Khamoshi....one shot (RN).

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
WOW!!!!!!!!!amazing.....

Totally beautiful.......

loved d dialogues and way d feelings wer expressed......

truely awesome........

Thank you so much dear !!

Thanks for reading and appreciating my efforts !

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
superb brilliant os dear.
it's just too good.loved it. u wrote it very beautifully.u show the power of true love.loved the os.

write more os dear.

Thanks a ton Rakhi !!

Your appreciation means a lot !

Yeah ...I'll try and write more...but the problem with RN is that I cant write OS...I mean, jab bhi baat RN ki hoti hai, mann karta hai likhte jaao ! 😉 toh ab One shot , sirf one shot kaise rahega?😛

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: pinkorblack
very well written and beautifully expressed.....kudos to u

Thanks a ton dear ...😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Just simply wonderful....!!!👏👏
👏 Thanks dhara ! 😊

Why did you hide this till now...????😕
😕 didnt hide it dear....just slipped out of my memory...

Loved it....!!!!!!!⭐️ Thanks again !
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The best part of all was Raj learning the sign language....!!!!!⭐️

Good job....!!!!👏 Thanks a lot !

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Simply Superb....loved it 👏 Thanks dear ! 😊 Despite all the family rivalry...RN love wins and both families agree for their marriage. But after Naina's accident she feels that she is not fit for raj...that he only deserves the best. But Raj loves her and his love was never so weak. He lears Sign language for her and Naina cannot refuse this time. How can she deny his pure and immense love? They faced lot of challenges and with the Love in their heart overcame them too. They get married and live happily ever after.😊 Yeah....afterall Anth bhala toh sab bhala!

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vvdn
just one word for this fic "BEAUTIFUL😊 Thanks Namita ! 😊

👏 this is for ur writing waise i know ye taliya kam hai but for now bas itni hi kyunki mein abhi bhi fic ke effect mein hu. Awwww....thanks a ton for appreciation dear ! I'm soooo glad that you liked it !
amazing writing Mana...! Thanks again !😃
i luved the last part most when Raj stands in front of Naina n said he took 1 year to learn a sign language.simply gr8. I cant tell you how happy i am that you enjoyed reading it !😊

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mayadika11
awesoooome..
superb.
excellent..

Thanks a ton Preeti !! 😃 😃 😃

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: esha143
FANTASTIC,AWESOME,BEAUTIFUL,MARVELOUS,EXCELLENT,WONDERFULL,GREAT.............👏 Thanks a ton Esha !!!! Thank you so much for the appreciation.

yaar ab mere paas shabd hi nahi bache hai ise describe karne keliye.it's the type of fic that is true to Raj's nature.and also of Naina ofcourse.Raj learned sign language so that Naina won't feel depressed,great.ab aise fic par(or rather aise PYAAR par) kya comment kare.this fic doesn't need any comments.u said writing is ur hobby,ur passion.don't ever let it die dear.it is in ur blood.
Thanks yaar ! Your these words mean so much to me ! 😊
God knows how long u took to post this one.so,if u have any such precious pearls in ur closed hands i'm requesting u to come up with them now.don't take too long. ya...sure dear 😊 and thanks again !

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sweet_shona
wowww....just wonderful.. 👏
sooo touching.. lovely story...
mindblowing..u hv described their emotions sooo well....too gud...
expecting more SS from u Manali... 😳

Thank you so much Neelu !!! I'll definitely try and write some more !

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: guglu088
Wonderful shot Mana.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 🤗🤗🤗 Thanks Guglu !

Tujhe manna padega, kya story hai. Each and every dialogue, every emotion, words and silence were wonderful. Lovely. Thanks a ton for appreciating my efforts dear !

I don't have words to describe the incredible beauty of this update. He learnt sign language so that he can communicate with her in her way!!! So lovely!!! The dialogues were fabulous. My personal favourite was " Tum toh badi khudgarz nikli Naina !" , he accused, " Maine toh tumse bas thodisi khushiya maangi thi....par tumne toh apne gham bhi mujhe nahi diye!" Thanks...and this one is MY PERSONAL favourite too !

But the other dialogues were equally beautiful. Thanks again...lagta hai , iss poore reply mein main bass thanks hi kahungi ...😊

Aise hi one shot likhti raho aur post karti raho, samjhi doctor!!! Aur itni der kyun ki isse post karne me. Its so heart touching. Absolutely lovely. Samajh gayi madam ! actually i just forgot about it...Jab yaad aaya toh post kardiya !

Tum samajh hi sakti ho ki mujhe ye one shot kitna acha laga hai, ab tak kam se kam 10 baar padh chuki hun, fir bhi dil nahi bhara. Awwwww..... you won't know how happy I am after reading this statement of yours...Thanks darl...😃

Aur mai apne comments bhi edit karne baith gayi. Its so beautiful Mana ki mai kya bataun. Thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😃

And this is for you...
🤗🤗🤗 Same from my side sweetie ! 🤗 🤗 🤗