Dil Hi Dil Mein ... RA ff ...part 26..25/11

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

~ DIL HI DIL MEIN ~

Ye kahani hai ek ladki ki...ek aam ladki...uski duniya...uska pariwaar...uske dost...aur...uske sapne...

Sapne...yani khwab...dreams...jo har ladki ke hote hai...jinhe wo sari duniya se bachakar apne dil ke kisi kone me chupakar rakhti hai...jinhe wo kisi par zahir nahi hone deti...aur na koi unhe samajh pata hai...wo bas reh jate hai... 'dil hi dil mein'

Character Profile:

Amna Sharif as Muskaan Malik:

A 23 yr old who has all the virtues a 'perfect girl' can have. She is sweet, clean hearted, caring, smart, intelligent, responsible...u name it and she has it. Her struggles in life have made her strong enough to face the toughest of situations. But she is not at all arrogant...instead a very down to earth and cute girl with a warm smile. She strongly believes in love and her dreams...dreams of her prince...the one she has been dreaming about from the time a girl can start to think of all this. She herself didn't realize when these dreams became an integral part of her life and...she started living by them...

Neha Bamb as Naazneen Malik:

Muskaan's cousin, best friend and the only one who understands Muskaan and supports her at every step.

Chaitanya Choudhary as Aman Alavi:

Another friend of Muskaan who is very close her and cares a lot for her.

Rajeev Khandelwal as Armaan Syed:

A 25yr old handsome and adorable person who loves to keep everyone around him happy. He lives life to the fullest, with his friends who matter a lot to him, and has seen the best of life. The only thing he doesn't know about is...love...and according to him wont ever will because for him'it doesnt exists.

Eijaz Khan as Zaheer Malik:

Armaan's childhood friend, business partner and a constant companion, Zaheer is a little reserved by nature...not as lively as Armaan...but is friendly and very good at heart. He is one who knows and understands Armaan in and out...sometimes even more than Armaan himself...

These are the main characters of the story. Others will be introduced as the story proceeds.

Love,

Sana

Edited by sweetangel_25 - 13 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

grt intro dear love the names of each characters. it seems so serene n beautiful by the name n character itself . eagerly waiting for the story . thank u so very much for starting such a beautiful fic on very luvely n romantic couples(r-a). i'm very glad dat u have started d fic . please come up with the first part as soon as possible. byeeeeeee

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sana dear...................am so happy u once again started this ff...........was missing it so much......................hope this time u complete the story.....................cont soon and pm me when u post the next part.................

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Afreen

@afreenaamna

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Posted: 15 years ago

Woww.. RA Fic.. The intro is very nice.. The name Armaan and Muskaan sounds really cool.. Contd soon..
See Ya..

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

MY MY.... what a pleasant surprise....abhi to maine bas intro post hi kiya tha...i didnt even pm any1 or let any1 know that i have even started a fan fic.....aur sab log yaha...aur comments bhi mil gaye....gosh....m not getting words to speak yr...THANK YOU FRIENDS...THAN YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901
grt intro dear love the names of each characters. it seems so serene n beautiful by the name n character itself . eagerly waiting for the story . thank u so very much for starting such a beautiful fic on very luvely n romantic couples(r-a). i'm very glad dat u have started d fic . please come up with the first part as soon as possible. byeeeeeee

thank you pinky....m so glad you liked their names....it took me enough time to find those perfect names for them.....i wanted it to be as close to their chars as possible....n m so happy you noticed...keep reading... n thanks for commenting....😊 😊 😃

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 1

Ek naya din nikla hai.....ek naye suraj, ek nayi subah ke saath.....

London city ka ek chota sa park.....River Thames ke paas..... jaha ye subah apne rang bhikher rahi hai........ped par rehte panchiyo ke pyare se geet.....paas ki nadi......aur uske behte pani ki halki si awaaz......aur wo ehsaas.........jisse koi bhi is subah ki khoobsurati mein kho jaye.....

Par waha baithi ek ladki to apni hi duniya mein khoyi hui thi.....jaise wo is subah ki khoobsurati se zyada uski khamoshi ko mehsoos kar rahi ho......jo use us park ki bahar ki duniya se kahi zyada azeez thi..........is khamoshi mein.......... uske dil ko wo sukoon milta tha....... jo duniya ki bheed mein......shor mein.....gum hojata tha......

Wo bas isi ehsaas me baithi thi..... jab kuch awaaz use uske khayalo ki duniya se bahar le ati hai......

She quickly turns to the tree at her back........ and sees wild fruit like structures falling down on the pebbles nearby. She looks up and notices two squirrels fighting near the pebbles.....

The scene makes her smile.......some hair strands come to fall on her face. She puts them behind her ear.........and we get a glimpse of her face.The red glow on her beautiful face....... complementing her red track suit perfectly.

Just then someone calls her........'muskaan....'

The girl turns to look at the person and is none other than Muskaan Malik (aka Amna Shariff)

Muskaan gets up and goes to the girl.

Muskaan: agyi aap......par itni jaldi?

The girl looks up at muskaan and we see she is the cute and lovely Neha Bamb( playing Nazneen Malik).

Naazneen: ha aaj zyada dur nahi gayi.........tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi......

Muskaan: tabiyat?

Naazneen: Ha shayad kal gulab jamun thode zyada kha liye....

Muskaan: thode zyada? Mai tumhe yaad dila du ki do me se ek bowl tumne akele hi khatam kar diya tha. Ye thode hote hai naaz?

Naazneen: oho..ab tana mat do...tumhe to pata hai na ki gulab jamuns meri weakness hai......

Muskaan: ha pata hai. Tumhari bohot sari weaknesses me se ek hai. Par naaz......agar aisa hi chalta raha to tumhare weightloss program ka kya hoga!

(she says this giving a fake tense look to naazneen)

Naazneen: are haan.....(her mouth remains wide open thinking of it)

Just then she realizes that muskaan is secretly giggling.

Naazneen: muskaan ki bacchi......(saying this she runs after muskaan to catch her while muskaan runs away to save herself)

The two of them then jog for a while more..... teasing each other......and after a while turn towards their house..

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Their house turns out to be an enormous villa..... with a beautiful garden........alongside a car parking area....where some expensive cars are parked.

They enter inside.......and we see that the inside is even more beautiful than the outside. The interiors are giving the modern look of London........but at the same time reflecting the tradition and culture of Islam....of India......giving an idea about the people living in the house......

Naazneen goes towards the corridor to go to her room while Muskaan moves up the staircase.

Muskaan(looks at her watch):8 baj gaye but am sure....janaab abhi tak uthe nahi hoge...

She goes to a room and knocks. No response. She opens the door and goes in.

Someone is sleeping on the bed inside with a blanket covering him.Muskaan goes to the bed.......and close to the person.......his ear............and......SCREEEAAAMMS!!!!!!!!

Muskaan: good morniiiiinggg!!!!!!

The person moves his blanket suddenly and gets up with a startle!!!

guys this is it for the 1st part......

plz do comment.....

love,

sana

Edited by sweetangel_25 - 15 years ago

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Afreen

@afreenaamna

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Posted: 15 years ago

Woww yaar Sana awesome.. The part was written extremly beautifully..aur tumne mere chehre ki Muskaan..my sweety Aamna ka naam Muskaan rakha hai..yipie..cant tell u yaar Aamna ko imagine kar kar ke mai kitna Muskura rahe thi..gosh she was looking so beautiful my imagination ke mai apne khayalo ke duniya se wapas he nah aati..but then i remember yaar tujhe comment b toh karna hai.. CONT SOON SOONER SOONEST DEAR..
Love Afreen..

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd
hey sana dear...................am so happy u once again started this ff...........was missing it so much......................hope this time u complete the story.....................cont soon and pm me when u post the next part.................

wow deepa...ur back....this was such a cuteeee suprise....ya dnt worry....this time i will complete it any how....kya karu even i am so attached to this story that i just cudnt forget it....and so here i am...to continue further....u keep reading...and commenting too..tc...