~ArBi FF Jab Lurve Hua~Part 271 pg141 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved the part they were soooo good :D and cant w8 for th next parts to be posted :D

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Posted: 15 years ago
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~Jab Lurve Hua Part 20~

Payal drove back as quickly as possible to her home. Payal unzipped her bag and wondered where she had kept her house keys. She murmured to herself,rgghh this is the problem with the bags nowadays..So many compartments and you don't know where to find the things at the most urgent times". Just then bhaskar opened the door and Payal grinned sheepishly. Bhaskar went inside and Payal too went inside and locked the door.

Payal:Sorry...sorry...sorry Bhaskar..I'm..erm..10 to 20 minutes late..

Bhaskar:Where were you??I've been trying your number..

Payal:Sorry dear, I had switched it off..Actually I was at Bharti's uni..She had the Valentine's party...

Bhaskar:Oh yeah I forgot about it;besides I had an important meeting also...So how was it??

Payal:It went great..She and Armaan got crowned Homecoming Queen and King respectively..

Bhaskar:(got amused) What??Armaan aur woh bhi Homecoming King??That's interesting..

Payal:Yeah...he was just amazing...I practically couldn't take my eyes off him..He was just so impressive...Oh I totally forgot..have you eaten anything??

Bhaskar:Tum toh aise pooch rahi ho jaise tumne yaha biryani bana kar rak diya tha..

Payal:Sorry Bhaskar actually I planned to make it but then only after I turned on the gas stove then I realized that there were not much ingredients and I totally forgot about them too..I'll whip up something right away..

Bhaskar:Don't worry..(embraced Payal from behind) I've made us some salad and your favourite mushroom soup

Payal:Awwww...how sweet Bhasku!!!Why can't you be this sweet always??Ok, I'll go and get changed..Give me 5 minutes,k??

Bhaskar:Yeah ok..go!!I'll lay the table and serve the food..

Payal and Bhaskar sat down for dinner.

Payal:After the party, I went to drop Bharti and Armaan home..Bharti insisted on me dropping there for a while..so yeah that's why I got a lil late..

Bhaskar:I still can't believe that Armaan became the Homecoming King...

Payal:Why do you always think Armaan can't do anything??

Bhaskar:It's not that Payal..He's a great photographer but I don't and can't visualize him having a social life..I mean it's just not him...

Payal:Bhaskar,just shut up,ok??He's a real gentleman and in fact I'm so happy for Bharti..He's a great guy..At least he seems trustworthy..

Bhaskar:Payal...why are you praising someone in front of me??

Payal:Ohoho..Just look at this..Bhaskar, the man..feeling jealous and insecure??Kyun...tum doosri ladkiyon ki taarif karte waqt main kuch kehti hoon...Nahin na??Lekin ab...

Bhaskar:Oh-kay Payal..I'm not jealous..

Payal:Yes you are..

Bhaskar:No I'm not..He's just not of my standard, alright?No one can match up to me..

Payal:Trust me Bhaskar...You are not the greatest,alright?All of us are equal..Don't talk about your superiority in front of me..Aur waise bhi..what's your problem with Armaan??

Bhaskar:Just that our thoughts and ideas don't go in sync..and because of that, chota mota troubles and quarrels with him and his team, Jiya and Raj, the other photogrpahers of MU...

Payal:You are really impossible Bhaskar..You better change yourself or else..

Bhaskar:Payal,chill babe..It has become a habit and you very well know that habits can't be changed..

Payal:Koshish toh karo badal ne ki...Tum toh koshish ke K tak nahin pohanch paaya ab tak..Ab bata nahin aage kya hoga..

Bhaskar:Kya hoga?Kuch bhi nahin...Payal, nothing's gonna happen..

Payal:If ever I get to know that because of you, a big problem has arisen, that's it, Bhaskar..If it's becuase of your overly obsession with work and your superiority complex, I'll take extreme measures..And I'm dead serious about this!!

Bhaskar:oooo...I'm scared,Payal!!

Payal:Oh just stop it you idiot!!Anyways if you've felt offended or felt what I said was harsh, then...

Bhaskar:Then..

Payal:Don't even think I'm going to say sorry for I want you to feel offended and think about what I said!!Anyways, dinner was nice..

Bhaskar:Aww..thanks!!

Payal:Ok I've got some work to prepare for tomorrow's show with Ashish..You sleep first,k??

Bhaskar:Alright..zyaada dher matt karna,k??

Payal:Hey what time do you want me to set the alarm??

Bhaskar:4:30 am..

Payal:Okiez..good night...

Bhaskar:Nitez..

Meanwhile Bharti told Sudha that she's going to sleep early since she's quite exhausted, and wished Good night to Sudha, Jiya and Armaan. Jiya and Armaan were talking from the balcony.

Jiya:Not bad, huh Armu..Homecoming King and all..Bohat khoob!!

Armaan:Heyy...yeah not bad after all..God..it was so unexpected..

Jiya:Waise Bharti danced so comfortably with you..She's such a natural,na??

Armaan:Yeah why not since she loves partying so much..

Jiya:Well she really surprised me today..

Armaan:Yeah I didn't expecct to have a wonderful time with her tonight..

Jiya:What??You too think so..I mean she kissed you..That was..

Armaan:What??I was talking about the dance...

Jiya:Arre yaar...I'm talking about the kiss...

Armaan:She did it out of excitement and that's it, Jiya!!

Jiya:What?

Armaan:Yeah she apologized promptly after doing so..

Jiya:What the hell...(thought to herself) ur main yahaan kya kya khwaab dekh rahi thi.."...Waise don't you have any such..you know...

Armaan:Jiya stop right there,ok?There's nithng like that and why does Payal too feel that way??

Jiya:What??Payal too feels that wya??

Armaan:Actually Payal was asking me if I have any feelings for Bharti and..

Jiya:And what did you say??Give me a Y...E...S....

Armaan:And I gave her a N...O...

Jiya:Kya?

Armaan:Yeah..I just told her that we are good friends and that's it!!

Jiya:Are you sure??I mean..I thought you..

Armaan:Jiya, she's just a good friend and you don't have to work your head extra hard..

Jiya:Kya kuch nahin ho sakta??

Armaan:Kya?

Jiya:i mean, if not now, then in the long run??

Armaan:Jiya!!!

Jiya:What???I really do think that you two are perfect for each other...

Armaan:Jiya..stop!!She sees me as a good friend and I don't wish to insult this relation...

Jiya:(thought to herself while looking at Armaan)"Yea right Armaan..you can tell me that again..I seriously do think that you're falling for her or else why would you even go an extra mile to make this night so special for her..You and bharti may not realize it but I know..And you have no right to stop me from dreaming for your happiness..."

Armaan:Hello!!!Tum theekh ho na??

Jiya:Arre haan..I totally forgot..Raj called me to convey the nessge to you that Amarjeet wants you to edit your photos as he wasn't fully satisfied..and he wants it by 10 am tomorrow...That idiot got that message a day before but he just remembered and called..

Armaan:Raj aur uske bhoolne ki bimaari...

Jiya:Bhoolne ki hi nahin par dher se utna aur kaam pe dher se aane ki bimaari bhi hain...Lekin ek baat hai..Sahi waqt par models ke saath date par zaroor jaata hai....

Armaan:Lollz...

Jiya:Ok Armu I better get going...Had great fun tonight..Homecoming King,congratzz once again...

Armaan:Chal I'll see you tomorrow..

Jiya:Ok bye..Bye Sudha aunty..Thanks for a great dinner..

Sudha:My pleasure..Do drop by often...

Jiya:Needless to say,Sudha aunty..Thanks..Goodnight!!

Sudha:Goodnight!!

Sudha too went to her room to sleep and Armaan switched off the lights in the hall and went to his room. Bharti was sleeping soundly and Armaan just gazed at her. He wondered,"Bharti sirf mera dost hai....Sirf dost??Aur kuch nahin??(paused for a while)". He thought of how he had so much fun dancing with Bharti tongiht with so much ease and the kiss on his cheek which Jiya had described earlier as "the icing on the cake". He smiled and told himself that Bharti is his good friend and will always be, and went to sleep.

Edited by jassie_17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

lol, I loved to know that I made you feel better.😊
wow not one but two episodes a day😃
You are adding more? that's great, so it is a positive part on our side.lol
So Payal is worried bacause she thinks Armaan is falling for Bharti? But what is the problem with that? I think I will get my ans very soon😊

Hehe....yeah my thumbdrive got lost for a reason,i guess...but i so need to find it!!!
Yeah it's a positive part for you guyzz.....Payal's just worried for her buddy..well you'll get to see in the upcoming parts...Keep reading!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

jassie....🤗 girl..u made my day..errr nite..(india time) ....what rocking epis yaar..!! luvd it..!! i knew it...my Armu wuld sweep Bharti off her feet wit his super smooth Salsa moves...

n boy...she kissed Armu....OMG...i just fainted ..reading that....🤪luv u for this part...jassie...!! ❤️
well payal being worried abt Armus intentions had me a bit annoyed...but then i read ur next part and i understood that it was her concern for her buddy....n i luv payal for that..!! sweetest girl in the world..!!
gosh..jassie..i cant wait for the next part...the seed of luv is surely sprouting in Armus heart....yahooooooooo!! 🥳

Awww...thanks hunni for da lovely comments..In fact your comments make my day!!!!Just try and visualize the steps for da dance moves,yeah???
Hehe...yeah she kissed him out of excitement....Yeah Payal's a lil overprotective for her....
Keep reading!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Hey Jassie.😊

I was just catching up with the parts, thanks for the updates. It's so sweet of you to work so hard to keep us happy. So sorry you can't find your work, I do hope you find your thumbdrive soon! It's such a coincidence, I was just wondering what I'd do if I lost all the data I have already written from my FF...so sad that it's actually happened to you, but I'm sure you'll find it. Don't stress and like Blueberry said, take your time. It must be difficult and a bit frustrating to have to recall and write it again. But I see that you are remembering and adding even more in...so lucky us! Loving the parts. And oh my heart Jassie! 😳I love that this Armaan too, like the one in 'tum se hi', will never let her fall.....😳Payal's concern is so sweet and I'm sure Armaan will always keep her happy and safe.😍 Thanks again for the hard work.😛

Thanks dearie for the lovely comments and your concern..Real sweet of you!!!!
Aww don't worry..it must be somewhere in the house..need to really check!!!
Yeah i'm trying to recall the series of events which i had written and I'm writing extra stuff too to make it more interesting...Hope it turns out well...
Yeah I'm portraying Armu as a really romantic guy, but gradually being revealed as such...It willl take a long time to rub off on Bharti...hehe...
Payal's a beautiful friend and pls don't hate her for being overprotective....Bharti's her only best friend and she'll do anything for her.....
All I can say is that their friendship will be put to the test..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jassie, I was waiting for your update.😍
Thanks dear🤗
loved Bhaskar-Payal part.😊
So Armaan falling for Bharti
😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice part i am waiting for the update as well !!! love fact they won the dancing competition bcame king & queen 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dear.... lovely epi...especially the 'Love-tiffs' between Pay-Kar .. luvd their entire convo...!! perfect couple....luvd how Payal puts her foot down while advising Bhaskar to change himself....😳

n hey...jias just as excited as i m.... 'come on Armu...u luv Bharti..just dun realise it...' m really very very happy wit this part.😍😍😍.. n OMG...
Armu gazes at Bharti sleeping soundly....gosh..my heart skipped a few beats....❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww wht a cute update loved the part plax write more soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

wow dear.... lovely epi...especially the 'Love-tiffs' between Pay-Kar .. luvd their entire convo...!! perfect couple....luvd how Payal puts her foot down while advising Bhaskar to change himself....😳

n hey...jias just as excited as i m.... 'come on Armu...u luv Bharti..just dun realise it...' m really very very happy wit this part.😍😍😍.. n OMG...
Armu gazes at Bharti sleeping soundly....gosh..my heart skipped a few beats....❤️

Awww thanks hunni...Glad you lurved it!!!
Payal is strong where she has got to..esp to Bhaskar...and Bhaskar listens to her and gives her the right to say whatever she has got to, too.........
Jiya's verie excited and there's a sweet note for you..Jiya is going to play Ms Cupid very soon for Armaan....
Aww..thanks sweetie for your lovely comments!!!

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