SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84

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wickedangel

@wickedangel

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

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After I talked to you I thought I would come back and comment on this update.....then I decided to read it all over again and gosh I was back where I started before.😆...completely disoriented and lost in the sajan world😆…AGAIN!.😆...so then I had to wait for another few hours before I could comment…but this time I am gonna be smart and comment first and then I will go and read the update again😉…(I might be a little slow sometimes but I catch on😉😆)

Okay so where do I start…first of all when I read gunjan's thoughts about her love for samrat it completely moved me…..just the enormity and the depth of her love is really something…but you were right even more than gunjan, samrat thoughts, his fears, his despair and the immensity of his love for gunjan touched me more deeply than you can imagine….

The beauty with which you have expressed the intensity and the desperation of sajan's love for each other is amazing girl!.👏👏👏..you know in that last scene with sajan, I could almost feel their fear of losing each other and desperation to hold on to each other for that one beautiful moment which might not return….

God girl now I am really excited to read the next chapter but also scared to death cuz I know something bad is prolly gonna happen which might separate our sajan….

i totally love you for writing such an awesome update!....I wish the CVs can read this and show us the same intensity in sajan...gosh if they do, I would prolly be dead after watching that episode😆....love ya sweety!...muah!

p.s. girl this is what you call a bad chapter??😲😲...man you should prolly read some of my essays that I had to write for my english lit class in undergrad.😆...you would be laughing like no other cuz I cant write to save my life!😆😆

Edited by gina87 - 15 years ago

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#172

i have edited my post have a look meens

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368758

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#173

Wow!!!!That was the best update ever.You really rock......How do you bring so much emotions in your writing..I don't have words to express how good it was.Please continue soon...

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#174

hey Meens i finally finishd reading it wow yaar poore hafte ka kota poora kar deti ho i dont know where to start n where to stop well, it was one lovely part everything was just so awesome i loved it to bits
truly amazing

thanks for the pm

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sonal

@sweetsonal156

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#175

AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE............

MINDBLOWINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

FANTASTICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

LOVELYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

I JUST TOTALLY LOVED THIS PART

GOSH I CANT TELL U HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS PART

BUT SERIOUSLY, I JUST LOVED THIS PART FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART

TOTALLY AWSOME

KEEP IT UP

CONT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

N THNXXXXXXXXXXXX 4 THE PM

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#176

tumhare uds padne k liye palke bichayein baithi rehiti hu

k kab tum post karo n mein pad saku

u r simply awsum.....................as well as ur uds

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Marukh Zia

@MoNaYaRoX

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#177

AMAZING UPDATE!!!!
U R THE BEST WRITER!!!
that was really fantastic
their r no words to describe how wonderful u write
i hope Samrat realizes he loves Gunjan and stay with her FOREVER!!!
pllzzz continue soon
ONCE AGAIN
FANTABULOUS UPDATE!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!

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yasri

@yasri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#178

Very beautiful......you are so talented

Please continue...

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#179

mindblowinggg updatee dearr doo contttt soon

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#180

hey meena yar please give me your autograph please then i will show it to all that mine friend meena is superb ,fantastic and wonderful writer with her creative mind i think cvs has to read this FF this is called creativity gosh girl you rock yar 👏 you put each and every emotions so well yar i mean gun's first love's realization was fab. yar and sam's fear and sajan's first time's proximity scene was mindblowing i mean both's depth and soul joint at their moment and from last i am scared for sajan please don't separate this beautiful jodi yar i can't bear it overall superb update can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm by the way i will read it again for sure

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