~ArBi FF Jab Lurve Hua~Part 271 pg141 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Awesome part dear....
Loved it...
CSnt wait for the SALSA!!!
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Hey Jessie thanks for liking my comments i made previously!😊
Anyways i just finished reading the other parts and i'm hooked onto it!!
Love the fact that Armaan and Bharti became such great friends! Plus Jiya is becoming such a sweetheart!! She's like a payal type friend for Armaan!
I love how Jiya and Armaan always have their cute lil' fights!!
The scene at dinner where Bharti comes home from meeting Abishek was just hilarious!! Both Jiya and Armaan were curious to find out how it went well and Bharti just remained ignorant! Too cute man! They were so anxious to find out! and then Jiya says "the sky will be more beautiful if you tell us" 😆 😆
Jessie love those funny one liners that you point in between your FF! It's great fun when reading!!
Also the scene where Bharti and Armaan points fingers at each other!! Love it!
Pls continue soon! 😊
Wanna see how Armaan surprises Bharti with his Salsa moves! Hope they get down and boogie!!:) 😆
PS: Armu looking like shahid??! 😳 Aww so cuttee!!!
Hahah tanu your jaan armu looks like my jaan Shahid with the outfit!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
@jassie: Awesome part..i m so waiting for my jaan to burn the dance floor wit his SALSA moves..n i m sure..Bhartis gonna b oh-so-floored on seeing my hunk....Armus killer dance moves..!! 😳
n u know..wit each of ur epi..i m starting to luv Jia ..more and more...she truly is the bestest friend anyone culd ever have..!! hope she too gets her Dream-boy soon..!! 😍
at the moment..cant wait for the hot Salsa dance of ArBi..gona b sooo hott..!! ❤️🥳
@vini: u bet..seems..ur jaans style just rubbed off my jaan..n boy..bhartis fallen for him...just like..u hv fallen for shahid..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Jassie! 😊 Finally I'm back on my computer and can comment. I absolutely love your FF!!😛It's so different, so fresh. You know, when people write with Bharti and Armaan as they normally are in the show, only the same usual things can happen, but here..I just love how you've made them so different. Yet there is still that unique part of their charcter that we can relate to. I have loved each and every part. Jiya is so sweet, I do hope she finds someone in her life and Sudha is such a darling, anyone would love a mother/mother-in-law like her. Bharti and Armaan are amazing as always. I liked when they were fighting, as we don't get to see that happening very often and then again it's always nice to see them reconcile. As for this last part, I'm so excited that Armaan is falling in love with her, but I wonder when Bharti will fall in love with him and how long will it take for her to realise and confess those feelings...but I know you'll keep us entertained until then.
Looking foward to your next parts as always. I am a fan of your writing,👏 you are super talented and it's always a pleasure to read what you write. This is a big hug from me to you🤗all the best for the rest.
Sohana😊
P.S. You've made my heart beat a little faster😳 As it is, Armaan/Aamir has been blessed in the looks department to say the least(and yes in other ways too) And he looks amazing all the time, but now! He's looking like Shahid?! Now that I would love to see, I can just daydream about that.😍 Bharti is truly a lucky girl😉
Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Hey Jessie thanks for liking my comments i made previously!😊

Anyways i just finished reading the other parts and i'm hooked onto it!!
Love the fact that Armaan and Bharti became such great friends! Plus Jiya is becoming such a sweetheart!! She's like a payal type friend for Armaan!
I love how Jiya and Armaan always have their cute lil' fights!!
The scene at dinner where Bharti comes home from meeting Abishek was just hilarious!! Both Jiya and Armaan were curious to find out how it went well and Bharti just remained ignorant! Too cute man! They were so anxious to find out! and then Jiya says "the sky will be more beautiful if you tell us" 😆 😆
Jessie love those funny one liners that you point in between your FF! It's great fun when reading!!
Also the scene where Bharti and Armaan points fingers at each other!! Love it!
Pls continue soon! 😊
Wanna see how Armaan surprises Bharti with his Salsa moves! Hope they get down and boogie!!:) 😆
PS: Armu looking like shahid??! 😳 Aww so cuttee!!!
Hahah tanu your jaan armu looks like my jaan Shahid with the outfit!! 😆

Heyy...Glad to hear your lovely comments!!!!
Well yeah Jiya is a friend anyone could want for in their lives....
I specially wanted to make that scene hilarious and increase Armaan's and Jiya's doubts and wanted Bharti to pretend as if she isn't aware of their thoughts....Haha...Jiya is really cute!!
Suree....wait for the upcoming parts....I'm quite hopeful that it will keep the readers hooked to the FF...Keep reading..I'll just have to say that there is a lot more coming up in Bharti's and Armaan's lives....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

@jassie: Awesome part..i m so waiting for my jaan to burn the dance floor wit his SALSA moves..n i m sure..Bhartis gonna b oh-so-floored on seeing my hunk....Armus killer dance moves..!! 😳

n u know..wit each of ur epi..i m starting to luv Jia ..more and more...she truly is the bestest friend anyone culd ever have..!! hope she too gets her Dream-boy soon..!! 😍
at the moment..cant wait for the hot Salsa dance of ArBi..gona b sooo hott..!! ❤️🥳
@vini: u bet..seems..ur jaans style just rubbed off my jaan..n boy..bhartis fallen for him...just like..u hv fallen for shahid..😉

Hey Tanu...
Well...you will have to wait for the next part sweetie...I'm glad that you're loving each part and yeah she will definitely be getting the dream boy that she never expected in her entire life!!!
Keep reading!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Jassie! 😊 Finally I'm back on my computer and can comment. I absolutely love your FF!!😛It's so different, so fresh. You know, when people write with Bharti and Armaan as they normally are in the show, only the same usual things can happen, but here..I just love how you've made them so different. Yet there is still that unique part of their charcter that we can relate to. I have loved each and every part. Jiya is so sweet, I do hope she finds someone in her life and Sudha is such a darling, anyone would love a mother/mother-in-law like her. Bharti and Armaan are amazing as always. I liked when they were fighting, as we don't get to see that happening very often and then again it's always nice to see them reconcile. As for this last part, I'm so excited that Armaan is falling in love with her, but I wonder when Bharti will fall in love with him and how long will it take for her to realise and confess those feelings...but I know you'll keep us entertained until then.

Looking foward to your next parts as always. I am a fan of your writing,👏 you are super talented and it's always a pleasure to read what you write. This is a big hug from me to you🤗all the best for the rest.
Sohana😊
P.S. You've made my heart beat a little faster😳 As it is, Armaan/Aamir has been blessed in the looks department to say the least(and yes in other ways too) And he looks amazing all the time, but now! He's looking like Shahid?! Now that I would love to see, I can just daydream about that.😍 Bharti is truly a lucky girl😉

Hey Sohana....Been waiting for yuor dear comments.....Glad to know that you're hooked to it!!!😳😛😛
I'm trying to mkae this FF quite different from the first FF and I'm very happy to notice that the readers are loving the fan fic..It's been verie challenging for me for initiallyy I kept thinking of the sequences which I've written for my first FF and I had to think of different seqs for this FF but kept going back to the earlier ones...Lollz....
Jiya is such a darling..Sudha's character,as mentioned before by Kaninika, is very much like Mayank's mother in Miley Jab Hum Tum series...
Right now I'm developing bharti's and Armaan's friendship which will involve a lot of great moments but fights as welll...So you've got to wait for the upcoming parts for that....Buut they luve bugging each other....
Armaan is having doubts if he's falling for Bharti and soon you'll get to know that he realized that he is really in luv with Bharti but bharti only sees him as her special friend right now.....It will definitely take quite a long time for her to realize her feelings....
Thanks Sohana for such lovely comments..It really inspires....Thanks for a big hug..and this is from me to you too....🤗
Hehe...just try to visualize him in that way...I'm trying to make total justice with my words...Hopefully it will come out that way!!!!Hehe...
Keep reading and commenting...
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Jassie,

Totally loving your FF

Waiting for the Salsa

Really Jassie I agree with everyone, we are completely hooked to your FF. Why there is no update today?

It feels like I am watching a daily soap of my fav couple

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
@ Jassie We will love whatever you write because you have such a creative mind. You always give us what we want to read. Yay, I look foward to more of their cute little fights (that will bring them closer together) Oh and I forgot to say earlier that it is so so sweet that he learnt how to salsa for Bharti.
I 100% agree with Kaninika. I look foward to it everyday and it's just like an episode everyday of our favourite show - of course with our favourite people😉
But I'm sure the next parts will be worth the wait😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Dear Jassie,

Totally loving your FF

Waiting for the Salsa

Really Jassie I agree with everyone, we are completely hooked to your FF. Why there is no update today?

It feels like I am watching a daily soap of my fav couple

Heyyy....I'm glad you're loving it dearie!!!Real sweet of you and the others to have so much encouraging comments for me!!!!
Kanu I've got bad news yaar....I lost my thumbdrive in which I had saved my fan fiction..I'm desperately looking for it high and low...I don't know where I've kept it..I've written so much more already and saved it but i just can't find my thumbdrive anywhere....That's why I couldn't update yesterday....
Meanwhile I shall not disappoint my fans..I'm going to try my best to recollect what I've written and update tdy....I just hope I can retrieve my thumbdrive asap.....
P.S:Daily soap...Aww thanks hunnie!!!!😛😛😳

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