MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28

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Note : Iss FF me sirf love story nhi hai.. I want to do something really different so maine isme main charcters ko super natural powers di hai. Hope k ye idea psnd aayega. Pls comment k yeh FF aapko kaisi lagi

PART 1

Nupur : Padhne me intelligent hai.. bahut hi responisible hai. Usse pta hai k kya karna hai aur kya nhi. Agar usse koi cheez psnd nhi hai to wo hai pyar... Nafrat hai usse pyar se... Waise agar koi khud k ya duniya k pyar k liye bole to nupur ko koi fark nhi padta. Pr agar koi yeh keh de k nupur ko pyar hoga.. to uska gussa satve aasman pr hota hai...Waise nupur itne gusse wali bhi nhi hai..

Gunjan : Nupur ki causin hai. Nupur k sath hi rehti hai. fun loving hai. Pr usse nupur ka pura khayal rehta hai.. usse pta hai k nupur ko gussa kab aata hai, aur uska gussa kaise shant kiya jaa sakta hai. Uske parents out of india rehte hai. Ek nupur hi wajah hai jiski wajah se gunjan india me hai..

Mayank : Also a intelligent boy.. college ki kafi ladkiya in pr fida hai.. Inhe waise to girls me koi khas interest nhi hai.. pr yeh wait kar rhe hai apni dream girl ka.. JO bilkul inke sapno jaisi hai.. aur usme yeh compromise nhi karna chahte.. Inki family me bhi koi nhi hai..

Samrat : yeh mayank ka best friend hai. aur mayank aur yeh sath me hi rehte hai.. In pr bhi as usual kafi ladkiya fida tha... pr yeh mayank se thode se hat ke hai.. inhone kabhi apni dream girl k bare me socha hi nhi. isliye inhe jab bhi flirt karne ka mauka milta hai chodte nhi hai...

COLLEGE KA 1ST DAY
(Nupur aur gunjan college pahuchti hai, gunjan ka dupatta kahi fas jaata hai, aur nupur dyan nhi deti aur nupur aage badh jaati hai aur gunjan reh jaati hai piche. Nupur jaise hi college ground me enter karti hai usse seniors ragging k liye kehte hai)

Se : so tum nyi ho college me. to ragging to hamara haq banta hai
N : hmm. to bolo kya karna hai. Mujhe ragging naam se bilkul darr nhi lagta.
Se : Oh over confidence. Hmm. Waise college me ragging allowed nhi hai.. kahi yeh over confidence iss wajah se to nhi hai
N : jab allowed nhi hai. to kyun kar rhe ho.
Se : hamari bhi huyi thi.. isliye ab hum bhi lenge
N : haan to bolo kya karna hai
Se : iss gate se jo bhi 1st boy aayega usse I Love you bolna hai tumhe. aur haan usse yeh nhi batana hai k tumhari ragging hai
N (with lots of anger) : yeh main kabhi nhi karungi. Pyar aur mera dur dur se koi lena dena nhi hai. Main jhut me bhi kabhi kisi ko pyar nhi karungi...😡 Bhul jao.
Se : yeh to tumhe krna hi padega
N : yeh mat bhulo k college me ragging allowed nhi hai.. Main shikayat bhi kar sakti hu
Se : darr gyi.. jao shikayat kar do... kaun manega
N : ek main naa to darti hu. aur dusra bhi shikayat lagane me koi interest nhi hai...
Se : hum kaise maan le tumhe darr nhi lagta...
N : jo main karne wali hu wo syad hi tum log kar pao
(nupur apne bag se cutter nikalti hai & aur apni hathegi pr chala deti hai)
N : so mante ho na k main nhi darti
Se : tumhe nhi lagta k tumhe ilaaz ki zarurat hai
(sare seniors chale jaate hai, & mayank enters.. wo nupur k hatho se khud nikalta hua dekta hai aur seniors ko jate huye bhi)
M : hey.. tumhara to kafi blood nikal rha hai..
N : haan but it's ok.. Main thik hu.. I will manage
M : ruko.. ek min... samrat samrat...
(samrat aur gunjan enter karte hai)
M : tum kaha piche reh gye the
G : wo mera duppatta fas gya tha nikal hi nhi rha tha.. Oh no.. not again nupur.. fir se...
N (with a cute face) : haan fir se...
S : yeh fir se ka kya chakker hai
G : wo fir kabhi batayenge.. pehle college me koi dispensary hai kya..
M : haan chalo pehle wahi chalte hai...
(charo dispensary jaate hai.. jahaan mayank aur samrat nupur aur gunjan ko chod kar class me chale jaate hai)
IN THE CLASS ROOM
M : kitni ajeeb ladki hai naa.. hath cut ho gya fir bhi
S : haan. aur uske sath jo thi.. wo to aise bol rhi thi jaise wo roz roz hath cut karti hogi...
M : waise uska naam kya tha.. tumne to pucha hi hoga
S : tumne mauka kahaan dia.. pehle uska dupatta nikal rha tha fir tumne awaz lga di.. to mauka hi nhi mila. tumne to pucha hi hoga..
M : Nhi.. actual me uske sath se kuch zyada hi blood nikal rha tha to mauka nhi mila..Pta nhi kaun si class me hongi..
S : hai to issi college me.. kisi din to takra hi jayegi...
M : kisi din nhi abhi.. wo dekh dono hi hamari class me hai...
(gunjan aur nupur class me aate hai aur dekhte hai.. class me kahi bhi 2 bench ek sath khali nhi hai.. aur mayank aur samrat aage piche k benches pr baithe hai.. aur unke sath wale benches khali hai)
G : ab kya kare.. yahaan ek sath kaise baithenge
N : baithenge baithenge.. wo dekh.. jo hume dispensary lekar gye the..unke sath wale benches.. sath nhi aage piche hi sahi
G : chal thik hai.. waise bhi unka thanx to banta hi hai...
(nupur aur gunjan unke pass pahuchte hai.. Nupur mayank k sath wali seat pr aur gunjan samrat k sath wali seat pr baith ti hai)
S (thinking) : wo 2-2 new girls class me aur ek to mere sath baithi hai.. aur dusri ho na ho mayank ko impress karne ki koshish zarur karegi aur yeh mujhe.. aaj ek aur new chapter...mazaa aayega
N to M : thanx..
M : kisliye..
N : wo abhi tak jitni bhi help ki isliye...
M : oh ho.. it's ok...
N : main nupur.. aur aapka naam kya hai
(samrat aaye haye.. nupur... ab to yeh start ho gyi dekhte hai mayank kya karta hai.. kab tak ladkiyo se bachta hai )
M : main mayank... aur sab mujhe mayank hi kehte hai... tum bhi keh sakti ho..
N : mujhe aapse ek favour chahiye thi
S (thinking) : pakka kahegi.. aap mere sath coffee pine chalenge.. ya aap meri studies me help karenge...
AT THE SAME MOMENT GUNJAN TO SAMRAT
G : thanx...
S (surprisingly) : mujhe kis khushi me thanx hai..
G : wo hamari itni help karne k liye..
s : wo to samrat sabki help karta hai...
G : oh ho.. to aapka naam samrat hai
S : G mera naam samrat hai.. log mujhe sammy bhi bulate hai.. tumhari jo marzi aaye bula sakti ho.. Waise tumhara naam kya hai..
G : Gunjan...
S (thinking) wow naam to pta chala..
G : kya aap ek kaam karenge..
S : ji keh kar to dekhiye...
G : wo actual me main aur meri sister aage piche baithe hai, ya to aap meri causin ki seat pr chale jaaye ya apne friend ko yahaan baithne ko bol de.. taki hum dono causion sath me baith sake
S : Kya???????
G : haan aapko kya laga
(same baat nupur mayank ko bolti hai.. mayank apni seat se uth ta hai aur sammy apni.. again same problem.. sammy aage wali seat pr aur mayank piche wali seat pr.. fir nupur aur gunjan seat change karte hai, tab bhi aisa hi hota hai..then )
N : ek min.. yeh kya ho rha hai.. Gunjan tum yahaan aao. aur mayank aap pls wahaan chale jao..
M & G : ok
(then jaisa wo log chahte the waisi seats arrange jati hai aur wo baith jate hai)
N : thanx.. for exchanging the seat..
(tabhi class me teacher aa jate hai)
S to M : pehli baar aisa hua hai k class me 2-2 new girls aayi aur kisi ne bhi hume notice nhi kiya.. aur mere sath to class ki girls baithne ko tarasti hai..aur in logo ne tujhe mere sath bitha dia
M : koi baat nhi.. tu itna chid kyun rha hai.. kabhi kabhi apne bhai logo ko bhi apne sath baithne ka mauka dia hai.. hamesha behano k sath hi baitha rehta hai..😆😆
S : very funny.. but it's not funny. Yaar yeh to had ho gyi.. aisa nhi chalega...
M : fir aisa chala jaisa tu chalana chahta hai..
TO BE CONT...

PART 2 - PG 3
PART 3 - PG 5
PART 4 - PG 7
PART 5 - PG 9
PART 6 - PG 10
PART 7 - PG 12
PART 8 - PG 14
PART 9 - PG 15
PART 10 - PG 17
PART 11 - PG 18
PART 12 - PG 20
PART 13 - PG 22
PART 14 - PG 23
PART 15 - PG 25
PART 16 - PG 28
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Anu di!!!
xelent start!!!
relly luv it ol!!!
pls do cont soon...
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hi annu,

Really nice start.

here Nups totally opposite of her real char.

And I liked it.

Loved the whole part a lottttt.

Plz continue soon.

Thanx 4 ur pm

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Heyyy anu
Ur starting was really good
Plzzzz continue soon
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wowwww..............rockin start yaar.....plzzzzz continue sooooooooon
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IT WAS AWESOME.................
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hey nice start dear
i loved it🤗
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aww...loved the first part..!!
i'm def up for reading more..!
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