SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

Awesome mindblowing Fantastic update.It felt so good reading such a long update.You really rock.Please continue soon.It was really very emotional too

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ammykhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

wow lovely update.u are an amazing writer😊 Thx 4 the pm.

Edited by ammykhan - 15 years ago

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sonal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee ud

loved all the sajan scenes

it was a mindblowing ud

ples cont soon

n thnx 4 the pm

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cuteangelgirl95

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Posted: 15 years ago

#124

awesome update
dear loved it
continue asap
thanx 4 the pm

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#125

awesome and rocking update. will be waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm, continue soon.

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wickedangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

OH MY GOD!!...wow!!..👏👏..I don't know where to start….

Okay first of all, girl thank you so much for being a wonderful and a dear friend🤗🤗…I cant even tell you how much your sweet words moved me…so all I am gonna say is that you are an absolute sweetheart and I just wanna give you a big hug!!

Like I said before I don't even know where to start writing about your update….you know every time I read a chapter of yours I always think that you cant top this one but every single time you do….and I am left speechless all over again….what I loved about this entire chapter was the beauty with which you showed the depth of samrat and gunjan's feelings for each other but also (let me see if I can explain this in the right way…) the way you showed someone internal fight with themselves when it comes to love.. …what I am trying to say is that you not only showed their feelings but also the essence of each character….to the extent that I can imaging exactly what both sam and gunjan would be feeling at that point…..( dont know if I made any sense😆…)…and gosh I totally loved the jealous samrat!!.😉...hayeee!!*daydreaming about mohit*

Another thing I loved is the value you have given to friendship and looking beyond what you see in a person at the first glance… what benji, dia and everyone else feels for samrat is so beautifully explained from the start that I cant even hate samrat even when I read some of the things he says to his friend…the way you have presented this complex character is amazing…👏.

And also gosh girl I know I have said this before but seriously how do you write these lines??...I swear I have never met anyone before who can write such beautiful words in such a manner that it touches your heart…..and not be aware of their talent…….I cant even tell you which line I loved the most cuz the truth is I loved the entire poem!!....

Gosh I cant wait for the next chapter!!...but now I am gonna run back and read this chapter again.😃.

p.s. girl my vm is absolutely nothing compared this this awesome chapter and especially that beautiful poem that you wrote…i know this comment is really long but its all your fault for being such an awesome writer....love ya sweety!!!.....muah!

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jyotika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#127

omgggggggggggg dear its awesomeeeeeee....
u rock yaar..... u r an amazinggg writer..
hats of to u....
i luved dis ud.....
it ws beautifullll...
pllzzzzzzzzz cont soon yaar.. cant wait to read further...

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Aaru77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#128

👏offensive strategies ke kuch finer points practice karenge. ....(that was amateurish basket ball😲 i know 😆)

meens dear you are saying these explaination are amateurish. aare itne finner pts to apne sammy ko bhi itne aache se explain karne nahi ata. 😆

To kya aap mere basketball coach banage .😉😆😆😆

irritated at his stupid question replies with tears "nahi nahi'.mai toh perfectllly fit fit hoon..aaouuch'.woh toh mai mai bore hoti hun ...toh khud neeche gir girrr jaati au'..aur aur phir thodi der ... derr mee ronnee lagti hun" she manages in between sobs 😭

Samrat as if hurt "nautanki aur mai'.aur who bhi morena ki sabse badi nautanki ki sister mujhe bol rahi hai'god kya zamana aa gaya'.waise chahsmish tum apni di se kuch seekho'woh yahan hoti toh pure morena ko cheek ke ikatta kar leti '.aur tum hans kyun rahi ho....'mai tumhara kidnap kar raha hun'.koi comedy circus show dikhane nahi le ja rahun'

too good ... 👏👏👏

Gunjan is looking at Deepak but stealing glances at samrat as if meaning the words only for him from her heart n samrat is obliviously being busy burning Deepak with his eyes. (God wat cross connection 😆)

dimag me lots of cross connection hoga to ye to hona he tha.....

Benji "absolutely sweetheart, but hum to bina matching clothes ke bhi ekdum matching hai haina n winks in her direction"😉

😆😆😆😆

hey i want this in our MJHT benia track so cute,....😳

They were all worried for Dia as if their heart beat wud stop any minute and resume only when they hear a gud news'that's d power of their friendship, only one was wounded but 6 were actually burning in d wound waiting for water in d form of miracle to douse the flames engulfing their hearts

the hospital para shows the value of friendship they share and the value which each one have ....

Benji knew this was the turmoil, storm waiting to break open, thanks to gunjan the change they had all been waiting , the reaction that they had all tried to get out for ages, the expression of love, vulnerablilty and insecurity so freely given for all to see, without any reservation.

benji such a sweetheart he knows sammy in and out ... and this paragraph beautifully explains that.....

and when dia pours her heart out its so real....

Understanding for what he was here n without wasting time she runs to him n gives smarat a tight hug conveying her support, telling him she was with him if he needed her, knew that she can't openly say that aslo, knew that its too soon to speak anything, knew she cud only do this for him at this fragile and emotionally worn out moement

Samrat looks into her eyes and face as if wanting to memorize it in his brain forever and with last glance of shared understanding with her,

these lines reminded me of cute scene where gunji is explaining sam regarding his mom's acceptance. sam still confused abt the feeling and she just hugs to reassure him that she there for him... shared understanding......

these explains them and our Sajan so well.. they don't need words they understand each other...

Har pal kyun uske na hone ka ehsaas dilata hai

mere sabr ke imtehan ka anth hua kahan

Is pyar ki shuruat hui kab aur kahan

Aye dil in sawalon ka jawab kahan

Is pyar me khile is dil ka gulzar kahan

uff ..... meens asse likthe jayegi na gunjan ko pyaar hona ho mhuje tumse paayar ho jaayega.....

meens u know these lines not only ponders the thoughts of just gunjan but for each and every one like me who thinks that how did i fall in love.

meens really u have a brilliant talent to handle words ....fantastic

and the VM Gina amazing what clips man .......👏👏👏 with that in-depth words ........ oh god i am really speechless.

hats off to you two creative talents .....👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

Gina a request... if you remember in one of aahana's post we were discussing the song Tu jahan from Salam Namaste ...... as a song on gunji's recovery.... ok with that track in process i really want you do VM on it

i tried once but it turned out be disaster ....😡

😆

Edited by aarthi.ramani - 15 years ago

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

#129

awesome too good fabulous.. i just loved it,, its tooo god .. i thik this is one of the bestest ffs i have ever read.....
do conrinue soon...i hope ab sam bhi realise kar jaye that he has fallen for gunaj nsoon will be waitng for confession..