MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
lovely update
to ab kuch or interesting hone wala hein
soon update ok
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part 6

(mayank k pass aur koi option nhi hota wo nupur k ghar chala jaata hai pr raste me)

M (thinking) : Iss JKR ne mujhe bahut pareshan kiya hai..ab iski baari hai, aaj iske ghar main darwaje se nhi khidki se jaunga.. aur iss JKR ko dikha dunga.. k real ki JKR nhi hai, aur waise bhi ye ghar pr akeli hai to pakka daregi hi.... aur agar nhi daregi to main dara dunga..... Aaj ayega asli mazaa.....hu ha ha ha...... Jhasi Ki Rani Nupur KUmari... aaj tumhe mujh se kaun bachaega.....

(as mayank ka plan hota hai nupur ko darane ka to woh door ki jagah khidki se jaata hai.. aur woh dekhta hai k nupur book padh rhi hai..aur wo iss kadar book me khoi huyi hai jaise bahut hi kuch interesting mila hai usse padhne ko.....mayank uss whqt nupur ko dekhta hai aur dekhta hi reh jata hai... woh feel karta hai.. k zindagi yahi ruk jaye aur lamha kabhi khatam naa ho wo sari zindagi aise hi nupur ko dekhte rahe)

M to Himself : dude, tu yeh kya soch rha hai..mat bhul wo JKR hai, aur teri uski waise bhi nhi banti..hum sirf jhagda hi kar sakte hai.. aur waise bhi uski wajah se tu kitni baar fasa hai... tu yahaan usse darane aaya tha.. yeh ulti sidhi baatein mat soch....aur waise bhi tu aur woh........ kabhi nhi ho sakta..........

(tabhi nupur mayank ki shadow dekhti hai)
N : Kaun.... kaun hai wahaan??????
M to himself : dekh lia usne??? agar usse darna hai to bhag yahaan se
(mayank wahaan se chala jaata hai,.. Nupur wahaan jaa kar dekti hai koi nhi dikhta usse)
N to herself : koi nhi hai... waise bhi yahaan to koi bhi aise hi nhi aa sakta.... main bhi naa..... achchi khasi book padh rhi thi.. uth kar aa gyi..ab coffee bana hi leti hu
(mayank ghum kar studies room me pahuch jaata hai, aur wo wahi book utha kar dekta hai jo nupur pehle padh rhi thi.....Mayank book ka naam padhta hai)

M to himself : Ramayan??? 😲 😲 dekhu to kaun sa part padh rhi thi.nupur.... Sita Ram Vivah .....😲 😲. Nupur yeh sab bhi padhti hai... aisa lagta to nhi hai...pr kuch bhi ho skta hai.....waise ramayan to mujhe bhi psnd hai....

(mayank ramayank ki ek chopai padna start karta hai... wo abhi ek line hi padh pata hai tabhi nupur room me aa jati hai... aur wo second line bina dekhe bol kar complete kar deti hai... Mayank surprised ho jata hai aur sochta hai k nupur ko ramayan yaad hai syad)
M to himself : Isse to tu darane aaya tha...isne to tujhe dara dia
M : Hi nupur...
N : Hi mayank..... pr pehle tum yeh btao tum mere ghar me kya kar rhe ho
M : tumse milne aaya tha.....
N : achcha to mujhe to pta hi nhi tum kab aaye.... aur darwaja under se lock tha... aur maine to door open bhi nhi kiya...... Tumhare iraade kya hai
M : kyun???? Mere irado se tumhe koi dar hai kya???????
(mayank one step forward)
N : tumse main nhi darne wali.... wo dusri ladkiya hongi jo tumse darti hongi
(Nupur one step backward)
M : achcha... to tumhare chehre ka rang kyun uda hua hai (again mayank one step forward)
N : wo achanak tumhe yahaan dekh kar (again nupur one step backward)
M : to matlab tum darr gyi thi...(mayank one step forward)
N : nhi....yeh mera ghar hai main kyun darungi (again nupur ek step piche hoti hai but piche pillar hota hai..mayank aur nupur ek dusre k bahut close hote hai, there is eyelock)
M : fir bhi tum dar gyi thi k main tumhare ghar kis irade se aaya hu..kahi tumhe aisa to nhi lga k main tumse .......(mayank jaan bhujh kar rukh jaata hai.)
N : tum mujhe se kya....??????
M : main tumse kuch kehne aaya hu.....
N : kya??????
M : k main tumhe yahaan darane aaya tha pr tumne mujhe pehle hi dekh lia.. my bad luck...(eyelock broken)
N ; Dara lia... tum bhi naa mayank.... kuch bhi sochte ho.... mujhe darana itna aasaan nhi hai....
M : haan wo to hai.. actual me main khidki se aaya tha...
N : ok to wo tum the.. mujhe lga koi hai....
M : haan.. pr tumhe kya puri ramayan yaad hai kya
N : nhi to... pr mujhe sita ram vivah bahut psnd hai... isliye kai baar padha hai aur wo kafi had tak yaad hai mujhe
M : hmm tabhi tumne bina dekhe line complete kar li
N : haan... actual me mujhe sita ram vivah bahut zyada achcha lagta hai. k ram ji ne kaise itne sare rajao k hote huye bhi... apne aap ko proove kar dia k wo hi sab se best hai sita ji k liye... unse best koi ho hi nhi sakta
M : iss tarah to maine kabhi socha hi nhi
N : yahi to fark hai tumhari aur meri soch me.....
(tabhi mausam kharab ho jata hai... mayank room ki khidki band karne lagta hai tabhi...)
N : mayank rehne do.... itni achchi hawa chal rhi hai....
M : achchi hawa... nupur tufan aane wala hai
N : nhi aayega... dekh lena
(nupur khidki k pass jaake khadi ho jati hai.. aur mayank studies room ki books dekhne lagta hai... pr uski nazar baar baar nupur pr jaa rhi hai.. aur jab bhi uski nazar nupur pr jaati hai wahi ruk jaati hai....)

another side sajan
G (thinking) : hey bhagwan kuch bhi ho jaye.. hum aaj concert me naa jaye... kuch bhi gadbad karo....pls
(bhagwan gunjan ki sun bhi lete hai pehle samrat ki car kharab ho jati hai fir barish ho jati hai)

AT Nupur's home

Tum Aay To Hawaoon Mein, Aik Nasha Hein
Tum Aay To Fizaao Mein, Rang Sa Hein
Yeah Rang Sarah Hein, Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya

(mayank nupur k ghar books dekhne ki koshish kar rha hai pr uski nazar baar baar nupur pr ruk jaati hai.... aur nupur window se bahar ki taraf dekh rhi hai.. aur hawa chalne ki wajah se uske baal bhi udd rhe hai.... jise wo baar baar apne kanno ki piche laga rhi hai.. pr uske chehre pr iss baat ko lekar zara bhi gussa nhi hai)

Sajan road pr
Female Voice
Tum Aay To Hawaoon Mein, Aik Nasha Hein
Tum Aay To Fizaao Mein, Rang Sa Hein
Yeah Rang Sarah Hein, Bas Tumhare
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
(car kharab ho gyi hai aur barish bhi start ho chuki hai.. iss se gujan thodi si pareshan ho jati hai...pr samrat car se bahar nikal kar bachcho k sath khelne lagta hai wo gunjan ko bhi kehta hai, pr gunjan barish me bhigne se mana kar deti hai... to samrat bachcho k satha khelne lagta hai.. & aur gunjan ko ek ajeeb si feeling hone lagti hai.. k samrat kitna achcha hai wo har pal ko enjoy karna janta hai)

At Nupur home
Male voice
Tum aaye ho to dekh lo
Naya Naya sa Lage Yeh Jahaan
(Mayank feels k usse iss se pehle kabhi bhi ye mausam itna achcha nhi laga wo bhi nupur k pass jakar khada ho jata hai... aur bahar k mausam ko dekhne lagta hai)

Sajan road pr
Female voice
Haseen Haseen Hein Yeah Zameen
Dhula Dhula Sa Hein Yeah Asaman
Tum Ho To Hein Yeah Saman
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
(gunjan feels k wo bhi syad car me akele bore ho rhi hai.. wo bhi car se bahar aa jati hai.. usse bahar dekh samrat bacho k sath train banta hai aur apni train ko gunjan k piche lga deta hai, ab gunjan uss train ka engine hai baki sare dabbe......)

Female voice
Dharak Raha Hein Dil Mera
Ghuki Ghuki Hein Palkya Yeahan
(gunjan imagine k samrat aur wo sadak pr akele hai hai aur dono dance kar rha hai...tabhi samrat uss se ishare me puchta hai hai kya hua to wo sirf smile pass kar deti hai)

Male voice
At Nupur's home
Jo Dil Mein Ho Who Kaha Bhi Do
Ruki Ruki Si Haa Yeah Dastan
Jazbat Manga Zaban
Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya Aur Kya
(mayank bahar ki taraf dekhta hai aur fir wo nupur ki taraf dekhta hai.. nupur abhi bhi bahar hi dekh rhi hai.... usse aisa lagta hai jaise nupur ki aankhon me kehne k liye bahut kuch hai... pr wo khud kuch nhi kehti.... fir usse lagta hai k syad yeh uska wahem hai isliye wo khud ko smile karta hai....aur bahar dekhne lagta hai.....tabhi nupur)

N : mayank.... hume abhi chalna hoga...
M : pr kahaan..
N :Jahan samrat aur gunjan hai
M : wo to concert me hai
N : Nhi... wo concert nhi.. pahuch paye hai... wo jahaan bhi hai... wahaan badi problem hone wali hai...
M : pr aisa kaise ho sakta hai.. smrat ne mujhe kaha k wo log concert me gye hai.. aur tumhe kaise pta ki wahaan koi problem hone wali hai...
N : swal puchne ka time nhi hai abhi chalo
M : Nhi.. jab tak tum mujhe nhi btaogi tumhe kaise pta k woh log problem me fasne wale hai
N : ok... Mere pass future dekhne ki powers hai... aur maine abhi abhi dekha...
M : agar tumhare pass powers hai to tum unka use karo
N : main akele kuch bhi nhi kar sakti... mujhe tumhari zrurat hai
M : main tumhari kya help kar sakta hu
N : tumhare pass bhi powers hai... bas tumhe nhi pta.. wo jo tum log samjhte the k tumne dream dekha aisa kuch nhi hai.. wo sab sach hota tha.. pr wo itni speed me hota tha k tum log usse dream samjh lete the..
M : wait a min.. matlab tumhare sath sath ye powers mere pass bhi hai aur samrat k pass bhi... aur kisi k pass bhi yeh powers hai
N : haan gunjan k pass bhi hai... pr abhi swal nhi........abhi chalo baad me sab kuch achche se btaungi....abhi as a friend hi chalo
M : haan.....pr hume to pta hi nhi hai.. hume jaana kahaan hai.. aur aise mausam me traffic bi milega
N : hamare liye traffic mayane nhi rakhta...bas apni aankhen band karo aur bas yeh socho k jahaan wo dono hai wahaan tumhe pahuchna hai..iske siva kuch mat socho
(Mayank kafi try karta hai pr wo nhi kar pta)
N : abhi tumhare dimag me kafi swal haii.. tum nhi kar paoge.. abhi meri help lo... mera hath pakado..
(Mayank nupur ka hath pakadta hai... aur kuhch hi seconds me wo log wahaan hote hai jahaan gunjan aur samrat hai)

TO BE CONT.......................




PART 7 PG NO. 12



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
I am so sorry... for so much late updation


Hope u all like this part........ pls do comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
1st to comment...great update yaar...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
lovely update.
very nice.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Hi anu
wow very good update.
loved it.
keep updating

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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
great update dear
its realy interesting
so ab 4 powers mil jaen gi
but fifth power kis mei hai?
eagerly waiting 4 next part
update soooooooooon
Posted: 15 years ago
#68
so finally mayank knws!!
anyways great part!
cntinue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
great part loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Hey it was awesum
Mayu is actually feeling sumthg for Nups good
I thk Nups aapna ye bhi future dekh lagi😉
She actually said Mayu abt his powers
But i dnt thk he trusted her
Sajan in trouble how cum yaar
Hop Mayur saves them
Update soon
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