~ArBi FF Jab Lurve Hua~Part 271 pg141 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

@ Jassie We will love whatever you write because you have such a creative mind. You always give us what we want to read. Yay, I look foward to more of their cute little fights (that will bring them closer together) Oh and I forgot to say earlier that it is so so sweet that he learnt how to salsa for Bharti.

I 100% agree with Kaninika. I look foward to it everyday and it's just like an episode everyday of our favourite show - of course with our favourite people😉
But I'm sure the next parts will be worth the wait😊

Hey Sohana....Thanks a lot dearie....
Haha their cute lil fights are worth reading and I'm trying to bring in some more characters to cause chota mota trouble between them....
So sweet yaar...Keep the comments coming,k???
Well i lost my thumbdrive,desperately trying to retrieve it for that's where I've stored my fan fic parts...But meanwhile I'm trying to force my brain to recollect what I've written so as to update.....
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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~Jab Lurve Hua Part 18~

Armaan watched Bharti dance gracefully with Uday and soon a girl popped from behind and tapped on his shoulders. It was his secret crush,Lolo. Bharti assured her that she was jsut dancing leisurely with him while they waited for her to arrive and Bharti told Lolo that she didn't snatch her date and winked at Uday. Bharti went to Jiya and Armaan.

Jiya:Heyy so that's Lolo..she really looks...

Bharti:LLike an attitude-laden diva..She's been winning the Salsa competition for the past two years consecutively and she has become the Homecoming Queen twice in a row too..I just wwant another girl to be the Homecoming Queen this time round for i simply can't tolerate her airs....

Jiya:Lollz...that's really irksome, I can practically imagine...I wonder where Armaan has gone to..He was here a few seconds ago...

Bharti:He must be here somewhere...Oh great the competition has started..Let's see some fab couples dancing....

Jiya:Heyy look there....

Bharti saw Armaan advancing towards her. Armaan raised his eyebrows and smiled at Bharti,making her confused. Armaan took Bharti's hand and asked her for a dance. Bharti looked at Jiya, who excused herself to get some refreshments and then Bharti looked at Armaan.

Bharti:Armaan you said you don;t know how to..

Armaan:Thoda bohat kar leta hoon...Will you like to??Or else we wouldn't stand a chance to win!!

Bharti:What??

Armaan:I've given our names for the competition..So hurry...

Bharti:What??(was surprised by Armaan)

Armaan:Chale??

Armaan pulled Bharti closer to him and both of them danced quite comfortably with each other to the song, "Kash ek din aisa bhi aaye"..

Kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye
Waqt ka pal pal tham jaye
Saamne bas tum hi
Raho aur umarr guzar jaye
ooOoo

Kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye
Waqt ka pal pal tham jaaye
Pyaar ruk na paaye chaahe
Saansein theher jaaye
ooOoo


Tujhe dekhkar tujhe sochkar
Maine jo pal jiya tha
Use dil ke hi kisi kone mein
Bas kaid kar liya tha
Kuch aur lamhe tumse mile toh
Duniya sawar jaaye
ooOoo


Mere dil ko tum churaake sanam
Nazarein nahi churaana
Kisi baat par kisi mod par
Mujhse na rooth jaana
Aisa na ho ke dil mera
Tute aur bikhar jaaye
ooOoo

Kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye
Waqt ka pal pal tham jaaye
Pyaar ruk na paaye chaahe
Saansein theher jaaye
ooOoo

While they were dancing, they had no idea that all eyes had fallen on them for firstly they were the last to register and secondly both of them had danced so gracefully and caught the attention of the professors who were judging the competition.Armaan gazed into Bharti's eyes and followed the movement of her eyes while Bharti kept glancing at Uday and both of them were just smiling at each other and miming some words to each other and keeping the conversation that way and Bharti turned to face Armaan who simply smiled.

Bharti was stunned by the fact that Armaan was hiding his talent of dancing so superbly and couldn't stop smiling.

Armaan:Kya hua??Why are you smiling like that???

Bharti:Armaan..why are you hiding your talents from the world??And most importantly from me???Who in the heavens told you that you can't dance???

Armaan:Well..I'm a more private person so..

Bharti:Well Armaan then I'll have to tell you that you're missing out on a lot of fame and popularity..Hehe..

Armaan:Chup..you are distracting me...

Bharti:Lollz..oh oh...

Bharti almost tripped and fell but Armaan held her firmly and brought her up to stand and they made it seem as if it was part of the dance sequence.Bharti heaved a deep sigh of relief and Armaan whispered to her,"Don't be afraid to fall for I'm here for you...I'll never ever let you fall!!"(smiled and winked at her).Bharti felt surprised and in fact she loved what Armaan told her and smiled widely.

Before they could converse even more, the songs ended and so did the competition. Her professor announced the winner of the competiton as the Homecoming couple and everyone had their fingers crossed, including Bharti, who was praying constantly by interlocking her fingers with both hands and closed her eyes and kept praying to God and Armaan was watching her.Armaan asked her to relax and Bharti looked at him and smiled. The principal announced Bharti and Armaan as the winning couple. Bharti was shocked and much more surprised and hugged Armaan intimately and kissed Armaan's cheek. She practically jumped with excitement and realized what she just did. She turned to face Armaan who just smiled and Bharti apologized to Armaan who told her to relax. Payal and Jiya were noticing them at either end. While Jiya was all so excited for both Armaan and Bharti, Payal was looking a bit more disturbed.

Soon, Lolo, the earlier Homecoming Queen was told to crown Bharti and Armaan. Bharti simply couldn't contain her excitement and just smiled at Lolo as she crowned them and wished them congratulations. Alisha and Sanjana took several pics of Armaan and Bharti and so did Jiya to capture the perfect moments. Bharti congratulated Armaan and thanked him for making this day and night extremely special for her and Armaan thanked her for without her irritating pleas, he wouldn't even have thought of entering this competition at the last minute.Bharti excused herself to talk to Sanjana and Alisha while Jiya went to talk to Armaan.

Jiya:Kya baat hai Armu..Homecoming King and all aur woh bhi pehle hi party mein...

Armaan:Stop pulling my leg Jiya...anyways shall we go??

Jiya:Hey you stay here...go back with Bharti....

Armaan:Aur tum??

Jiya:I'm heading back home to watch my favourite show...

Armaan:Oh yeah how can I forget....You can never miss your shows,na??

Jiya:Yes Armaan....Already life thoda si boring chal rahi hain..kam se kam itni college romance-based shows ke sahare main thodi khwaab dekh paaongi...

Armaan:Whatever Jiya...ok fine..I'll meet yuo tomorrow at MU...

Jiya:Okies Homecoming King....see ya..Oh yes tell Bharti that I've left,k??

Armaan:Yeah ok..sambhal kar jaana...

Jiya:Yes Armu stop being my mum..I've only given that right either to Sergeant or Sudha aunty....

Armaan:Ok ok bye...

Jiya:Bye...

Bharti went to meet Armaan and asked him if they can go for Alisha and Sanjana are in the mood of partying and Payal thought of giving them a lift too.Armaan agreed and they left with Payal.

Edited by jassie_17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Jassie,

First of all thanks for updating. It is very sweet of you that you are still updating your FF inspite of the fact that you lost your thumbdrive.🤗
I feel sorry for it. I think soon you will get back your data.😊

Really without the update it seemed that it is weeke end so no daily soap 😆

And as for your latest update it is really sweet. Loved that ArBi won.😃
But why Payal is worried?😕

Do continue soon

Kaninika




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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Hey Jessie!
Great part! So sweet when ArBi danced together and Bharti giving Armaan a peck on his cheeks! 😳
Am sorry about your thumbdrive, hope you find it soon yea!😃
Trust me i know what it feels like when you lose it esp when it's filled with so much information inside! Happened to me once! 😭
Hahah ok that aside, i'm also wondering why Payal is not happy.. 😕
Take your time for the next update cos it must be difficult to recall what you've written.
Love your FF as always!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

~Jab Lurve Hua Part 19~

Jiya:Yes Armu stop being my mum..I've only given that right either to Sergeant or Sudha aunty....

Armaan:Ok ok bye...

Jiya:Bye...

Bharti went to meet Armaan and asked him if they can go for Alisha and Sanjana are in the mood of partying and Payal thought of giving them a lift too.Armaan agreed and they left with Payal.

Payal was driving while Bharti sat in front and Armaan was seated at the back. It was pretty much silent and Bharti had to break the silence by switching on some songs on Payal's stereo system.

Bharti:Arre yaar..tumne phir se apne gaane badal di???

Payal:Yeah Bharti..What do you think...

Bharti:Great songs by the way...

Payal:Well I am always searching for some great romantic numbers...Waise Armaan I hope you aren't getting bored by us....Waise great dance today!!

Bharti:I was just telling him about it and he tells me he's a private person and he doesn't prefer shhowcasing his talents to just anyone...

Payal:So Armaan, Bharti's special to you,huh??

Armaan:Payal it's nothing of the sort..I thought of just making the last year at her uni special for her..that's all...

Payal:icic....

Bharti:Waise thanks a lot Armaan...And i hope I fulfilled my promise to you that you'll never forget this night....

Armaan:Definitely Bharti..It is an extraordinary night for me..Thanks a lot!!

Bharti:Enough of the Thank-you's...Payal always says that there shouldn't be any thanks or sorry in friendship...

Payal:Not only me but quite a lot of people say that....Waise Armaan Bharti tends to do a lot of things when she gets excited....

Armaan:Yeah..I saw that today....

Payal:Well that's her...Thodi si paagal hai...

Armaan:Lollzz...

Bharti:Oh hello..what is the problem with you two.....

Payal:Lo aapki ghar pohanch gayi....

Bharti:Come in Payal....let's pop something and you can go home...

Payal:Bhaskar must be waiting yaar....

Bharti:Arre yaar just for a while, I'll call him and let him know,happy???

Payal:Ok fine...

Armaan:Maa will be happy to see you too Payal,come!!

Payal:Sure..come...

Payal parked her car aside and went in with Bharti and Armaan.Sudha opened the door to see them and Sudha welcomed Payal inside.

Bharti:Mom be pleased to meet the Homecoming King..

Sudha:Bharti, you've got to be kidding me!!

Bharti:No Mom...

Jiya:Yes Sudha aunty...Bharti's not lying...

Armaan:Jiya,tum??

Jiya:Yes Armu any probs with that???

Armaan:But you said you were going back home...

Jiya:Well I was missing Sudha aunty's food and since your house has an awesome television set too, so I thought why not drop by here,have food and watch my show at the same time???

Armaan:How very smart Jiya....

Jiya:Thank you thank you...

Sudha:Waise food's ready..Payal, you too join us...

Payal:Thanks Aunty but actually Bhaskar must be waiting for you..I must get going...

Sudha:Ok, at least have a drink..I'll get you something...

Bharti:Mom I'll go and get changed..

Payal went to the balcony and was just staring at the sky, trying to recollect what had happened today.She kept thinking of how Bharti kissed Armaan and she wondered if there's anything serious. She knew that Bharti has no such feelings for Armaan and that's for sure but she isn't sure of Armaan and what's hidden. Payal perceived Armaan to be someone who isn't transparent.She was murmuring to herself and all of a sudden someone tapped on her shoulders and she was startled.

Armaan:Hey what happened???Are you ok??

Payal:Oh God Armaan you just scared the hell out of me...

Armaan:Oops I'm really sorry Payal...

Payal:It's ok..(smiled) Thanks for the juice..You mom's really sweet...Bharti always praises her...

Armaan:Actually Maa liked her at first sight and on the first day itself both of them became great friends too...

Payal:Icic...she's pretty much lucky as far as in-laws are concerned....Well..

Armaan:You wanted to ask me something??

Payal:How did you know??

Armaan:No I just took a wild guess...

Payal:Well Armaan don't mistake me or anything..I'm Bharti's best friend after her first best friend,Radhika....Actually I'm quite the overprotective type and she always hates me for that...Trying to be a mum for her and all..She considers me the only family apart from Bhaskar...Well,..erm...

Armaan:Payal just relax...Just ask me what you want to ask..Don't hesitate...

Payal:Are you in love with Bharti??Dekho sach sach batado mujhe...

Armaan:Payal,why this question all of a sudden??

Payal:I don't know..Just wanted to know....

Armaan:Okay Payal...She's my good friend and that's it...I mean I'm getting used to her antic behaviour..hehe..She's just my good friend and she's so right...She never gives her friends any opportunity to feel bad that they are friends with her....She's really sweet!!!

Payal:So I can rest assured that both of you are just friends,na??

Armaan:Yea Payal...You can trust me!!!

Payal:Good..but if you have any such feelings please let me know, will you??

Armaan:Payal do you feel worried for Bharti??

Payal:Very much..for she's the only best girl I ever have with me...The only true friend I ever have and if anything happens to her I practically can't survive...She's that close to me!!

Armaan:No worries Payal...She's safe here..

Bharti:Kya baatein chal rahi hai???

Armaan:Kuch nahin Bharti...You guys keep talking,k??

Bharti:Payal...i think it must be Bhaskar calling...

Payal:Oh shux..Dekha issi liye kaha tha..I'll leave or else he'll fry me at home...

Bharti:Hahahaha..theekh hai...juice toh khatam karo....

Payal:Haan haan ook ok bye..Bye Aunty....Bye Jiya,Bye Armaan....

Bharti:Bye..Sambhal kar jaana....Pagal ladki!!

Edited by jassie_17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Dear Jassie,

First of all thanks for updating. It is very sweet of you that you are still updating your FF inspite of the fact that you lost your thumbdrive.🤗
I feel sorry for it. I think soon you will get back your data.😊

Really without the update it seemed that it is weeke end so no daily soap 😆

And as for your latest update it is really sweet. Loved that ArBi won.😃
But why Payal is worried?😕

Do continue soon

Kaninika




Thanks sweetie..You really know how to make me feel better!!!!
And it's real sweet of you to view this as a daily soap which gets aired on IF for 7 days a week
Actually now I'm adding much more than what I wrote..it's quite different... guess i 'm gonna work things out...
Keep reading!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Hey Jessie!

Great part! So sweet when ArBi danced together and Bharti giving Armaan a peck on his cheeks! 😳
Am sorry about your thumbdrive, hope you find it soon yea!😃
Trust me i know what it feels like when you lose it esp when it's filled with so much information inside! Happened to me once! 😭
Hahah ok that aside, i'm also wondering why Payal is not happy.. 😕
Take your time for the next update cos it must be difficult to recall what you've written.
Love your FF as always!:)

I'm glad that you liked it dear......I hope I made justice to your expectations!!!
Thanks dear for the concern..I so need to find it.....So much info,pics are all stored in it....I just want it back at any cost....God pls help me!!!!
Thanks once again!!!
Keep reading!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol, I loved to know that I made you feel better.😊
wow not one but two episodes a day😃
You are adding more? that's great, so it is a positive part on our side.lol
So Payal is worried bacause she thinks Armaan is falling for Bharti? But what is the problem with that? I think I will get my ans very soon😊

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
jassie....🤗 girl..u made my day..errr nite..(india time) ....what rocking epis yaar..!! luvd it..!! i knew it...my Armu wuld sweep Bharti off her feet wit his super smooth Salsa moves...
n boy...she kissed Armu....OMG...i just fainted ..reading that....🤪luv u for this part...jassie...!! ❤️
well payal being worried abt Armus intentions had me a bit annoyed...but then i read ur next part and i understood that it was her concern for her buddy....n i luv payal for that..!! sweetest girl in the world..!!
gosh..jassie..i cant wait for the next part...the seed of luv is surely sprouting in Armus heart....yahooooooooo!! 🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
Hey Jassie.😊
I was just catching up with the parts, thanks for the updates. It's so sweet of you to work so hard to keep us happy. So sorry you can't find your work, I do hope you find your thumbdrive soon! It's such a coincidence, I was just wondering what I'd do if I lost all the data I have already written from my FF...so sad that it's actually happened to you, but I'm sure you'll find it. Don't stress and like Blueberry said, take your time. It must be difficult and a bit frustrating to have to recall and write it again. But I see that you are remembering and adding even more in...so lucky us! Loving the parts. And oh my heart Jassie! 😳I love that this Armaan too, like the one in 'tum se hi', will never let her fall.....😳Payal's concern is so sweet and I'm sure Armaan will always keep her happy and safe.😍 Thanks again for the hard work.😛
Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago

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