MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Loved yaar
Isharon hi isharon mein baatein hoti hai Mayur ki😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi annu iots was great i loved it really diff from normal stories its really awsome 4 me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5

(song end ho chuka hai)

M : tumne kabhi batya nhi.. K tum itna achcha gaati ho
N : tumne kabhi pucha hi nhi....aur waise tumne bhi nhi bataya k tumhe piano thik se bajane nhi aata....
M : Maine kab kaha mujhe piano bajane aata hai.. wo to aise hi...thoda bahut baja leta hu...
N : Main bhi fir aise hi thoda bahut gaa leti hu...
M : agar yeh thoda bahut hai.. to tum zyada kise kehti ho...😡 😡
(mayur ki yeh behas sajan music room k bahar kahde ho kar dekh rhe hote hai.. tab dono music room me enter karte hai)
S : kya yaar tum dono ek dusre ki tariff bhi dhang se nhi kar sakte..isme bhi jhagda karna start kar dia
G : haan.. atleast tariff se tarike se kiya karo...bina jhagde....
(tabhi samrat ka phone ring karta hai.. phone sun ne k baad)
S to M : ho gya kaam.. ab pls tu mana mat karna
M : No way.. Main tere sath nhi aa rha hu.. kuch bhi kar le
S : fir main kis k sath jaunga
M : tu iss JKR ko le ja... ya fir gunjan ko le jaa
S : jab tu nhi jaa rha to yeh to bilkul hi nhi jayenge... aur iss JKR k sath main nhi jaunga....(interruped by nupur)
N : ek min.. yeh ho kya rha hai... aur kaun kaha jaa rha hai.. aur tum log JKR keh keh kar bich me mujhe kyun le kar aa rhe ho...?????? by god koi mujhe batayega ye ho kya rha hai 😡 😡
G : wo nupur... samrat ko kahi jaana hai aur wo mayank ko lekar jaana chahta hai...
S :😲 😲 chismish... tumhe kaise pta.... Yeh baat to mayank ko mere bich me thi...
G to herself : Oh shit.. Mujhe apni mind reading powers use nhi karni chahiye thi.. agar ki thi to inhe batana nhi chahiye tha k inke mind me kya chal rha hai.. kya jawab du.....??????? mujhe hi sambhalna hoga
M to G : Haan gunjan... yeh kuch ajeeb hai.. tumhe kaise pta....😲 😲
G to S, M : wo tum logo ki baato se pta chala.. samrat tum hi to keh rhe the.. k pls chalo.. aur mayank tum hi to mana kar rhe the.. bas thoda sa dimag use kiya....
N : (now lots of anger) : ho gye swal jawab???😡 😡 ab to batao ho kya rha hai...
S : wo JKR baat aisi hai k mere pass passes hai sonu nigam k concert k.. aur main mayank ko keh rha hu wahaan chalne ko.. aur ye mana kar rha hai.....jabki sonu nigam iska bhi fav. hai
M : mera sonu nigam fav. nhi hai... uski awaz kafi achchi hai.. aur wo meri fav. hai.. aur concert me kuch khas hota nhi hai.. log bewakuffo ki tarah chilate rehte hai.. aur kai baar to logo ko khud pta nhi hota k wo wahaan kis liye aaye hai... iss se behatar hai main sonu nigam ko apne ghar pr hi sun lu...
G to N (with lots of excitement) : Nupur ????? sonu nigam ka concert.....
G to S : wow samrat.. achchi baat hai...
G to M : mayank kya problem hai tumhe jaane me ????? huh..... har kisi ko mauke nhi milte....
N to G : Haan meri jaan... sonu nigam ka concert.....
N to S : koi zaruri hai kya tumhare sath mayank hi jaye.. tumhe pta hai log kya kahenge.. tum dono jo sath me rehte ho...😆 😆 main tumhari problem solve kar sakti hu
S to N : gunjan kabse tumhari jaan ho gyi.... aur agar tum ye soch rhi ho k main tumhare sath jaunga to bhul jao main nhi jaunga... tab bhi tum aur chismish chale jaana... tumhare sath to main bilkul nhi jaunga.. bol bol k dimag kha jaogi mera............
N to S : mujhe bhi tumhare sath jane me interest nhi hai.. aur mayank tumhare sath jaana nhi chahta.. so simple si baat hai gunjan ko le jao.. usse sonu nigam ko ek baar pass se dekhne ka bada mann hai... tumhari problem bhi solve.. aur mayank ko bhi zabardasti tumhare sath nhi jaana padega.. aur waise bhi syad tumne notice nhi kiya...k tumne aur gunjan aise dress up ho kar aaye ho jaise kahi sath me jaana hai...
(sajan apni dress pr ek bar nazar marte hai.. fir ek dusre ki dress pr.. then all are surprised..)
G : 😲 yeh baat humne to note nhi ki.. kya baat hai.. inn baato pr bada gaur kiya jaa rha hai.....
S : Haan yeh to sahi hai.. pr iss JKR ki nazar hum pr hai khud pr nhi...
N : matlab???????
S : matlab ye k khud ko aur mayank ko dekho.. pehle to music room me sath me song gaana.. wow how romantic... hume to pta hii nhi chalta k nupur bhi gaa sakti hai.. aur apni aur mayank ki dress pr gaur karo.. jaise ek dusre se discussed karke dress daal kar aaye ho.... Perfect matching..........
M : romantic???????😲 😲 huh
N : romatic aur main....... tumhara dimag thik nhi hai....
S : aji yeh dil ki baate hai dimag ka koi kaam nhi hai....
M : waise samrat baat to sahi hai tumhari... NUpur ek baar dekho to lag rha hai k tum mujhe impress karne k liye aise dress up hoke aayi ho
N :by god mayank....... tumhara sach me dimag kharab hai.. mere itne bure din nhi aaye hai k tumko impress karu.... (interrupted by mayank)
M : to kise impress karogi... koi rajkumar aayega kya??????
N : mujhe kisi ko impress karne ka koi mud nhi hai... aur main tumhari help kar rhi thi mayank... aur tum mere sath hi time pass kar rhe ho... thik hai to jao samrat k sath concert me.....
S : oh shit.... concert to bhul hi gye the.. to mere sath kaun chalega concert me ye abhi tak tay nhi hua hai
M : ho chuka.... gunjan jayegi.... main kuch bhi kar lunga.. uss bhid me nhi jaunga
G to N : main kaise jaa sakti hu.....
S : pairo se... kaho to tumhe utha kar le jau... pr kya karu agar tum bhari huyi to meri to kamar gyi ...😆 😆
N to G : tu chal mere sath......
N to S, M : Hum 2 min me aate hai... fir gunjan pakka chalegi
(Nupur aur gunjan locker room me jaate hai)
N : dekh gunjan.. yahi mauka hai pta karne ka k samrat k pass kali saktiya hai ya fir wo unn me se ek hai jinhe dhudne k liye hume bheja gya hai
G : Pr nupur.. agar wo kali shaktiyo me se ek hua aur usne hume pechan lia to ye hamari haar ho sakti hai...
N : dekh gunjan.. risk lena zaruri hai... main mayank ko dekhti hu k wo hum se ek hai ya wo kali shakti ka gulam hai...
G : haan waise tum ye bhi sahi keh rhi ho... hume pancho ko jald se jald ek sath ho kar kali saktiyo se takker leni hogi
N : haan ye zaruri hai.. tabhi keh rhi hu.. samrat k sath jao.. aur main mayank k sath kahi bahar jati hu... ghar usse bula nhi sakte.. to bahar hi kahi jaana hoga.. unke sath rahenge tab hi pta chalega.. k wo log aakhir cheez kya hai.. to done tum samrat k sath jaa rhi ho
G : haan thik hai.. pr pta nhi wo yeh sab galat naa samjh le
N : wo kabhi kisi cheez ko sahi samjhta hai kya.... bas tum uske saamne apni mind reading powers use mat karna... kahi pakdi naa jaana
G : haan aaj to galti ho gyi aage se dhayan rakhungi
N : ok chalo unhe batate hai
(gunjan aur nupur samrat aur mayank ko pass jate hai aur batate hai k gunjan samrat k sath jaane ko razi hai..Samrat aur gunjan concert me jaane ko lekar apna shedule banate hai Idhar Nupur mayank se puchti hai k wo kya karega to wo padhne ko keh deta hai.. jis se nupur ka plan fail ho jata hai. Sham ko samrat gunjan ko uske ghar k bahar se hi pick kar leta hai... achanak usse yaad aata hai k wo ghar ki chabhi sath le aaya hai. kyunki mayank bahar gya tha)
S (phone pr) : hello........
M : haan samrat bolo kya hua
S : dekh bhai gussa mat hona.... main galti se chabi le aaya hu...
M : tu kab sudheraga 😡 😡 main ab kya karu... ghar k darwaje pr tera wait karu...
S : uss se koi fyada nhi hai.. main to chismish k sath hu... aur main concert khatam hone k baad hi ghar aaunga
M : 😡 😡 tu aa hi kyun rha hai koi zarurat nhi hai aane ki... pr ye to bta de main kya karu
S : sab kuch main bataunga kya.. are nupur ghar me akeli hai gunjan mere sath hai.. to uss JKR ka sath dene wahaan pahuch jaa..
M : haan mere pass koi aur option bhi nhi hai. Main jaata hu.. Bye
S : Bye bye
G (thinking) : agar mayank ghar gya to........ gadbad ho sakti hai.. main nupur ko kaise inform karu... pr inform karke bhi kya fyada. uss se mayank nhi rukne wala.... chalo jo hoga dekha jayega....

TO BE CONT

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Lovely update Annu.
it was toooooooooo gooooooooood.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey awesome update loved it
thanks for pm plz update soon
happy new year
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

superb part dear.

loved it.Continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update annu thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesum
Mayur ki nok jhok achi thi
Sajan ka convo bhi acha tha
Aur dono concert me jaa rahe hai sath mein lets c waha bhi kya hoga
Mayu will go to hom is awesum
Lest c dono ghar me litni thod phod karte hai😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was very nice and thanx for the pm
Posted: 15 years ago
#60
awesome part
loved it, continue soon

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