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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello dear fiends'.am back with 2 update to make up for d delay in posting d earlier chap'

This chap 2 part b is dedicated to a dear friend aashi (aashizin ) who is a total sweet heart n a friend sweeter beyond sweetness😊

The chapter 2 Part c is dedicated to another wonderful dear reader Jyothi (sajanroxx20)'she's one of d first few whom I have always seen eagerly responding to so many ffs'.her comments along with all u wonderful readers', r a boost for amaeteur writers like me'thanks a lot dear jyothi 😊

Chapter 2 (part b)

Benji "Hi Friends, Iam back, promise kiya than a ki hum morena me milenge 😉'..waise aap log soch rahe honge ki ab toh samrat aur gunjan ki love story ban gayee'.maine b kuch aisa hi socha jab un dono ko ek doosre ki baahon me dekha tha'.magar yeh dono tho kisi aur hi daur se guzar rahen hain,

pyar rishte me ek jazba kayam karta hai toh nafrat doosra'.in dono jazbon me jo ulaj jaaten unke yeh liye tai karna mushkil ho jata kab pyar unhe gher raha hai aur kab nafrat ka junoon unhe vash me kar raha hai'.apne sajan ka bhi yeh hi haal hai'.in dono ke beech abhi pyaar kya dosti tak shuru nahi toh phir yeh kaise inti aasani se is jazbe ko pehchann payenge'..


😕mmm kehte hai na woh picture me "pyaar karne ke liye kabhi kbahi toh pehli mulaqat kaafi hoti aur kabhi toh puri zindagi bhi kam pad jaati hai"'.well in logon ko bhi mushikilon se paar karke hi apne pyaar ki manzil milegi inhen'..jo pyar badi shiddat se aur atyant sangarshon ko guzarke hume milta, us pyar ki ahmiyat apni rooh se mitaye nahi mitt hi janm janmon tak'.toh bas inke

pyaar ka safar tarkrar se shuru hoke,

nafrat ki aandhi se guzar ke

dosti ke rang me lipat ke

chahat ke aanchal me chupke

yaar ke rang me rangke

inkar ki raaton me tadap kar

milegi manzil inhe mohabbat ki kshitij par

Toh bas doston chaliye inko shubh yatra ka sandesh dekar hum bhi inke safar par shamil ho jaate hai😆

Samrat is cursing himself n his head is spinning unable to understand wats happening with him. He cannot believ he has been so stupid to let go of control for a girl whom he met this morning, who has no meaning in his life( y does his heart pain at this thought)''no he cannot afford to think these mushy mushy thots '.he has done enuf damage already '.its time to show chashmish d real side of his as d world sees him'.yes he will just do that😡

Gunjan runs to her room to wash away the tears of shame that r crowding her mind n find way on her face. She is unable to explain at what mad moment had she given herself away so easily to a stranger who has done nothing but insult her from d moment she has met him'she repairs her makeup n decides to stay away from samrat whatever cost tht mayb coz she cant afford to do this mistake ever again n just when she comes out of the room she clashes with Samrat

Samrat 😡" Oh chashmish'.ek min'.i just wanted to clarify sum things to u"

Gunjan "mujhe akela chod do, mujhe tumhari koi bakwas nahi sunni"

Samrat's resolve strengthens at her bitter tone n holds her wrist when she's about to move past him "oh miss chashmish, mujhe b koi shaunk nahi tum jaise ladki se baat karke apna waqt barbaad karne ka, mai bas tumhe yeh samjhane aaya tha ki us waqt mai hosh me nahi tha'.is liye jo bhi hua use tum zyada ahmiyat dene ki koshish mat karna '.(now smirking n giving her a disgusting luk n trying to create d wall of hate between them)'


Samrat "waiase maine toh suna tha tum gaon ki ladkiyan bahut seedhi sadhi hoti ho, magar tum toh kaafi tez nikli chashmish'.manna padega jab tum mujse takrayi maine socha ki who anjaane me hua tha magar jis tarah tum mere peeche pad gayi aur who kiss, I cant believe tum itni impress hoke meri bahon me kho gayi'.."

Samrat "waise tum anjaan aadmi se aisi milke lipat jaati ho yah yeh mera asar khali hai (gunjan angrily about to interrupt is cut short by samrat continuing), phir toh tumhare ghar kea age ladkon ki lambi line hogi na'..waise tumme aur nupur me kitna farak hai who kitni bholi aur tum kitni tez, uski zubaan kitni meeti aur tumahri ekdum teekhi mirchi''.

Samrat "hmm interesting but sorry chashmish woh kya haina tum meri type nahi ho'.mai chah ke bhi tumhare feelings of attraction ko reciprocate nahi kar sakta'..haan ek raat guzarne ki baat hoti toh aur baat thi who bhi nahi kar sakta (gunjan is stunned n dumbstruck by d pain his words r causing in her heart, y is a strangers words hurting her selfrespect so much) tum soch rahi hogi mai toh shahar ka ladka hun to one night se mujhe koi prob nahi honi chahiye'magar sorry chashmish us ke liye tum suitable nahi aur upar se tumhe nupur ki parvah nahi magar mujhe '

before he cud complete a whacking sound preceeds the connecting of a smooth hand with all d force of d steel landing straightly on his cheeks causing an instant red mark

H luks up to see gunjan's eyes blurred with tears which r flowing uncontrollably off their own volition n her throat is choked when words r finding an outlet so difficult n her irregular breathing expresses d disturbance his words had caused in her mind, he's about to open his mouth to shout at her

Gunjan raises her hand warningly , first d whole of her hand signaling him to stop n as she's unable to speak a word n too disgusted to even open her mouth while d tears just don't seem to be stoping then she raises her index finger warningly just with d intensity of her eyes inspite of being drowned with tears daring him to speak a word more, she motions her index finger for a whole minute allowing just her action n anger in her, just reiterates with her burning looks not to repeat this mistake ever'..

samrat was happy at having achieved his objective but d pain n burning anger were buring his soul'.his eyes without his knowledge were trying to apologize for having crossed his limits '.but her anger n her gesture stops him coz he knew not to test his luck but that still didn't stop d feeling of thousand knives piercing his heart at d look of despair in gunjan's eyes for which he was d cause'.

D hatred in her eyes exbhited d passion, with which hatred was lke a shamble of rusted chains capturing his body n breathe being suffocated in his throat,,,, gunjan didn't even turn to see d silent tears flowing out samrat's eyes of which he himself was unaware

Gunjan runs into her room n locks herself n goes n falls on d bed, muffling d sound her heart is forcing her to release for d pain samrat's words had evoked , use samajh nahi aa raha tha kya use zyada dard de raha hai, samrat ke shabd ya uske dil ka zakhm jo ek anjaan insaan ki baton se bhavnoa ke daldal se jhooj raha tha'..

she cries out aloud at d unfair pain fate has thrown her way "aakhir sssamrat ne aisa kiya kyun, maine us ussska kya bigada tha, kyun who woh mujhe itna chot pahunchh raha ha hai"

she takes a deep breathe to control her sobs which have become uncontrollable n forcibly keeps her hand hon d mouth to stop d sobs only to realize that she can't stop d pain her heart is feeling which r causing d sobs but still tries her best to muffle d sobs which otherwise wud sound like loud wails'but even then she's unable to understand her mistake

Gunjan "kyun bhagwan , maine toh toh di sse samrat ke bbare me itna kuch ssuna ttha'.mere dil me toh uss uske liye ek softtt corner bhi di ki baton ne use dekhe bina p piada kar diya tha, phir pphir mere se kya kya galllllti hui ki usne mujse aisi baaten kiiiii'.kyun kyun" just to calm her anger she beats d pillow as if that cud make d hurt go away'.Just then nupur comes

Nupur " chutki chutki'.ae gunjan tu andar kya kar rahi hai'..darwaza kyun lock liya hai'khol mai toh khat khata bhi nhi sakti, uffo yeh mehendi kab sukhegi"

Just then gunjan realizes d mehendi of her own hands which had not dried too well n when she had come up to cry n wash her face, like an automaton she had forgotten all about her own mehendi, n now while crying n trying to hold her sobs n betaing d pillows, half d mehendi had gone'

Quickly controlling her sobs n her mind to hide her condition from her di Gunjan says"oh god di ab poochegi toh kya jawab doongi'.yeh maine kya kar diya '.meri mehendi rang lane se pehle hi mit gayi,'.hey bhagwan yeh sab mere saath ki kyun ho raha hai'..kyun mai samrat se mili'.kyun maine uske saath dance kiya'.kyun maine use kiss'

nupur interrupts in a worried tone "gunjan tu jawab kyun nahi de rahi'tu theek tho hai na chutki'.darwaja khol na n tries to rattle d door with her elbow just in case her voice is not reaching gunjan (now that shud be d joke of d era😆'her voice not reaching gunjan when whole village can feel d vibrations of her high pitched tone 😆)

Gunjan "aayi di ( ina feeble still tear lined voiced'controlling n taking a deep breathe)'ek minute" (more stable voice)'mai rest room me hun'bas abhi aayi'(quickly rushes to d restroom n removes wats remaining of her mehendi when her heart again is saddened by seeing d dull pale color which cud not get dark at all n splashes water on her face 5-6times n quickly applies a lil bit of powder n kaajal n under eye lotion n lip gloss to hide d swollen eye n lip effects thanks to non stop crying . Looking onc finally in d mirror, satisfied with d damage control done goes n opens d door)

Gunjan " kya hua di'.mujhe kyun kyun doondh rahi this 'kuch kaam tha tha kya mmujse (her voice is still wobbly n not completely recovered as she assumed so tries to hide it behind a sweet smile )

Nupur noticing d change in her demenaour n shivering lips "chutki tu theek toh hai na'.tere hont kaamp kyun rahe hain'.dekh meri taraf dekh" her concern opens d flood gates that she had just tried closing ineffctually

Gunjan quickly adjusting " tum bhi na di'.aisi kuch kuch baat nahi hai (a lone tear escapes)'bas aaj eh ehsaas hua ki tum tum thode dino me chali jaaogi toh toh mai kitni akeli pad jaaongi'..aur kaise kaise jee paoongi tumhare bina (but as she speaks she realizes how d separation of her beloved di was like a big chunk of rock in her heart all these dys n with samrat's words even that fear had found its ways out n now tears just don't seem to be stopping)

Nupur is also drenched in tears at her words "pagli kahi ki'..mai toh hamesha tere saath hi hun'chahe tere paas rahun ya nahi'.aur mai to aati jaati rahungi'...bala meri chutki se mile bina mujse thodi na raha jaayega'chal apne aansoon pahuch'.bygod bekar me mujhe bhi rula diya abhi tak toh bidaai ka scene aaya bhi nahi (gunjan smiles softly at dat remark)

Nupur noticing gunjan's mehendi free hand "tere mehendi ko kya hua'.itni jaldi kyun mita diya'.abhi to rang chada bhi nahi hai'.by god gunjan thodi der nahi wait kar sakti thi kya'.aisa kya kaam aa gaya"

Gunjan stammering "woh di woh'.woh kya hai...woh neccche hall me ek choti bachi bachi khelte hue gir gayi aur rone lagi aur isliye usko uta ke sambhalte waqt meri mehendi thodi kharab ho gayi aur isliye poora haath dhona pada (completes everything in single breathe not trusting her voice to continue d lie if she had paused in between)

Nupur "tub hi na 'ekdum paagal hai, ahca chal yeh sab baaten chod yeh bata tujhe samrat kaise laga"

Gunjan as if hit by a stone jerks n backs off "samrat'k kyun di'.uske bare me kyun pooch rahi ho'us usne tumse kuch kaha kya"

Nupur puzzled "nahi kuch kahna chahiye tha kya (with a childish smile)"

Gunan "kya di tum bhi bekaar ki bbatein leke bait gayi'.us samrat ke bare mai kuch nahi sunna chahti'.ek number ka ghada hai who'.pat nahi tum aur tumhare dost kaise use jhelte ho'.kitna battameez insaan hai who'..na koi sharm na koi haya'..jo use mila samjho who kaam se gaya'.koi tehzeeb hi nahi hai na baat karne ka dang (as if a wound had been opened she was pouring out)

Nupur interrupting "baap re inta gussa'usne aisa kya kar diya '..bas thodi si flirting hi toh ki this'.aur maine tumhe uske bachpan ke bare me bataya hai, isliye us wajah se kabhi kabhi who bahar se rude nazar aata hai aur uski baaten kaanton ki tarah chubti hai magar andar se uska dil mom se bhi naram hai, woh pyaar ka bhuka hai gunjan aur bhuk ki tadap jab insaan me poori nahi hoti toh dil ko sakt banane pe majboor ho jata hai'


continued in part c 😊

Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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Chap 2 Part C

Nupur continues "aaj mai tujhe ek sach batati hun joh maine tujse aur bauji se chipaya tha, kyunki mai tum logon ko pareshan nahi karna chahti thi…yaad hai do mahine pehle jab mai mayank ki maa se milne Mumbai gayi thi, tab ek din hum sab dost night show dekhke aa rahe the, diya benji aur dodo gaadi me wapas chale gaye magar mai walk karke jaana chahti thi kyunki samrat ka gahr paas me that aur us din hum dono usek ghar me taharne waale the, kyunki maa Gwalior thak gayi hui thi kuch kaam se,

Nupur "thab bechara samrat bhi hamare wajah se chal kar humhare saath aa raha tha, hum hanste khelte ek doosre ki taang kheechte hue ghar pahunchne hi waale the ki ekdun kuch gunde peeye hue badmash gaadi me aake tapak pade aur mujhe chedne lage, pehle toh mayank ne samrat to jawab dene se rok liya aur ignore karne ko kaha magar jab who humara peecha nahi chod rahe the aur mujhe taunt kare jaa rahe the, samrat se saha nahi gaya, woh un gundon pe japat pada ekdum filmy style me….

Nupur "phir dekte hi dekte mayank bhi samrat ki madad Karne ke liye unhe maarne laga aur phir achanak se ek bandhe ne chakoo ki nauk par muje jakad liya, mayank meri aur badh hi raha ki ek gunde ne peeche se ek bottle uske sir par mar diya aur jab mayank gir ne wala tha who gunda usi toote hue kaanch ke tukde uski pet me gusendne aaya…

Nupur "mai ekdum chillane lagi "mayank peeeche dekho, sambhalo, itne me samrat ne baki teen gundon ko unhi ke hockey stick se maar ke lahu laha kar diya tha aur jaise si usne mayank pe hamla hote hue dekha, usne kuch nahi socha, sar pe lage chot se behosh hote hue mayank ko us gunde ke samne se dhaka deke hata diya aur isse pehle ki who us gunde ko rokta, us ne woh glass mayank ke jagah smarat ke pet me gused di….."samrat" jaise hi mai chilayi jis gunde ne mujhe jakda hua tha usne mere gale me chakoo se ek lakeer keech di….

Nupur "samrat buri tarah se ghayal hone ke bawajood , apne pet se us glass piece ko nikalke usi kaanch ke tukde se us gunde ke face pe waar kiya aur who gunda chillate hue apnikhon me hue kahrosh se tapadte hue wahan se bahg gaya aur phir samrat meri taraf aaya aur jis gunde me mujpe waar kiya tha use bhi ghayal kar diya"

Nupur "Mai kis kashmakash me thi tujhe bata nahi sakti thi, ek taraf mayank behoshi ki haalat me sar se behte hue khoon me lipta tha aur doosri or zakhm se ghayal samrat ka badan road pe khoon di dara baha raha tha…".

Nupur "mai bas chillathi rahi….samrat….mayank….help help…..koi hai……pls help…..bachao….hey bhagwan mai kya karoo….koi toh suno….pls meri madad karo….mai gidgidati rahi idhar udhar dauthe hue….magar us sunsaan der raat me na toh koi insaan nazar aa raha tha aur mayank ka mobile hatah pai me toot gaya tha….."

Nupur "phir jaise ki baghwan ne meri pukar sun li ho, samrat mushkil se behoshi se apne aapko majbooran bahar nikala….jaise ki usne dil me taan lit hi woh abhi tak behosh nahi ho sakta…..uska abhi bhi aur kuch karna baaki ho"…..magar uske dard ka ehsaas uske face ki har ek lakeer zaahir kar rahi thi, ignoring his pain, usne apne shirt ko phada aur kas ke apne pet me band liya thaki khoon kuch had tak ruk jaaye….aur meri taraf dheemi aawaz me jaise kis bas who uski akri shakti thi bolne ke liye….

Samrat"nup pur…..yah an aa ooo….ha me mayan kkk ko aspathaaal abhi leeee jana hoga……use uthane me meri madad karo…."

Nupur continues "apne zakhm ko nazar andaaz karte hue, samrat aur maine badi muskil se 5min ka raasta uske ghar tak tai kiya….dono ne behosh mayank ko uske car me daala aur mai jaldi se uske car ki keys le aayi……apne asahay halat ko dard ke par control karte hue, usne gaadi chalayi….haan who control na kar payaa porri tarah se magar phir bhi who chalta gaya

Samrat "nupuuuurr yeh loooo….diyaaa kooo phonnnne lagaoooo aur cityyyyyyyy hosp…"

Nupur " I understood, phir dekte his jaise ki yeh bura sapna khatam ho raha tha hum aspathal pahunche aur ward boy ke aane tak ka intezaar nahi kiya usne….woh aakhri padav toh uske khud tai kiya….mai bhi kuch nahi kar paayi…sadme ne aadha mera dimaag band karwadiya tha toh aadha gale pe lage zakhm ne….

samrat apni bahon me mayank ko jakde andar daudne laga….mano ki us 5 min me who bhool gaya that ki who b equally zakhmi hai….jaise ki uske sar pe koi junoon ghar kar gaya ki mayank ko bacahke rehna….jaise hi ward boys ne mayank ko usse le liya…samrat ki shakti use chodne lagi aur andhere ne use gher liya….woh behosh hone hi wala tha ki diya dodo aur benji aur maine daudke use sambhala….behosh hone se pehle uske aakhri shabd kya the pata hai chutki Samrat''nupuuur…tummmmmm ghabrao matttt….mayankkk koo kooch nahiiii hogaaa….maiii useeee kuccchhhh nahii hone doongaaa"…"diyaaaa nupurrrr ka ilaaz karwao…uskeeee galeeeee me" n then everything balcked out for him

Nupur "tun nahi jaanti chutki….tu samajh bhi nahi paayegi gunjan who 48 gante meri zindagi ki sabse badi imhetaan ki gadhi thi (nupur eyes n heart, as if were reliving the nightmare r cornered by tears galore n fear is still making her shiver) …"mayank ka toh zakhm bhagwan ki krupa se chota tha…..use 2 gante me hosh aa gaya….magar….samrat samrat (unable to continue n chokes on her own words)….us bechare ki jaan hamare wajah se critical crtitcal condition mee thiii…doctors ne kaha bahut khoon bah gaya hai aur uska intestinal track rupture hoke khoon abdomen ki cavity me beh raha tha….bachne ki ummeden bahut kam hai"

Nupur " mai toh jaise toot gayi thi gunjan….woh insaan jisne apne jaan pe khelke meri aur mayank ki jaan bachayi….jise behoshi ki haalat me bhi hamari fikar kha rahi thi…..jiske pyaar aur dosti ke kisse maine benji , diya aur uday se sune the magar mehsoos karke toh meri rooh hi kaamp uti thi…mai aur mayank apne ko sambhal hi nahi paa rahe the……

Nupur "magar bhagwan to nyayi hai na…kehte hai na a gud turn deserves another" "usne hum sabki sun lin….hamre ansoon ki nadi ne uske dil ko pigla diya aur jaise diya,benji aur dodo pray kar rahe the "hamare angel friend ko bachalo bahgwan…hamse hamare is angel friend ko mat cheeno"….

Nupur "us din sahi mayine me mujhe aur mayank ko ehsaas hua ki who teeno use kyun angel friend uske peet peeche bulate the……maine bhagwan se kah diya ki badi muskil se meri zindagi me samrat ke roop me dost banke aaye ho….mai aapko use mujse chene nahi doongi…hum sab chup nahi baitenge….hum samrat ko kuch hone nahi denge" (by now nupur's eyes r swollen n dissolved in tears….her face is bloated n eyes blurred"

Gunjan's shrill sob breaks d nighmare for nupur n she turns toward gunjan jo sisak sisak ke ro rahi thi

Nupur "ab bata gunjan….jo insaan apne doston ke liye jaan ki baazi lagake kjeet jaaye who kaise ganda ho sakta hai…..hum sab us din samajh gaye uske pyar aur dosti ki hadhen usne kahbi tai hi nahi kit hi….kiya tha toh aisa pyar….nibhayo thi toh aise dosti ki 7 janm bhi hum logon ke liye kam padenge uska udhar chukane ke liye…….woh sach much hum sabki zindagi ka farishta hai…."

Nupur "haan yeh sach hai ki uske shabd zeher se bhi zehreele hai magar us zaher ke peeche jo pyaar ka amrit usne chupa rakha who kismet walon ko hi nasseb aati hai chutki…n iam proud ki mai itni lucky hoon…mai kya humara poora gang garv mehsoos karta hai ki hum uske dost hai…."

uske kadve shabd hazaar baar hamare dil ko cheer jaaye koi gham nahi,

dosti ka ek pyara nazrana mil jaaye, tadapta uska dil bhi kuch kam nahi……

Nupur 'Chutki uska dost banna hai toh use dil se bina kisi sharth ke apnana padega, uske dard se dosti karni padegi, uske nafrat ka saamna karma padega, tu uske outward appearance ko hatake use dekhegi toh tu uske wajood ko jaan payegi…..khair maine jo kehna tha keh diya…..bas ek req….agar who tujse teekh se pesh nahi aaye toh use pls ignore kar dena magar use wapas mat hurt karma, mere khatir pls chutki, uske dil ne wiase hi koi kam chot nahi paaye hai….pls ha….(going towards to wipe d tears that were still pouring non stop from gunjan eyes)

Gunjan "di….with great diuffulty finding a steady voice….mehendi…when nupur gives confused luk ….aapki mehendi."

Nupur "are haan….mai phir se bhool gayi…by god abhi se itni bhulakkad ho gayi"

Gunjan wipes her tears n her di's tears as well …both seem to have lost control n trying to find it difficult to hold onto calmness…n with an awkward gud night, not wanting to breaks d momentum of emotions each is gng thur, go to their rooms to sleep….but for gunjan sleep was d last thing on her mind…..

Gunjan goes n stand near d window….n d tears rush as if there's no tomorrow…she's unable to understand what's causing d freeflow….her hurt, her confused emotions, her erractic behaviour earlier, or d sadness for d lost lil boy whose pain is overwhelming her mind's sanity…n she luks outside not luking at anything particular…as if searching for an answer out there in d darkness


Samrat in d meanwhile is gulping another glass of desi hsarab in d roadside dhaba…. his eyes r deep red bloodish color n swollen …..his face a nask of pain…whiter than d ghost…he's sitting in a dark corner alost unnoticed by neone at first glance…d plate of food untouched n two empty bottles of alchol gracing d table….d radio beeps out

jeene ke liye socha hi na tha, dard sambhalane hongemuskuraoon to, muskurane ke karz utaarne honge muskuraoon kabhi to lagata haijaise hontonn pe karz rakhaa hai tujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main o hairaan hoon maintere masoom savalon se pareshaan hooN main o pareshaan hoon main"

N radio in d background in gunjan's room plays out as if fate is living thru her pain with her

"aaj agar bhar ayi hai, boondein baras jaayengi kal kya pata inke liye aakhen taras jayengijaane kahan gum kahan khoya ek aansu chhupake rakha thatujhase naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main o hairaan hoon maintere masoom savalon se pareshaan hooN main o pareshaan hoon main"

two screen one showing gunjan crying silent tears near her window n another showing samrat wiping angrily away at tears escaping beyond his conrtol n song continues

jindagee tere gam ne humei rishte naye samazaayemile jo hume, dhoop mein mile chhaanw ke thhande saayetujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main o hairaan hoon maintere masoom savalon se pareshaan hooN main o pareshaan hoon main"

Just then benji enters d dhaba n after second n third glance around spots smarat…n thinks thank god chotu had seen him entering d dhaba

Benji (shocked at samrat's condition n bloated reddish puffy face)"samrat….yeh kya kar raha….hai…sambhal apne aapk ko…..bas kar…tujhe ho kya gaya hai…tu guest house kyun nahi aaya"

Samrat in a slurred tone…."benjiii…myyyy firrend….mayyy jaanta tha kiu tuu aayega…aaaa bait"(motioning d seat behind him by banging it) ….."benjiiii tuje kabhi aisaaaa feellll nahi hotaa ki rozzzz rozz marne ke badddle ekkkk hi din me mar jaaye….(benji is shoked n hurt, tears well up his eyes, he's never seen samrat in this condition, he knows sumthing terribly has upset his mind, even in d worst situations earlier he had never seen this form of samrat

Samrat "maiii kyun tumaharrrre,maynkkk, udayyy ki tarah norrrmallll nahyi ho sakta, maii takkkk gaya hun benjjjjjiiii, khudddd see tang aa chukaaa hun, mere se is dilllll ko ab aur dhokaaa nahi diyaa jaata, maiii normalll hona chahtaaa hoon benji….

Samrat "maiiii tumhare jaisa normallll hona chaaaata hun, maiii chahtaaa hunn ki mai usse normmmallll hoke baat karurrrn, usseee normalllll logon ki tarahh dost banun, maiss usseee normalll , maiii,,,(benji was wondering amidst d free flow fo tears sweeping his cheeks who's he talking about but didn't have to even ask or wait for long)"….

Samrat ".maiiii bot gannda hun…ammm wwaaaryy baddd….maainnne usse bottt hurrrt kiyyya….wohhh mujssssse kabhhhiii baat nayyyy karegiiii, chashhhhhmishhhhh ammmmverrryy sorry….benjiiiiitu bolllna am reallllly sorrrry….ussse bollll na benjjiiii my firrrend…(blabberings were turning into sobs caused by d uncontrollable unexplainable pain superceding ne amout of physical pain in his heart)…."

Samrat sobbing loudly now "tuuuuu booollll na….maiiii kyyyunnn normal nayyy hun…maiii bhhiii norrmalll….chashhhmisshhh…normal…chashmishhh, mayyy bbb, chassh" (his head hits d table n blackness of alcohol corners him,

benji controlling his own emotional outburst at seeing his dearest friend in so much pain but unable to do a thing,,,, lifts his arm to take him 2 guest house while tears continue to make a silent journey on both their faces…he had alrdy seen a kind of spark bet sam n gunjan today, cant define wat it is but knows sumthing bet gunjan n samrat went terribly wrong but is clueless n prays to god silently to clear d hurt n bring a shunshile n warmth n love filled dawn tomorrow!!!


to be continued

Dear friends,,

Thanks u so much for all ur lovely comments …first of all a big sorry for such delayed updates but my work's crazily keeping me on my toes…am sitiing at might 1pm n updating my story 😆..n that's y two parts to make up for d delay 😊….hope u all like it, many of u might not like this chapter of mine….I had to give a break from prev chap for u to feel this chap in a diff light….as I mentioned in my CS, its not a normal love story but it's a journey of realization of true love which goes thru various emotions----in d prev chp u have seen passion, in above chapters u have seen hatred, hurt, helpnessness –I have tried to combine. I promise next chap willl be bright, it will be another phase of emotional rollercoaster, a start of new friendship, a new beginning with lots of cute sajan moments, then in next few chapters we'll see gunjan entering d realm of love, samrat going thru denial, gunjan in a phase of hurt n then hope n samrat in a phase of healing , then realizations strikes samrat major time n then they achieve true love n togetherness, that has been polished n ground to shining effect by d turmoils which has taken their path of love to a level beyond their own soul/spirits were capable of….Inspite of d sadness n intensity of hate n hurt in this chap, am hoping u wud be able to like it a teeny weeny bit 😛…..But nevertheless pls let me know ur comments frankly….thanks so much….luv u all

Cheers,

Meenakshi

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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
hey Meena
i srsly loved the chapters
awesome yaar
there's so much pain on both sides
i cud just imagine it
n i know its not funny,but kya karoon,
when i was reading Sam's lines which he speaks when he's drunk, it was real fnny,
i mean, u wrote the perfect dialogues, just wht a drunk person wud say, n this was funny, all those repetition of letters was perfect,
poor Sammy as well as poor Gunjan
plz do update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
It was a great update.You said it with lot of emotion and passion.I can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
i really like your 2 part b and c plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
this was an awesome update.. loved it , will be waiting for the next part. do continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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#87
Seriously.....
You are a wonderful writer....
Please cont soon and add me
on your PM list.... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh gosh meens i dont know about gunjan but i am definitely falling in love with this samrat....gosh kya hero hai!...you totally made me cry today...but i really really loved this chapter...cuz the way you showed the emotional depth of samrat and gunjan was just amazing!...i cant begin to tell you how much it affected me...and another thing, i am totally in love with your writing...gosh girl, you have an amazing talent and beautiful prospective of life which i can tell from reading your ff.🤗..
totally superb update girl!👏...and this part was even better than the last one!!...i cant wait for the next chapter...but no need to rush cuz i know you are really busy so until you update i will keep re reading the previous chapter..😃.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh gosh meens

great dialogues and plot . each emotions well expressed .. 👏
hey i could just sam durnk man... the whole scene was just flashing ..
pls update fast dear cant wait to read the next one ......😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
I like the sensation of pain you narrated here...besides i cldnt stop myself from commenting as u quoted my fav song..tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi...great going....love it till now...

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