Khamoshi....one shot (RN). - Page 4

Originally posted by: preet09

hi manali.....Hey Preet ! 😊

thanks 4 the pm. You are most welcome sweetie !!😊

it was really superb. Thanks !!

loved every part of it. characters, emotions, dialgues evrything was gr8. i really loved the part when raj says that he spent one year in learning sign language. it was so emotional.
it was really heart touching. Thanks a ton, again dear 😊

plz continue writing these kind of one-shots. Yaar agar soojhe, toh zaroor likhungi !😆

luv preet. Luv ya too dear ! 😊

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hi mana! Hey Sur !!

wow! this is d first word dat came 2 my mind wen i read this one! its soooo sweet and cute! Thanks a lot dear !! This means so much to me !😊

The story is simple yet very touching..and d way u wrote it was even better! Thanks again...😊

Raj and Naina went against their families to be with each other, and when they finally got this chance, fate played a cruel game and took away Naina's voice! she tried to make him forget her, but that was impossible! she cudnt fool him dat easily...he learnt sign language just 2 tell her that he loved her! how nice and loving of him! Yaah...Both of them loved each other against the wishes of their families, but when it came to getting married, they first convinced their parents. But as it is said , Everything is fated and so the cruel fate TRIED to separate them....but Not all the days are same...and if the LOVE is true and pure, it's strength can mould the destiny...and that's what Ra's true love did...😊

the last scene, of their wedding, was 2 gud...d way raj says "I love u biwi" nd she replied "I love u 2, 3,4" Glad that you noticed this....and thanks for liking it...

wonderful! thanks again..😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

That is simply called true love.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Yeah....it is ! 😊

Awesome n brilliant Mana.🤗

🤗🤗 Thanks a lot dear ! 😊

Raj n Naina's story is really a good example for the people who starts their relation as just a time pass.😡 😡 😡 Logon me aaj kal ego itna hai ki vo rishta nibhane k baare me sochte hi nahi hain , un ko lagta hai ki i am not at a fault, galti doosre ki hai. 😕 😕 😕 you are right dear. The purity of relation and strength of bond are something one can learn from RN story...

I appreciated Raj's love when he tried to learn sign lingo for Naina 😃 😃 😃, and this time again and again he showed her that how much he loves her.😉 😉 😉 yeah !

Outstanding dear

👏 👏 👏Thanks again sweetheart !

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali Hi suhana di !

How r u?? I'm good ! 😊

One shot was really brilliant...👏👏 Thanks a ton dear !

The way u wrote this was so simple but yet it touched my heart🤗 Thanks again!😊

pyaar karna jitna aasan hain utna hi mushkil usko nibhana hai... True....

Naina n Raj loves each other too much but Naina was afraid to trust him..

She tried to run away from her love coz she didn't want him to b hurt coz of her..But Raj was such a perfect lover.He learned sign language so he can communicate with Naina...Now dis is love which is a blessing from God.😛

very few people r fortunate to have this kind of eternal love in their life..❤️ Yeah....this sort of love is utterly pious and a blessing from god ! And our RN are really blessed...😊

"A lake that sets my heart a blaze
Like lovers lost in a distant gaze.
Eternal souls that have no name
Drawn together like moth to a flame.
An unspoken love that could never be seen
Unites two hearts with only a dream.
A love forbidden by lifes cruel fate
Longs for the kiss of its one true mate.
A destined encounter which never took place
Condemned our love and left no trace.
A bond once blessed and worshipped from afar
Can no longer be seen but written in the stars"

The poem is simply marvellous di !! these few lines expressed what I wanted to say...

Ending was just perfect..

Keep writing like dis..😛😛 Thanks for liking di ! Your appreciation encourages me to write further...😊

Bye

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

mujhe tym mila toh voh bhi subah k 2:55 par...!!! kya karun ek darwana dream dekha...mere piche ek bhoot bhaag raha tha...jabb main bhagte bhagte thak gayi toh neend khul gayi...aur maine pahle apne notes complite kiye...aur us k baad main tere paas aa gayi...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 theek se yaad kar ! tere piche bhoot bhaag raha tha, ya bhoot ke peeche tu bhaag rahi thi?? 😆 😆 Aur woh finally jab apni jaan bachakar bhaag nikla aur bahot dhoondhne par bhi tujhe nahi mila, toh finally teri neend toot gayi ! 😆 😆 😆

dosti ka pahla usool 'dosti ki hai toh nibhana toh padega hi'...yeh maine nahi Suman aur Prem ne kaha tha Maine Pyar Kiya Me...!!! aur main apna vaada pura karne aa gayi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Arey haan maine guess karliya tha , ki yeh kisi aur ne kaha hoga ! ! Ab itniiiiiiiiiii SAMAJHDAARI waali baat thi.....toh it was obvious, woh kisi aur ki kahi hui hogi ! 😆 😆

okkkk...detail me comments karti hun....😉 😛 😆 haan kar na ! Waise bhi subah ke 5 baje kya kaam hai doosra?

ek baht hi khubsurat pic k sath tune yeh shot suru kiya👏 👏 👏 ...AWESOME dear👏 👏 👏...aur tujh pe gussa bhi baht aa raha tha ki kyoun tune yeh shot itne dino tak chupa kar rakhi😡 😡 😡...par tere oral test k liye tujhe maaf kar diya...😊 😊 😊 Pehli baat ke liye thank you !! Yeh pic mujhe bhi pasand hai.....

doosri baat ke liye.......kaha na dimaag se nikal gaya tha ! Yeh bhi koi chupane waali cheez hai kya?

Aur teesri baat keliye...well....bahot bahot meherbaani madamjee !!!😉

Raj k bare achhe se des kiya hai tune...voh collegewali baat...!!! main bhi na hamesha yahi sochti thi ki actual me Raj toh kabhi bhi ragg hua hi nahi hoga...aur kisi ne agar karne ki koshish bhi ki hogi toh Raj bade hi asani se sambhal liya hoga...!!! aur meri kalpanayon ko tum ne apne shot me shoot kar diya...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 I knew re ! Ki tu kya sochti hai, tujhe kya confusions hai... Aur phir tere confusions main nahi toh aur kaun door karega?

vaise bhi notes ki baat par naina itni shocked kyoun thi raj k paas aur koi option tha kya...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Arey woh shocked issliye thi, ki baaki ladkiyo ko chodke woh uske paas aaya ! Ab class me Naina akeli ladki toh hai nahi ! Aur baaki ladkiya jo uspe clearly "line " maarti thi, unhe chodke woh Naina ke paas aaya notes maangne !

sach yaar...agar pyar ko avoid karo...toh voh tumhe apni taraf aur bhi jyada khinchti hai...aur sayad isiliye naina ka avoid karne par...raj k dil ne apne pyar ka izhaar kar diya...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ab mujhe iss baaremein koi experience nahi hai...sorry !😆

1 st line... jis k bare me maine tumhe bataya tha...'how deep is ur love for me'...tum sochogi ki yeh toh itna normal sa line hai...toh mujhe kyoun achha laga...toh dear...is ek line ko sabit bhi toh Raj ne jis tarh se kiya hai na...usi se baht kuch feel hota hai...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 right !!😃

ab naina k sarr par chot laga kar aur us ki awaz ghum kara k tum ne phir se sabit kar diya ki tum ek sach me DOCTOR hi ho...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Ab kya karu, time to time I have to give proofs regarding my qualifications na! 😆

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeee...jab naina ne apna naam card par dekha...aur samne pooja ki jagah raj ko paya...main kud rahi thi...he he he...mujhe yeh scene achha laga kyoun ki main imagine kar rahi thi...ki voh scene kaisa hua hoga...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Tera excitement dekhkar mujhe bahooooot khushi ho rahi hai ! Aise lag raha hai jaise mere saari mehnat safal hogayi !

2nd line...'maine toh tum se thodi si khushiyaan mangi thi...par tum ne toh apne ghum bhi nahi diye'...is line k liye tujhe ek jhappi toh milni hi chahiye na....!!!🤗 ek kaha tha phir char char jhappiyan de diya...kya karunabi is shot ko padh kar mere dil ne kaha ki 'ek k sath teen jhappiyaan MUFT MUFT MUFT 🤗 🤗 🤗 well waise pata nahi kehna chahiye ya nahi, but that line is my favourite too !😉 Aur thank youuuuuuuuuuuu so much for the hugs !! Achcha hua tune 3 aur muft me bheje.....warna mujhe bahot atpata lagta ! Woh kya hai na, big bazaar mein shopping ki itniiiiiiiii aadat hogayi hai !!

aur us k baad ka voh HUG scene...naina ko saansh lene me taklif ho rahi thi...kyoun ki raj ne use ab aur kabhi bhi apne se alag nahi karega...voh bhi main imagine karte hue...kud rahi thi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏(dekh main kitni baar kud rahi hun...jab ki mere pair me moch lagi thi...he he he...abhi nahi hai toh kya hua...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆) yaaah !! right !! Arey yeh kya kar rahi ho? 😲 Don't drink chilled water !! sardi badh gayi toh?? ABHI NAHI HAI TOH KYA HUA???? KABHI NA KABHI TOH HUI THI NA??? 😆 😆 😆

raj ne pure ek saal tak sign lag sikhe...taki voh use yeh bata sake ya phir yun kaha jaye... ki mehsus karwa sake ki voh us se kitna pyar karta hai...!!! maine jo 1st line kahi thi na...raj ne yahan par bina kuch kahe naina k liye apne pyar ki deepness sabit kar di...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

aur raj k sign lag me use love u kahana...aur naina ka hairaan hona...khushiyon k sath...SUPERB yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank you maam !!!😃

"let me have d chance to b ur voice"...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

raj ne kaha...'love u biwi' aur usi waqt maine kaha 'love u Mana'... 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃ofcourse us k aur mere intentions alag hain yaar...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 You better have !!! 😆 😆 😆

itz beautiful...awesome...fab...exc...yaar...aur kuch nahi kahungi... kyoun ki abhi agar tu mere samne hoti toh main sayad bata pati ki kaisa tha yeh Shot...!!! ab dekh le tere shot se jyada toh mere comments ki length hai...isi se pata chalta hai ki mujhe kitna achha laga....😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Yeh na tera PATENT LINE banti jaa rahi hai aajkal ! Tera comment mere shots se BILKUL bhi lamba nahi hai okay???

And thanks a lot for liking and appreciating the shot dear !!!😃

love u...PHIR SE...🤗 🤗 🤗 Luv ya too !!😃🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Mana dear. Hey yogi !! 😃

Superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏 awesome part 👏 👏 👏 👏 ab main jitna bhi tarif karun about your wriiting skills wo kam hi honge yaar. Arey yaar break maar !! Kitna upar chadhayegi...??? chane ka jhaad hai yaar, AShok ka nahi ! 😛

Khamoshi ....the name of the fic itself is wonderful yaar.... Glad that you liked it !😊

very well said raj n naina the made for each other couple...i simply loved the beginning of the fic, so naina fell first for raj ,tune bahut acche se describe kiya raj n naina ko...donon ek dusre se kitne opposite hain ...naina loves raj but usne kabhi ye show nahi kiya n raj bhi accha kiya usne naina se notes maanga n slowly their love story started

phir kahani main aagaya twist raj n nainas fathers were enemies...bechari naina bhi kya karthi raj ko avoid karne lagi kitna dhukhi hain naina raj become crazy because of nainas behaviour n finally both confessed their love

raj n nainas love stoy main kitne sare problems hain family pressures ke wajah se donon main fights bhi hote the,naina to saara gussa raj pe nikalthi thi but raj understood her perfectly..raj to hain hi aisa.

yeah it was obvious for Naina to fall first for him, isnt it? 😉 But somewhere he too used to observe her and that's why he approached her for notes....their love was laid on the foundation of their friendship. Then even it was very obvious of Naina to back out on knowing the truth of his family, rather than leading to heart break and increasing rivalry....But as it is said, Pyaar ko koi nahi rok sakta and so they confessed and their relation persisted against all odds they had to face !😊

raj proposed to naina raj is saying that he is not good at words ...phir bhi usne kitna beautifully propose kiya...usko naina se ek waada chahiye ki naina sirf uski hain n usne bhi ek waada kiya ki saari jindagi wo naina se pyar karega n wo naina ka zindagi itni khushiyon se bhardega ki naina ko samethe hue apna daman chotha pad chayega....ab naina ko isse jyada kya chahiye ....raj ka kaha hua saare lines mujhe pasand aaye. Arey Raj ki har ek baat ko seriously mat le...I mean he is wayyyy too humble and that's why said he is not good with words...and yogi, am gald you liked his lines...😊

families ke bich main bhi sab kuch tikh hogaya naina n raj bhi bahut khush hain ...is khoobsurat love story main ek aur tragedy aagayi ...naina ka accident .. n she lost her voice ..naina raj pe bhoj banna nahi chahthi isiliye she sent the ring back to raj ,u described the pain of naina really well. Thanks for appreciation dear !😊

Mujhe ye lines bahut acche lage "" Tum toh badi khudgarz nikli Naina !" " Maine toh tumse bas thodisi khushiya maangi thi....par tumne toh apne gham bhi mujhe nahi diye!" ye lines raj ke feelings ko kitni acchi tarah express kar rahe hain

Am glad you liked those...as those are my favs from this shot too!😊

n the most loving part in this fic is raj using sign language he spent one year in learning sign launguage for his naina

i loved that when raj said i love u biwi in sign launguage n naina saying i love u 234. Thanks again Yogi !😊

good work mana n khass tumhare liye 🤗 🤗 🤗 Awwwww...same to you dear ! 🤗 🤗 🤗

fic ke bare main what i thought i have written ab aati hain aapki bari...mana tumhare bare main kya kehna ...itni acchi fic ko koi chupake raktha hain kya...pehle tu sirf raj ko chupake rakthi thi hum se ( i mean in your fics main )ab tu whole fics ko hum se chupa rahi hain ....this is not fair yaar ...doctor jee aap se ek request hain tumhare pass aur bhi fics hain to plz unhe bahar nikaldo n plzzz post kardo. Areh yaar ! yakeen karo !! Main sachchi mein bhool gayi thi iske baaremein ! Aur jaose hi yaaad aaya maine post kardiya !😊

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool

superb

update is great

fabulous

fiction isgreat

Originally posted by: sania_58

good job

superb

mindblowing

just wonderful

loved it

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hey Mana
after reading word coming in my mind is WOWWWWWWWW👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️
awesome
superb
mind-blowing
this is called true love
i just loved it wen Raj said he spent one year for learning sign langauge n the way u show strength of luv is amazing

Luv
Naina