Dil Hi Dil Mein ... RA ff ...part 26..25/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hieeeeeeeeeeee..!1 itw as nice reading so many parts in one go..!! great update ..!! šŸ‘ but as usual loved armaaan..!!hayeeeee šŸ˜† ..!! meeting scene was the best one..!! hehe šŸ˜† šŸ˜† and thanchooo for d PM..!! :) :)

keep updating..!! parts were toooo gudd.!!ā­ļø

thank you(i dnt know ur name..šŸ˜•) me happy u liked it...aur khaas kar meeting scene...keep reading...😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks janu_2006 rmanu7382 aarti golu_1677 aafreenamna n everyone else for commenting....I hope u enjoy the story further too...😃 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Sana the part was really very nice..very heart touching..i was feeling like mai andar jake usko concern karu..and really the part was written very beautifull..that all the characters came to live in my imagination..
Khudahafiz..

thanks afreen for the beautiful comment....maine bohot dil se likhi thi ye part...😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely parts !!

Continue soon dear..! I wish Muskaan was getting married to Armaan....by the way which actor have u visualized as Zaheer?

thanks...1stly...is ur name Vandu??
Zaheer is Eijaz khan...kayva of kavyanjali...
keep reading and commenting...😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

ur fic is too good.......................all characters r tooo good....................

thanks samrah...welcome...and keep reading...😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

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šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— awesome FF sorry foe late reply dear i just come back from out station now i will read regular pl pm me .

no sorry yr...monika...dil khush kar ditta...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Crazy_4_RA

Hey Sana dear..sorry 4 being late....lovely ff dear & very interesting....waitin 4 update...😊

no sorry dear...n thankuuu....😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for tht...bas its here...in mins..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 10
Its evening…Rahim Malik(Naazneen's father) and Sajid Syed( Armaan's father) return back from office(I hope u all r not getting conphused in so many names…ho bhi rahe ho to dnt worry ahiste ahiste adat ho jaegi…). They meet Naazneen…she was the apple of the eye for both the families…she introduces Sajid to Muskaan…Rahim already knew her as he use to visit London often for business. All the family is gathered in the living room and is having a gala time…when Armaan enters….(last part me u guys were missing him na.. thts y jaldi se lekar agyi..)

Armaan: good night everyone…I hope aap sab ne mere bina dinner nahi kiya hoga…

Naazneen: good night…??

Armaan: to kya good morning bolu raat me…see its dark outside…

Naazneen: ha ha very funny…waise abbu chachu ap log humare liye koi gift bhi nahi laye…itne din baad mile hai to….

Rahim: gift…hmmm…gift to humne Armaan se lane ko kaha tha….(khud bhul gaye the…)

Armaan..who having water…calmly finished it…then looked at the two of them…

Armaan: mujhe pata tha aisa hi kuch hoga….i was prepared for it…

Everyone giggles.

Naazneen: bhai jo bhi ho…Muskaan to pehli baar ayi hai…to use to kuch milna hi chahiye na…

Armaan and muskaan exchange a glance.

Armaan: dnt worry sis…everything is arranged…just wait for a few hours…but that doesn't mean..ki tabtak chuhon ko stomach me boxing karne du…(he gives pleading look to Saba and Farhat…

The two get up at his request and go to start warming the food n all…Naazneen and Muskaan go to help her…while the men go to freshen up…

Bas wo log dinner arrange kar hi rahe hote hai…ki…lights go off….complete darkness ho jata hai…

Muskaan just freezes at her place….she was very scared of darkness…she was arranging things on the dinner table….n to the best of her knowledge there was no one around her…dur dur tak nahi….her throat goes dry…

Muskaan: (…gulping….)N …NNaazneen….ch..chachu…(quite softly)

Ab itna ahiste bolegi to kaise koi response ayega..to wait karte karte she feels for a chair nearby and sits down…almost shivering….

She hears footsteps behind her..and gets up with a jerk…she feels those footsteps very close to her…suddenly she feels her eyes close bcoz of strong light..she covers them with her arm…dheere dheere se she moves her arm and opens her eyes adapting to the light…she gets surprised to see Armaan standing in front of her…he was holding his cell directly on her…using its backlight to check who it is…

Muskaan: Armaan..(leaves her breath finally…)

Armaan: dnt worry Muskaan….koi problem hoga…the watchmen n all must b checking it…(I dnt knw if watchmen interferes in such situations….bt ye all rounder watchmen hai…)

Armaan ke cell ki backlight goes off aur tabhi hi kuch girne ki awaaz ati hai…Muskaan in the spur of the moment screams a little and quickly grabs Armaan's shirt around both his shoulders and steps closer to him…bcoz of her jerk Armaan drops his cell too…Muskaan aur dar jati hai…tightens her grip and steps even more closer…closing her eyes tight…

Armaan: Muskaan don't worry shayad vase tha…aur fir mera cell phone….

Muskaan gulps. She was feeling too scared to react. Armaan feels her hands are cold…

Armaan: Muskaan…its ok…m here with u..(he wraps an arm around her)

Muskaan feels a liitle more secured…she sighs….feels his shoulder…and rests her head…

Just then she feels some light again around her…still in the same place she looks over Armaan's shoulder to see Naazneen standing there with a candle….she smiles…aur ab suddenly realizes where is she…

She moves back a little…and looks Armaan's face…just a fewww centimeters away….her jaw dropps down….in surprise…and she keeps on staring at him….

Armaan on the other hand was also staring at her…but blankly….only to understand whats happening with her…..she was still holding on to his shirt…

Naazneen comes closer n puts the candle on the dinner table….but she hasn't noticed them as yet… bas rasta dekh kar...candle sambhaal kar chal rahi thi….

She turns to look at them and in that Muskaan gets a jerk from her arm….she finally gets back to her senses and leaves Armaan immediately…

Naazneen(daro mat kuch nahi dekha usne…she only now saw both of them standing together): bhai thank God u r here….me soch rahi thi Muskaan ka kya ho raha hoga….she is veryyy scared of darkness u see…

She glances at Muskaan who eyes were fixed on the ground….she was red with embarrassment…Armaan too looks at her….and smiles at her condition…

They hear a knock at the door…and turn to find the watchman standing there…

Watchman: sahib…short circuit hogaya hai…kisi electrician ko bulana padega…

Armaan: ok…(signals him to go….candle ki help se finds his cell phone fallen on the ground….searches for an electrician number in his cell and asks him to come over…)

Naazneen: bhai ab kab tak wait karenge….bhuk lagi hai…

Armaan: hmmm….(looks around)….wait kyu karenge….lets have a candle light dinner…

Naazneen glows at him…: wooowww bhai....that will be great…

Armaan: ya r8…jaldi se candles le ao…

Naazneen: are yahi to hai…(she moves to a drawer nearby and gets some candles out)…here…(hands over to him...)…u light d candles tab tak we will get the food…(she picks up a candle)…chal Muskaan..

Muskaan…without looking up to Armaan follows Naazneen to the kitchen…while Armaan starts lighting candles in the dinning area…

this is it guys for this part....i wanted to write more as the scene is not done with as yet...but agar aur likhne baithti to itna bhi post nahi hota ....waise bhi is baar bhi late ho gya...

chalo thn...bye gn sd...luv ya ..tc...

aur ha comments are as usual awaited...specially for this part...

sana

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Posted: 15 years ago
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grt part dear
pls cont soon
wait nahi hota na

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