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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 3 – part C

This Chapter 3 part C is dedicated to some more lovely readers whose comments always make my day more lovely

Saduf: thank u so much for not ever failing to leave ur lovely comments after reading

Shafoo: thanks for always liking my FF

Amrirkhanfhan: am so glad n thankful that u never fail to appreciate my FF

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Gunjan (after two days) is teaching d kids in a class n all of sudden there is giggling going on in d back n she luks back to see Samrat sitting amidst those kids signaling the kids to hush with a finger on his lips n cheeky grin reaching his eyes

Gunjan's heart skips a beat luking at that smile but brings out her best strict-to-d-core-teacher attitude n says "yeh kya ho raha hai yahn, mai jaan sakti hun aap yahan kya kar rahen hai Mr. Samrat" trying to control d pleasure at d sight of getting his undivided attention after having spotted him

Samrat "kuch nahi teacher, bas d usual thing"

Gunjan puzzled "usual thing?"

Samrat trying his best to act normal n hide d grin " Kya teacher aapko itna bhi nahi maloom class me padhai ke alawa kya ho sakta, kyun friends theek kaha na, (all d kids start giggling )

Gunjan now fuming "very funny, yeh mujhe bhi pata magar aap kya kar ….d bell rings n all kids start rushing out n after everyone has left gunjan turns her face away, shy at being left alone n scolds him to hide her shyness "kya samrat …tum bhi bachon se kuch kam nahi ho….yeh kaisa bachpana hai"

Samrat stopping her by pulling her dupatta but gunjan still does not turn "ab teacher se dosti kari hai to bachpana do dikhana hi padega….kyun teacher aapko yeh bacha pasand nahi hai kya (flirtatiously)😆

Gunjan (color creeping up her cheeks) 😳"mazak mat karo samrat"

Samrat "acha to tum sach much mujhe pasand nahi karti"

Gunjan imme "maine aisa kab kaha tha"….luks into samrat's open grin….s"amrat tum yahan se jaate ho ya mujse pitnewale ho"

Samrat smiling "madam agar aap abhi yhan se nahi nikli to pitengi toh aap mujse "

Gunjan "kyun"

Samrat" 1.30 bajne ko hai practice ke liye nahi jaana"

Gunjan " magar janab ne toh mujhe aane se mana kar diya tha, with a mock hurt"

Samrat " haan baat toh sahi hai phir maine socha agar tum nahi aayi toh mai kise daatunga, kisse ladunga, baaki ldyiyaan kitni sweet hai, unhe mai kaise daant sakta toh kisiko toh daantna padega na….is liye maine socha mai todha adjust kar lun"

Gunjan is about to react angrily😡 n tries to stub d feeling of jealousy samrat's words evoked but smarat stops her with a finger on her lips "itna gussa chashmish, lagta hai mujhe maar dalogi, waise tumhari sundar aankhon ne already dil ko kum ghayal kiya hai kya jo ab unse mujhe jalane ki koshish kar rahi ho"😉

Gunjan with cheeks reddened lowers her eyes. This had been her state for d past two days. Smarat never missed an opportunity to flirt with her but she was sure that it was all part of his charm n he was never serious abt it n wud do it ne other girl as well.

Samrat loved seeing d blush 😳spreading across her cheeks, it made chashmish so much more beautiful. Inspite of promising himself not to be anything beyond a gud friend to her n he had to try hard to ignore his attraction coz he knew sparks flew but she was chashmish n nupur's sis n now his januable friend so he cant afford to risk hurting her or his friendship but when ever he came into contact with her he cudnt help but start flirting with her atleast to see tht color enhancing her beauty a notch too much for his comfort but thankfully chahsmish being d wise one always ignored it….atleast one of them was sane😃

Samrat changing d topic "chahsmish ab chalo na….maine sorry kah diya thana, mujhe pata nahi tha kit um school me padtahi ho, tumhare liye toh maine sab ka training schedule afternoon me badal diya

Gunjan's heart blooms at that statement but she quickly hides her reaction n says "toh chalo"

Samrat makes her sit on d bike he had rented from nupur's cousin

Gunjan "samrat bike se jaana zaroori hai kya, hum bus yah auto se ja sakte the na"

Samrat "bus aur auto me yeh maza kahan chashmish"😉

Gunjan "kya kaha tumne"

Samrat recovering "I mean chashmish…woh kya haina …woh..(thinking fast) ..haan woh bus me kitni bheed hoti hai aur phir us dukka mukki me friend chashmish jo rose se bhi nazuk hai woh murjha jayegi aur auto ke rough ride me ek dum sukud jaayegi magar mera bike nazuk si chashmish ko pyar se handle with care ki tarah, le jaayega…toh bolo mera bike hua na better

Gunjan thinks "thank god samrat mera chehra dekh nahi pa rahi warna he will wonder if iam redder than a tomato….yeh ladka bhi na….kabhi baaz nahi aayega n smiles happily n secretly at those affectionate statements of samrat's"

Samrat "akeli akeli kyun hans rahi ho chashmish , humhe bhi toh batao humbhi hans lenge"

Gunjan "tumhe kaise pata mai hans rahi thi" n then is mortified to learn that samrat has been looking at her all d while thru d mirror….god did she have no reprieve, n to hide her consternation, she hits him with her books playfully on d shoulder

Samrat "ouch chashmish, tumhe collge me free lift dene ka acha gift hai yeh"

As soon as they reach college, gunjan starts heading towards d changing room n samrat follows her

Gunjan " tum kahan jaa rahe ho samrat"

Samrat " jahan tum ja rahi ho chashmish"😉

Gunjan a lil irritated " samrat main changing room ja rahi hun"

Samrat "toh mai bhi defntly chalunga" (with a crooked smile glinting in his eyes)😛

Gunjan now a lil angry "yeh kya mazak hai…..mazak ka bhi koi waqt hota hai samrat…."

Samrat with a grin 😆"kyun chashmish tum change karne jao toh wo theek hai agar mai change karne jaoon toh woh mazak hai, yeh kahan ka rule hai chahsmish"😆

Gunjan is embarrassed at her slip n scolds herself for not thinking straight "woh woh ….sorry…woh samrat…woh maine…

Samrat "its ok chahsmish, agar tum itne beautifully Sharma ke sorry bologi toh aur 10 baar mujhe daant sakti ho" (winking in gunjn's direction)😉

Samrat "waise chashmish agar tumhe yeh nahi pata tha ki mai changing room ja rah hun toh tumne kya socha…..😛

Before he could complete gunjan runs away from that place to escape his teasing

Samrat smiles and goes to get changed

There was no current in d college by d time gunjan came out she was sweating n in order to escape that she was rolling on d sleeves of her t-shirt, making it look like a sleeveless t-shirt n just then samrat came out n he was entranced by her gori bahen shining in d blazing light, he was mesmerized to d extent that he extends his hand to feel d satin smoothness of d skin which according to him was silk personified n touches her hand oh so softly as if like a caressing touch of a lover but is jolted awake from d trance by gunjan's fear filled shout "samrat" n he shakes himself mentally…."dude tujhe yeh kya ho gaya, do din ki dosti do minute me todne ka irada hai kya"

Recovering form his stupid act Samrat covers it beautifully saying "chashmish ek second dekne to do…….kahin yeh who Barbie song wali singer(aqua song where her hand comes separately from her body) ka haath toh nahi, bilkul itna hi gora aur itna hi mulayam tha uska haath…waise tum bhi kuch doll se kam pyaari nahi dikthi😉

Gunjan in a stern but not so stern voice "samrat"

Samrat smiling wickedly sings

"gori gori … bahen wali kabhi meri gali aaya karo"

Oh gori gori, bahen wali kabhi bahon me jhulaya karo"

Both gunjan n samrat start laughing at the stupid twisted version of samrat's song😆

Just then someone interrupts their tete-a-tete….."Ms gori bahon wali"

Gunjan looking up "Deepak…..tum yahan kya kar rahe ho"

Samrat stares at him with cold eyes who's managed to snatch chaashmish's attention from him n imme recognizes him as d guy for whom gunjan was smiling so beautifully on d day of mehendi n ashes start coming out of his ears 😡

Deepak (a tall good looking guy wearing those intellectual specs whose smile can be readily seen in his eyes muses

" jahan suraj wahan roshni,

Jahan raat wahan chandni

Jahan gunjan hum diwane I mean Deepak bhi wahin" With a wink 😉in gunjan's direction

To be continued

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Dear friends,

Thanks so much for all ur lovely comments n big apologies for not being able to reply to everyone but trust me every one of ur comments small or big touched a chord in my heart n made my day a lot better so thanks a lot for d same and thanks for liking my last chapter …..i was so happy that all of u liked that different flavor after the passion oriented chapter. This is time for me to ask forgiveness for seriously not being able to do justice this time. I am really sorry a pain in my back didn't help me in being too innovative in this chapter. Moreover in someways I had to make this chapter more of a justification . I have kickstarted d journey of gunjan's realization with seeds of feelings taking root slowly. In next chapter u will see a full blown realization from gunjan of her feelings for samrat n yes Deepak will be good for samrat's ego ….so pls forgive me for not being able to do much justice in this chap. I promise next chap will be more fun with lot of masti, nok hjhok, more harmless romaance, some basket ball court scenes of sajan exclusively n another episode of samrat's nice bonding with one another gang member which reinstates gunjan's justification that she can't help but fall for samrat….thanks u all….pls pls frankly do let me know ur comments as i appreciate them a lot.

Luv n cheers,

Meenakshi

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Posted: 15 years ago

Gosh that was awesome!!...I loved all three parts of this update meens...I don't know why you keep saying that you didn do justice to this update but as far as I am concerned, it was superb!...the way you showed samrat's feelings for gunjan, his guilt and then his flirting, I could seriously imagine it while I was reading it..and then gunjan's feeling for samrat...awww!....I loved the way you showed their bond and the way they are drawn to each other in this chapter..

Meens I cant write to save my life but I read a lot...I mean I read all kinds of books and whenever I get a chance, I tend to prefer books over anything else...and I have noticed that a lot of people can write but only a few can make their story and characters stay with you...make you feel the character's pain and longing... and you are one of the writers who can do it...the story you are telling is really beautiful and has stayed me since the day I started reading it....its a really amazing talent meens...

omg i forgot to add, i loved the part about sam getting jealous!...i cant wait for the next chap to see what he is gonna do about it...lol...
Edited by gina87 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you for such a long a lovely update.Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
omgggggggggggggg...
dear it ws amazingggggggggg....
mindblowingggggg...
luved it to d core...
sam ki flirting.. n each n everything...
jst luved it...
n nw sam jealous... hmmmm will be interesting to watch.. 😉
hats off to u yaar... superbbb writing skills.. 👏 👏
pllzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part.... 😛
Please cont soon and Add me
on your PM list....
Love yaaaa...... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
continue soon
loved sajan scenes
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
FANTASTIC UPDATE!!!!
wow that was really good
aw Samrat felt jealous
pllzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
gosh meens lovely update . am little busy so will comment later..
and BTW thanks for the note.
"Samrat thinking that's benji , no questions asked, no explanation expected just being d beautiful friend he was as always but he decides that for once benji deserves an explanation"
this really touching. the sam and benji bond 👏. i would really like to see this kind of conforntation in real MJHT.
the emotions of Sajan , each and every detail the spark, the shine in their eyes oh god i am really impressed by the visual details.
i like the sajan classroom one with kids that was ultra cute. and happy with the flirt sammy....😆
and meens one more request can pls make an index of the chapters, it will make the reading and references easy.
Edited by aarthi.ramani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
aaaaamzing toooooooooooo good fabulous.. i simply loved it......... by god maaaaza aagaya.. and sajan are frends best thing ever....... simply awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee...!!!!

realy loved it...hayyyyyyeee sammy's cute flirting wid gunji...love it yaar...!!!!
n sam ne sach me gunji ke hathon ko toch karke...hayeeeeeeeeee...arre yaar sammy...thoda apno feeling conrrol karo...nai mat karo...hume acha lagta hai😳
thank u sooo much for dedicating dat adorable-sajan frndship part to me...!!😊
really loved it to d core....plzzzzzzzz cont soon..!!!!!
thanx for d pm..!!!
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago

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