pleasure to write and share wid ya all...😃

when u update the shots next time pls. pm me...😊I wud...but u read the next one before I cud PM u...😆 so not my fault...😉 on the contrary I like sending free PMs...😆😆

till then bye tc 😃😃

and best of luck for your boards😉😉😉 Thanks dear...😛